AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 4 - Chapter Eleven To Thirteen

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BeIndependent

@BeIndependent

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#371

another awesome update wid a cliffy end..😭😆😃
do u really love these cliffy ends of ur chapter..😲😆

loved jealous n bossy zoya..😉😳
sehrish 😡 how cheap she is..😡 i hate her..

poor zoya..😭

asad is idiot just as qh wala trusting a friend who is not worthy...😡

so excited to know wht will happen nxt..😉
pls update soon...that to long wala...😉😳
thnks for pm..😊

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Neeluaaro2009

@Neeluaaro2009

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Lovely update , u r awesome writer continue writing plz

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@ToughStuff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Thank You😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha I don't know even Tanveer is cheap😲
yes she will witness !!
Will try to update soon😉

2 days bubble 2 days!!!!
many random thoughts gng in mind!!! may b dis will happen!!! No no dat will happen!!!!!
and finally what will happen??????

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ComeWhatMay

@ComeWhatMay

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#374

awesome update!

but it was cliffy again!😡

& that cheap sehrish😡

what is she upto?

felling bad for zoya & asad too

waiting for next update

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rockstar_16

@rockstar_16

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

i unresed my comment on page 34😉

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tuna_star

@tuna_star

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#376

itni choti update... next time want a big one,and two days i don't know how will i wait...

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome update...👍🏼

Really like it...😉

Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😊

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

Will try to update soon 😉

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: --Radhika--
Awesome chapter Bubble! Sehrish is so evil! 😡😡
I liked how Asad was starting to notice some feelings for Zoya. 😳😳 But then again, Sehrish came and ruined the moment! 🤢
Excited to see what you write next, continue soon! <33

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

haha it will make them realize their love for eachother 😆

Will try to update soon 😉