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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
ok.. i kinda know wats gonna happen next...!! 😉
n i love such concepts.. n manyyy people started writing on this concept.. n rarelyy finished.. they didnt know wat to do soo they left the storyy incomplete.. plzz plzz u dont leave this storyyy incomplete.. pretty pleasee...

and one small suggestion.. hope u dont mind
please dont write anything in yellow or lite green... it cant be read properlyy...

and regarding ur other ff... pleaseee complete it sooon.. i cant wait for the last chapter... n r u planning an epilouge as well???

coming back to this one... continue it soon... i hope u also dont disappoint me with leaving this ts incomplete... n r u sure it will end in 3 parts?? think over it.. u can make it upto 5 parts n name it as an FS (four/five shot) that many ppl do... ok.. this was another sillyy advice... 😆 😆
and thank u soo much for the pm... 😊

and some qs as well that i need answers of soo please update sooon...
1) why the hell did zoya say/think PHYSICAL torture...??
2) why did she leave asad wen she loved him like anything??
3) did she know b4 leaving asad that she was pregnant...??
4) i know the answer of this one but still if the story doesnt turn it the way i have predicted then is she married or divorced or widowed??

sooo plzz continue ASAP...
comment no doubt bohat lamba ho gaya.. 😛


-fuii-
Edited by Splash-ASYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

ok.. i kinda know wats gonna happen next...!! 😉
n i love such concepts.. n manyyy people started writing on this concept.. n rarelyy finished.. they didnt know wat to do soo they left the storyy incomplete.. plzz plzz u dont leave this storyyy incomplete.. pretty pleasee...

and one small suggestion.. hope u dont mind
please dont write anything in yellow or lite green... it cant be read properlyy...

and regarding ur other ff... pleaseee complete it sooon.. i cant wait for the last chapter... n r u planning an epilouge as well???

coming back to this one... continue it soon... i hope u also dont disappoint me with leaving this ts incomplete... n r u sure it will end in 3 parts?? think over it.. u can make it upto 5 parts n name it as an FS (four/five shot) that many ppl do... ok.. this was another sillyy advice... 😆 😆
and thank u soo much for the pm... 😊

and some qs as well that i need answers of soo please update sooon...
1) why the hell did zoya say/think PHYSICAL torture...??
2) why did she leave asad wen she loved him like anything??
3) did she know b4 leaving asad that she was pregnant...??
4) i know the answer of this one but still if the story doesnt turn it the way i have predicted then is she married or divorced or widowed??

sooo plzz continue ASAP...
comment no doubt bohat lamba ho gaya.. 😛


-fuii-


hey 😛
first of all thank you for commenting and thank you so much for making it a big wala comment so for that i have a ilittle virtual present for you



do not worry i have already written part 2
which kinda sucks on hell
so im gonna improve it 😆😆

but yeah dont worry i will finish it

as for the questions

1) in my story there was some physical torture by razia
2) k so, i didnt like it how in the show she just forgave him that easily
yeah yeah i know she loves and it was a test of their love but their is something called womens respect, self respect, how they showed it on the show, it made it look like a women cant live without a man, or a women need a man for her happiness "barf"🤢🤢
3,4) i cant answer it will ruin the story😉😉

so yeah i will continue soon
PAKKKA PROMISE

oh yeah as for my ss i will update and finish it, and i am thinking about doing an epiloque 2 years after their marriage and it will have shown zoya being pregnant her mood swings her cravings and then when it comes to giving birth how she squeezes the life out of asads hand😆😆
but i am thinking about

anyways hoped you like ur present
thanks for the comment

xxx😛



Edited by Hophop1456 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
emotional... sweet.. really loved it... Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Awesome os...😊
Love it...👍🏼
Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Nice story. Liked the narration of the story.

Please pm me for the next part.

Writing dialogs in different colours is a good idea but please use dark colours as I could hardly read the little girls dialogs that were in fluorescent green.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Nice story. I really wish zoya could have done that in show.
Few questions 1) what about zoyaan? Did zoya sign the divorce papers & left or asyaan found it as an invalid nikkah & got it annulled?
2) what about ayra? Did they get married?
3) najran tanveer truth is exposed?
4) zoya's Abbu truth will be revealed?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
When will you update? AsYa baby
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Please pm me when you update😊
AsYa baby
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
awesome
please continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Nice story. I really wish zoya could have done that in show.
Few questions 1) what about zoyaan? Did zoya sign the divorce papers & left or asyaan found it as an invalid nikkah & got it annulled?
2) what about ayra? Did they get married?
3) najran tanveer truth is exposed?
4) zoya's Abbu truth will be revealed?


hiya😛

yeah i also wish that as well

i mean what kind of a women will still forgive someone after they treated her like a puppet.
seriously if it were me... i would have... done something😆 anything other then what zoya did.
i mean from what i got i think she was saying that a women cant be happy without a man in her life. you know what that is,,,,, that is BULL SHIT. anyways

k so the questions

this TS is just what i wanted in the show to happen well this part anyway, so basically everything else went according to the show you can say only zoya left asad and did get a divorce from ayaan. And no whole zoyas abbu thing in my story its just a two shot wanna keep it as simple as possible.😃

so i hope that makes a little more sense.

and since u gave a long comment, i have a presi for ya...




hoped you liked it 😆



Edited by Hophop1456 - 11 years ago

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