AsYa story-UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS-Thread-2- Parts 4-8

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: zoyaah
awww
this is soo good written
continue soon

thank you so much
i am glad that you liked it
will try to update soon 😊

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Hey,

Sorry for being late been exhaustingly busy for weeks now.

Love this story. Super duper cute.

My oh my - one thing for sure this forum has such talented writers really.

This so Pehla Nasha types the Aamir Khan movie, don't remember the name.

You are an impeccable writer. Hats off!👏

Hi Juliet

it's a pleasure for me to get an appreciation from you
it means a lot to me
thank you
i am happy to know that you found it cute

yes, it is indeed pehla nasha types, their first love in college after all

will try to update soon

love
ankita
😊

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
awesome update loved it <3 continue soon thanks for the pm

thanks
i am glad to know that you liked it
will try to update soon 😊

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: -Xpress-
Awesome <3

thanks 😊

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: skavya
Such a cute update...!!!!!!
u know while reading this update i was smiling all the time & others look at me with weired faces...
i just love it...
the way their relationship is moving sooo cute...
both wants each others nos...but can't get...but Afreen is there for help & finally they got the nos...
the way their messaging is progress so cute...start with GM & Gn then friendship messages & then talking about each other...& they hide this all from their friends...ohhh that is sooo cute...
the way u potray their awkwardness...shyness...their content feelings with just a one message...all is sooo beautiful...!!!!!!!!!

Ohh my Zoya wear Salwar kameez for him...& Asad was mesmerized by her beauty...haye !!!!!

Both r happy...but confused as well with this new feelings...& want to explore this emotions...

Its really interesting to see their next step & how they realize their feelings & confess...

I just loved this update sooo much...!!!!!!

continue soon...
Thankew so much for pm 😊😊😊

thank you so much dear for your lovely comment 🤗

i am happy to know that my update could make you smile through out as i believe making someone happy is one of the best things that one can do 😃

every relationship has its own pace
theirs is taking time

but as they say, slow and steady wins the race
they are 'lambi race ke ghore' 😆

i am so glad that you liked it
will PM you for the next part when i update
will try to update soon
keep commenting, as it motivates me a lot 😳

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: skavya
I know i am late but still...
Congratulations dear for new thread...🥳🥳

thanks a lot
and it is never too late 😛

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: gowthami779
Loved it.. Update soon... Pm me..

thanks
i am glad to know that you liked it
will PM you when i update next 😊

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: kals82
hi,
a wonderful update..

i love the way u progress the story.. something close to reality...

and congrats for the new thread and thanks for the pm

continue soon'

hi
thanks a lot
i am glad to know that you loved the way it is progressing. this is what i was worried about the most
in reality, things do take time
will continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

COMMENT UPDATED ON PG 7

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Ani-asya
Anki congrats again for the new thread 👍🏼👍🏼
cute update..👏
From start to end i liked it❤️
Asya - stealing glances at each other were awesome😳
Zoya visiting library become her daily routine to see asad😳 & her lame excuses😆
I loved d way she express everything in her daily...😃
cute & understanding couple - aafreen& farhaan😳
Thanks aafreen- ur idea worked. Finally zoya got asad number🤗
Not only zoya even i did my happy dance but not like manic😉
Her eagerness, nervouness clearly visibled😳
Zoya saves asad num as Mr.Khan- perfect😳
Poor asad failed to notice aafreen & her plan 😆
Finally happy vacation..
Their love progressing in the name of friendship😳
Tat friendship quotes were superb👏
Zoya in salwar/ asad passionate gaze on her was cute.. 😳
Flashback scene aslo cute..
Y i thing asad past history abt parents is on way????😕
I want asya cute falls & stealing glances more buddy..
Hope u will fulfill my wish😃
Overall cute update..
i loved it a lot❤️
Ani😃

Hey Ani

thank you so much for your beautiful comment buddy 😛
i really love reading long long comments 😆😉

i am happy to know that you liked it 😊

asad and zoya are in college, so it becomes difficult for them to express themselves
they can only do it via phone
but they will definitely move forward

but this is not a typical lovey dovey story
things will change apparently as it was planned

hope you will like that too
will try to continue soon
love ❤️
ankita 😊