FF: Yes Boss #3 - Link to #4 on pg 1

Appu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

it was really good,hoping it wud led to actual SR!! excited!!

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NainaAlex

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

and u had to stop right there ... 😲 😆

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jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Hey Green lovely update. What I like the most was that it predictable yet unpredictable. Unpredictable coz of Mr. AAK. I knew he won't do anything 😉 yet he was driven by his emotions for his lovely Zoya. I actually liked it. So curious to know what happens next. I failed to comment on the previous update but it was amazing as usual. Loved the dialogue my house, my wife and the way he was annoyed that Zoya planned to catch up with Navi on his wedding night. I love it when you come with new ideas and make us always smile with your updates.

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

That was a lovely update ... Asad n his emotions...😊... Update soon ...😊

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kalyani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

hai green...

way to end the part... just on the right spot...

so that ur readers can let their imagination run for the next 2 days.. about what could have happened...

why did zoya held his hands...

now the big question... will they give in to their desires... or not..

or in the flow they do it.. only to regret in the morning...

i love the second one.. will be fun to read.. both of them discussing it.. as openly in as-ya style...

but i cant do much can i...

just waiting for u update next..😉

see u soon with the next one..

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago

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madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Damn how cud u stop it here!!! Really??! I hate you already!!! LOL!😆

that was a mindblowing update!!!! very beautifully written n HOT!!!☺️

update asap!

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

you r not losing readers...i am eagerly waiting for the next update!!
suhagrat pending...
continue soon

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BeIndependent

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

lovely update😃
but how can you end it here😲😡😆😆
waiting 4 d nxt part..continue soon😉😃😆

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Awesome update greenu!
Dilshad caught asad bu asad manged to get off dilshad
zoya then kept her hand on her waist wqs cute one
Why u ended at that point
asad irritated by navi, anu narges n najma haha
zoya pretended to be sleep n asad touched her cheek
hmm asad put his hand on her waist n zoya eyes widened haha
loved this update
update soon

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linta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#740

Update soon please

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