AsYa OS - Countdown to New Year's Eve - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Zanutix


Oh, I certainly wasn't! NOT AT ALL! 🤣
17 pages of a Word Document - Phew!

I thought of breaking it up into a TS, but I SO BADLY wanted to write an OS, which it was - An Outstretched Shot - as you called it!

I love long ass reviews! Thank you! 🤗
Oh, the hardwork! Thanks for the acknowledgement. 😊

I love London! Everything about it! Especially Trafalgar Square - countless memories.
Yay! Finally!
I asked my friend about the intro, and she was like, 'I knew it wasn't Zoya' and I was like, 'What the heck!' You got caught off!
Yep, it was the most predictable thing. I like it when the leads are simple, sober.
Just like me! 🤣

Oh she's a blonde - who else survives on cattle food and can't read maps?!
My favorite part was their signature, customized goodbye.
I'm attracted to spirals like moth to flame! I really have no idea why!

Exactly! Especially when she shrugged off Zoya's polite gesture towards her. Bitch!
Haha! I don't think they would've gone for many dates, considering the fact that he didn't even let her kiss! 😆

Poor Zoya! She wanted him too, but he was taken at the moment! 😔
I like the clean shaven Asad more. And the inner voice likes what I like!
I loved it when he tried impressing her by showing up at her Food Van before her.

Didn't I mention that I love it when friendships turn to love?!
I know it was super cliched, but I couldn't help!
And I would love to write more, only when my life permits.
Sigh.

The 28th, 29th and 30th were the hardest to write. I didn't know how to stretch it further!
Thank you so much for liking it!
It means a lot! 😃

P.S. - It's 3 a.m. and I'm still awake as an owl. I love owls!
Anyway, Good night! 😆


Keep up the hard work! I really loved it! And its great to hear your thoughts behind the writing and what you thought about the characters!
Owls are good, owls deliver your letters. Hedwig!
Clearly I am still in my HP mode! Excuse me! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Absolutely amazing...


Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: --Radhika--

Ahh I loved it! <33 You write very well. (:


Thank you so much! 😃
😳

Glad you read the WHOLE of it! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

I loved it!! 😳
It was just awesome!! Amazing!! 👏


Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ...Arshaya...

I read da whole os.
Believe me itz amazing!
U r a really brilliant writer.
Btw i'm arshaya.


It was so long!
Thank you for reading and liking it! 😳

Thanks!
And you can call me Zan! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: zola007

Awesome update !👏

loved it !
it was so well written !
thanks for the pm (:


Thank you! 😳
I'm glad you loved it!

And you're welcome! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
HI ! This was amazing. I loved each and everything about this OS! You're a brilliant writer Zan! :)
Its funny how Zoya talked about "Never judging a book by its cover" while they were shopping and it turned out be like a piece of advice for Asad! The conversation Asad had with inner Asad was also so cute haha. Im in love with this story. Have read it twice already! Please continue writing such wonderful pieces 😳..And PM me if you can!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: -GaussianNoise-

HI ! This was amazing. I loved each and everything about this OS! You're a brilliant writer Zan! :)
Its funny how Zoya talked about "Never judging a book by its cover" while they were shopping and it turned out be like a piece of advice for Asad! The conversation Asad had with inner Asad was also so cute haha. Im in love with this story. Have read it twice already! Please continue writing such wonderful pieces 😳..And PM me if you can!


Hey!!
I'm so glad you loved it! It really means a lot to me! 😊
Zoya's always right, isn't she?! 😆
Oh, I had fun writing that too. I love the 'self conversations' a lot!
You read the WHOLE story TWICE?! 😲
Oh my God! 👏
THANK YOU!!!!!!!! 😳
I'll PM you if I do!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
love this story so much..

the way you wrote it made it so interesting..

asya started off with friendship..

their friendship was so unique and so lovely..

they just hit off at the first meet..

they were so comfortable with each other..

asad was so funny in this..

creating so many excuses to run away from sarah..😆

asya's bond was so open and very stable from the begining..

love the part when they both were thinking about each other with new feeling..

asad gifted her the chain that she wanted to buy..😳

how sweet..

they were like real friends..

reminded me of my best friend instantly..😃

finally they are together on the new year..😳

zoya's question at that part was so cute..

Finally breaking away, Zoya asked in a ragged breath, "does that mean we'll be kissing throughout the year?"😆😳

you are awesome..

reading it all over again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Wow that was amazing !
It was long but beautiful
Loved it 😳

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