New OS- 'seven days without him'

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Awesome 😳😳...loved it

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

awesome one..

ocd zoya was different..

and interesting..

do write more..

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Beautifully written story. Awh she missed him so much. Glad to see he missed her too. Great start! Waiting to see more of your works. <33

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Awesome Update...!
Zoya waiting for Asad n missing him was damn cute!
I like how Zoya realised that she overeacted...and when Asad came back home,i love the way they hug each other...so sweet!

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Hey ..

Awesome update di...

It is too good..

The concept was very nice..

it was difficult to accept that zoya was ocd one and asad was clumsy king

aww she missed him so much..

she did so much just for the sake of his apology..

There eas water in my mouth listening the dishes..

N bedsheet n perfume.. i guess that is ur fav one as u have wrote it what it is..

She is so caring.. she takes stress n her phobia..

So cute was the hug..Awesome..

If its ur first os then too cute it is..

Keep writing n pm me for sure

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

WOW...! A nice change fr once... Bt seemed soo weird imagining an OCD Zoya...! But i still loved it...!

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Wow that's amazing ! Loved it 😃

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SOHINI

@ShoSurbhiddict

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

loooved it yaaar...
such a cute os... 😃
now zoya has an ocd nature... 😆
the best part was when.she started fighting again and the way asad silenced her😆
it was awesome.. 😃
thnxx fr the pm:-D

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Swetha Natarajan

@Aishdegreat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Really nice post...superb..
Having as ad not ocd is good
But I don't think it suits zoya but still she played well to lighten the mood of her husband
Niceee
Thanks for the pm