FF: Yes Boss #3 - Link to #4 on pg 1 - Page 76

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

U really know how to kill people with your writing Green

I think my breath was tuck in the throat and the update ended

Loved the update

The emotions erupting within Asya were so cute and passionate

please please please update soon

don't make us wait long

I am seriously begging

Originally posted by: Zanutix

HAHAHAHAHA! 🤣

Oh God! I just love your quirky little stunts! Hilarious! 😆

Half Suhagraat is the worst cliffhanger ever!

Well, I don't hate you for it because I like cliffys!

Awww, Asad is SO adorable! And Zoya..ahm..ahm.. smart!

Her body pressing against his, how hot can it be? ☺️

Waiting for the rest of it.

EEEP!

Originally posted by: mochhug

WHAT IS THIS!? ONLY HALF!? 😡

THE NEXT ONE BETTER BE A FULL SUHAAG RAAT IN THE NEXT UPDATE OR ELSE!

😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

😆

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey Green lovely update. What I like the most was that it predictable yet unpredictable. Unpredictable coz of Mr. AAK. I knew he won't do anything 😉 yet he was driven by his emotions for his lovely Zoya. I actually liked it. So curious to know what happens next. I failed to comment on the previous update but it was amazing as usual. Loved the dialogue my house, my wife and the way he was annoyed that Zoya planned to catch up with Navi on his wedding night. I love it when you come with new ideas and make us always smile with your updates.

Originally posted by: kals82

hai green...

way to end the part... just on the right spot...

so that ur readers can let their imagination run for the next 2 days.. about what could have happened...

why did zoya held his hands...

now the big question... will they give in to their desires... or not..

or in the flow they do it.. only to regret in the morning...

i love the second one.. will be fun to read.. both of them discussing it.. as openly in as-ya style...

but i cant do much can i...

just waiting for u update next..😉

see u soon with the next one..

Originally posted by: webuser7

Read both 33 and 34. Since when did you become such a tease? Groan. Please give us a long, romantic update! 😆

Thank you for involving my bachha and me at the wedding. Yeh kaun aaya? HR?! No wait, a duplicate! Aap ne humko bilkul galat samjha hain. Yes, I am a cool Mom. But, do you really think a good Mom will let her precious bachha go with any aira gaira duplicate? That too without knowing anything about him except that he is Zoya's friend? Humko itna shallow samjha hai ki looks pe fida ho jayenge?! 😡 Narges, come back now! LOL! Just kidding! That was a cute twist. Asli nahi toh duplicate hi sahi. Just let him be a good person, so my baby is happy! 😛

Nikaah hogaya par SR ka kya?! 😆 Yeh Zoya bhi na!! Pretending to sleep!! "Woh Actually Mr. khan" actually pulled her towards him!! Oh boy, Zoya put her hand on his. Aage kya hoga?! 😉

Interested to see how the fake SR proceeds?

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Monkey Tango Sadie😆🤣

Where have I heard that word before😉😆

But I think somethings going to happen...Green Ji is not that diabolical to leave us hanging like that...Even if she did leave us at a cliffy😡

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Great update green ji👍🏼

I seem to be still around...😃 You have me pegged right...I am one of those giggly chicks after a cocktail or two😆

I like the teasing😃 It's cool...

Zoya pretending to be asleep is so Zoya...I love the way Asad came into the room and caressed her face...So sweet

He got in the bed next to her😲 I would have thought he would go to the couch but Hey I'm not complaining😉 He pulled her in closer to him...Oh lalala😉😉 Baby please come closer😆

Zoya stops him from letting her go😲😉 Oh boy...is the tempreture about to start rising now?😉

Should I be sitting next to the freezer for the next update😉

I adore this story Green Ji❤️

Originally posted by: t1234

I've read all your updates since you've been back but not had the time to reply!

I hope everything's well now!

Anyway to your updates, the way you write is incredible - seriously. I'm in awe! The whole Nikah scene was beautiful and honestly, I can see our Asad and Zoya in these scenes. The way he places his hand on his knee and points for her to look up at him, how he waits for her to look up before he says Qubool Hai, him giving her the gentle push she needs to also reply with Qubool Hai, ahhh.

The whole Hrithik Roshan scene was funny hahaha, I loved that you considered aapi and jeeju as well! And finally the half SR scene, I'm so looking forward to the rest of it!! I loved the girls teasing him and Zoya pretending to fall asleep, I could've guessed she'd do that😆 And aww loved the way he pulled her inwards, it's a nice intimate gesture :)

It was also beautifully described, can't wait to read your next update and see how both Z and Asad react :)))