ASYA FF : ISHAQZAADE - Discontinued (NOTE-PG34) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I will update tonight - My exams are over 🥳
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Originally posted by: fashionprincess


I will update tonight - My exams are over🥳


yes i will get an update today... Woo hoo
congo for ur exam that got over haha
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello QHians!!
My exams got over 2 days ago and I decided to update that night,But after I had typed everything out , I accidentally pressed the refresh button and all my work vanished 😭 ..
Thus frustated, I didn't feel like doing it all over again until today!
Btw, the song I used in the last update was 'Aao Na' from the movie 'Kyon Ho Gaya Na' starring Aishwarya Rai and Vivek Oberai - Though I don't remember the movie's story, I do remember this particular song because I really liked it a lot. Do hear it , its beautiful.
Ok, enough bak-bak, let's start 😆

PART 6
A spark ran through their bodies as they kissed with passion and a fierce urge. Their bodies were pressed on to each other and they could feel each other's heartbeat echoing within. Asad held down Zoya's hand and kissed her , relishing her luscious and soft lips while Zoya , eyes closed , kissed back with equal desire, a sweet tingling sensation running through her nerves.
Zoya felt like she was lost in a world which she had always dreamt of. Suddenly, she could feel Asad's grip tightening on her arm which gave her a lot of pain - Her breath came out in short pants. Asad sensed it and immediately broke the kiss and took his hand off her. He looked at her, her eyes were squeezed shut and felt furious with himself.
Asad: Ye maine kya kiya - aise mai kisi ladki ko kiss kaise kar sakta hoon? Pata nahi, mai baar-baar iss ki taraf kheecha chala aata hoon.
He quickly moved away from the bed and kicked hard at the chair nearby causing it to fall with a loud 'BANG'.
Zoya opened her eyes and , she too reproached herself.
Zoya: Maine Mr Khan ko kyon kiss kiya? Mujhe kya hogaya tha uss waqt? Mai apne aap ko rok hi nahi paayi.
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In the morning, Asad took mr.lovely's help to fix his car and asked him the proper directions. Asad and Zoya sat in the car in an awkward silence.
By afternoon, they had still not reached. By this time, Zoya could't remain silent anymore.
Zoya: Mr Khan, mujhe bhoog lagi hai.
Asad: Hum aadhe ghante me ghar pahunch jaaayenge.
Zoya: Allah miya, AADHA ghanta ? Mere pet me toh chuhe daud rahe hai.
Asad rolled his eyes at her , but stopped at a nearby dhaba, which looked pretty deserted.
Zoya got off excited, rattling off about all the food she was going to eat. Suddenly, Asad noticed that his mobile was getting a signal , so he decided to inform Dilshaad that they'll be coming home soon. He saw that there were only men in the dhaba
Asad: Zoya,andar mat jao- thoda wait karo. Mai abhi Ammi se baat karke aata hoon. Phir saath chalenge.
Zoya looked at him questioningly but shrugged and went towards a nearby tree, leaning on it, his back towards her.
In a flash , two men , dressed in the clothes only gundays would wear , appeared and looking at Zoya , they ran towards her and grabbed her . One of the men hoisted her over his shoulder and started running. This happened so fast that Zoya had no time to react. By the time she realised what was happening, the men had already pushed her into a car. She screamed 'MR KHAN!!' before a man tied a cloth on her mouth, preventing her from saying anything else.
Asad, on hearing his name turned around to see Zoya being forcefully pushed into a car. Asad shouted back : ZOYA!! GAADI ROKO.. But the car was already speeding off.
Asad got on to his car and started following them, but a few twists and turns later, couldn't keep up.
Meanwhile, Zoya's kidnappers reached a small shed , where one of them grabbed her by her hair and pulled her in, laughing at her restlessness and pain. The shed was dark inside. The men pushed her in one corner started feeling her up and tearing her clothes. Zoya cried for mercy as many pairs of hands groped her hungrily. Suddenly, a loud SCREECH was heard- Asad had reached the shed. The men angrily pushed away Zoya and decided to escape. One man took out a knife to finish her off and tried to stab her, but he succeeded in only slashing her arm, as she jumped aside and hid in a dark corner.
Asad barged in and lunged towards the man, but the man slashed a cut in his chest and quickly made his escape. Asad doubled up in pain , but remembered about Zoya. He looked around, his eyes taking time to get adjusted to the darkness. He screamed 'ZOYA' desperately but got no reply. Zoya sat huddled in the corner in her torn clothes, hugging her knees to her chest, numb with shock. No words were forming on her lips as she tried to scream Asad's name.
Asad was about to go and search for her outside, when he heard a faint 'M-mr khan?'. He looked around relieved and ran towards the source of the sound. He flashed his mobile in Zoya's direction and was shocked to see her in a torn, bloody state.
He went towards her , tears forming in his eyes , as he pulled her in to a hug . He sadly whispered 'Zoya' as she stood whimpering and sobbing in his arms.
Asad : Ye kaise hogaya, Zoya?
Zoya heard him snifling and for a split second, stopped her own sobbing and looked up , confused. She saw Asad's eyes filled with grief, care and concern- A tear fell on to her own cheek. She hugged him again and cried her heart out. Then, Asad ,tore off his own shirt and tied it on her bloody arm and tried to cover her shivering body as much as he could.
Asad: Mai isse is halat mai nahi dekh sakta- Chodunga nahi un logo ko jinho ne meri Zoya ke saath aisa kiya.
He lifted her gently and moved towards his car. When the were in light, Zoya spotted a deep gash on Asad's chest .
She looked at Asad , who despite his pain, dragged his feet to take care of her - Her heart filled with love and bursting emotions. She knew that somewhere all along , what happened last night was destined to be.
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Ok guys - How was it?
Comment and share your views 😳
Edited by fashionprincess - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice.
read all parts in one go
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Al i could gng to say is just "wow"
update nxt part as soon as pls cant wait
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shamagvl45

Al i could gng to say is just "wow"
update nxt part as soon as pls cant wait

Thank you 😳 ... I will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

nice.

read all parts in one go
update soon

Aww - Thank you for reading it 😳. Keep reading, I'll pm you when I update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...
but both are hurt...😕
update soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read all your comments Linsie and I really loved all of them 🤗.. Thank you, Keep reading and commenting!!

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