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Hey guys so i know i know, i should be working on my SS/FF, but... i got nothing😆.
So yeah but please dont worry, well not exactly worry but yeah, anyways my point is that i will finish it dont worry i only have a part left i just got distracted by the whole KSG fiasco (btw what timing i mean what a chirstmas present😆) And yeah but i wrote this TS a while ago and it was number 3 on my poll and i know it got the least amout of votes yada yada yada, but i finished writting it so i thought WHY NOT. But it is very bad and i mean VERY BAD but i have written it so might as well.
i hope you dont barf
you may wanna keep a bin somewhere near by because this is really bad but here goes nothing,,,,,,
Part 1
Asad POV
It had been 5 years since that wretched day, the same day that took my Zoya away from me the same day when all the light from my life was taken away from me and the same reason as to why me and my brother are in a hospital right now.
Asad leans back on the wooden bench outside the Doctor's ward as his mind drifts of to
Flashback
5 years ago
Asad's POV
Finally the day has come. Today I will get my life, my Zoya back. These 3 weeks have been nothing but torturous and horrific for me where the only thing I realized is how much I truly love and need Zoya in my arms. I remember that as if it only happened yesterday where I had to give my love away to the house I vowed I would never step into. But fate had other plan for us. I had to give away my love to the same house because of Nikhat's health but now that her Nikaah has finally happened there is absolutely no reason for Zoya to stay in this house any longer. I can finally take her back and we will be together forever and nothing absolutely nothing will come in between us this time. My thoughts are interrupted by a voice that felt like poison to my ears.
Razia: Tum yaha kya kerahe ho😡
Asad: Mein Zoya ko wapes legane ayahoon😡
Asad roared back while moving further into the house. The members of the Siddique house come out of their rooms. Gaffur, Shirin, Badi Bi, Humeira Ayaan but Asad didn't care about any of those people he just wanted to see the person he was actually here, Zoya. She being the last person finally walks out into the hall, Asad observed her thoroughly she was wearing a red Anarkali suit that complemented her white skin and her raven black hair very nicely.My eyes move up to see her face and I'm taken aback by the tears that are coming out of her eyes as I expected to see a smile instead. I soon shrug it off as I hear the next voice.
Gaffur: Yeh kya batameezi hai. Zoya iss gher ki bahu hai😡
Asad clenched his fists hearing him call Zoya his bahu. He took a deep breath and closed his eyes to control the anger that was boiling up inside him, trust this man to ruin his life.
Asad: Zoya iss gher ki bahu nahi hai. Mein Zoya ko yahan leke aya tah Ayaan ki biwi banakeh meger meneh yeh bhi bolatah ki jebb Nikhat ka Nikaah hoja hai ga toh mein Zoya ko wapes leke jahoonga.😡
Shirin: Yeh kya bekwaas hai😲😡
Ayaan: Bhaijaan sech keh raha hai😊
Ayaan announced leaving the rest of the members flabbergasted. He took Zoya by her hand and moved both of them towards his brother.
Ayaan: App apni amanet lajahain Bhaijaan😃
But before he could hand over Zoyas hand to Asad Badi Bi moves in front of Zoya.
Badi Bi: Ruko beta mein yeh baat Zoya seh suna chaati hoon...bolo beti.😕
She said while giving Zoya a reassuring hand on the shoulder. Zoya looked up for the first time and scanned everyones expression in the room, a mixture of anger, disgusted, relief and finally her Mr. Khan, happiness. She took a deep breath and tried to control the tears that were making their way out of her eyes.
Zoya: Yeh saach hai ki mein kabhi iss gher ki bahu nahi thee meger...Zoya closed her eyes and took another deep breath before speaking... Meger mein Mr. Khan keh saat waapis nahi jaarahi hoon.😭
She managed to say between her sobs she kept her eyes downwards on the the floor because she knew that if she looked into his eyes she would go running into his arms again. How was she supposed to go back to a man that gave her away to a house that hated her, hated her ways that made her go through living emotion and PHYSICAL hell these 3 weeks. How was she suppose to trust that same man who "sacrificed" her for his sister. How was she even suppose to LOVE that same man who promised her that he would protect her from all evilness who promised her a life time filled with nothing but happiness but than broke those same promises. Can she ever even look at him the same way?
Asad meanwhile felt as if his whole world was shattering brick by brick. He couldn't believe the words that were coming out Zoyas mouth, he CHOSE not to believe them. He felt his entire body shaking he felt as if he was getting stabbed in the heart multiple times. He lifts his right arm to touch Zoya but put it down immediately as he saw Zoya flinch at his mere touch, an action that once again stabbed his heart. With a broken voice he finally voiced his thoughts.
Asad: Z-Z-z-Zoya ye-yeh tum k-kya kerahee h-hoh😭
Zoya looked up to meet his chocolate brown eyes. The same eyes that held so much love during their lovemaking a couple of days before what was suppose to be THEIR wedding day. She remembered waking up in his arms and the warmth she felt by his love was the most wonderful and magical feeling she ever felt. She remembered how both of them finally gave into their desires. She remembers how he promised that morning that he would never leave her nor harm her but who knew that only 3 days later he would betray her love. And now how was she suppose to spend the rest of her life knowing that her husband had once given her away? She was snapped out of reverie by Ayaan voice.
Ayaan: Zoya yeh tum kya kerahee hoh, bhaijaan neh apko lekeh aana tah yahan peh Nikhat keh liye. Hamari majboori thi😕😲
Zoya: Ayaan mein mani hoon kee jo bhi uss din app dono neh kiya tah who apni behen ke liya kiya tah, aur shayad yh baat kabhi meh samaj nahi paoonghi(understand) kyun ki mein aanat hoon, mereh paas ek family kabhi thi hi nahi. Mein soch thee thi keh Mr. Khan he meri family hai meger mein galate thi. Jo apne aur apke bhaijaan neh uss din kiya woh mein kabhi nahi bhool sekti. App dono neh mujhe loan samaje keh ek gher seh dusre gher phenk diya...Aur ebb mein yaha nahi reh sekti.😡
She finally managed to say. She started to walk past all the people but stopped as soon as she felt a tug on her wrist.
In the meantime Asad was finally releasing how much he had truly hurt Zoya. He let out the tears that were making his way down his eyes. He wanted to tell Zoya scream at her that he didn't want to hurt her that he was forced to do all this that there wasn't any other way, was there? But now wasn't the time to think about the past he had to stop her so he did the only thing that came to his mind. He grabbed her hand not allowing her to move an inch further slowly he turned himself around and moved in front of her and with a shaky voice he said...
Asad: Zoya p-p-please mujhe maa-maaf kerdo. M-mein tumhare bina ji nahi sekte Zoya please muje maaf kerdo mein promise kerta hoon ki mein tume puri zindagi khush rekhoonga please Zoya muje maaf kerdo.😭😭
Zoya: Please Mr. Khan app aur promises nahi banahi hai jo app keep nahi ker sekteh aur jitna dard apko horaha hai ussi kahin zyada mujhe ho raha hai...muje ebb jana ho gaa...Khuda Hafiz😭
With that she snatched her hand out of his grip and walked out of the Siddique mansion out of their and HIS life.
Asad felt his knees give up on him, he collapsed. He didn't care that he was crying in his enemys house he didn't care about anything he just cried out. He kept on screaming "ZOYAAA" hoping that she would turn around and take him in her arms but to no avail. He felt as if his chest was being squashed between two walls, he felt as if there isn't enough air in the room for him to breathe.
Ayaan meanwhile was going through the same phase his best friend walked out on his bhaijaans life, but heck she had every right to do that, we did treat her like dirt, we never asked her what she wanted we just threw her around not once caring about her feelings through all this. But now was not the time to look at the past it was the time to get his brother's amanet back, he promised that he would return Zoya and that is exactly what he was going to do.
Finally mustering up the strength Ayaan moved towards his brother who was still sobbing his heart out like a lost child. He got down to his knees and whispered the only words that came to mind
Ayaan: Don't worry Bhai-Bhaijaan mein apki amanet ko wapes leke ajahoonga mein apki Zoya ko dhoond lahoonga
Asad removed his palms out of his face and looked at his brother in the eye, wondering whether he could really do it.
End of flashback
And he did he did his best to find out about Zoya the same reason as to why I am sitting in a hospital right now. In the past 5 years we have gotten 6 locations as to where Zoya could possibly be and so far luck is not on my side. 2 days ago my brother got another tracking from the private investigator he hired saying that there was a Farooqui living in Shimla, and before he could even finish his sentence we were both out the door and in the car driving madly up here. But now look at where we are I guess Allah must really want to punish me this is the 7th location and I ended up getting into a car accident nothing too serious just a few cuts and bruises. "sigh" I look over at Ayaan who keeps on complaining about the doctor being late.
Ayaan: Uggghh why is this Doctor taking so long😡
Asad: Well probably because its the middle of the day
I reply back with a sarcastic tone. He lowers his head and says...
Ayaan: We will find Zoya bhaijaan
I just gave him a weak smile as I could feel tears coming out of my eyes at the mere mention of her. I control them and try to distract myself by looking around the hospital, it is really rushed there are doctors and nurses everywhere, but then I caught the attention of a bright yellow balloon. I saw the holder of the balloon and for some reason after 5 years my heart got a warm feeling.
It was a 5 year old girl, she was holding the balloon and carrying a Disney princess backpack, she was wearing a red and white striped top with a blue rara skirt and pink tights. But the thing that got me to stare at the little toddler was her eyes they seemed so familiar but I couldn't quiet put my finger on it. I nudged Ayaan in the stomach and told him to look this way and instantly he got a smile on his face by looking at the adorable sight. The girl was walking on her own and looking around the hospital as if she was lost but I could tell that she was not lost. She stopped in front of the Doctor's office me and my brother were waiting for. She sat more like jumped on to the bench next to it, which was directly opposite to us. She started to swing her legs, for some reason I just couldn't seem to take my eyes of the girl she made feel so warm inside a feeling I haven't felt or 5 years. What is It about her? My thought were interrupted by her voice.
Girl: App dono kya mewi Ammi ko dhekneh ayho😃
She asked with her dimples on full swing making me and my brother smile as well.
Ayaan: Well Mohterma apki ammi kya doctor hai?😃😛😉
Ayaan asked in his kiddy voice making me roll my eyes.
The girl just nodded her head dramatically.😃
Ayaan: phir hum unhi ko dhekneh aye hein😆
Girl: O meh bhee apni ammi ko dhekneh ayyee hoon 😃😆
The girl dramatically said with her mouth wide upon causing me to smile at her cuteness.
Ayaan: Weseh apki mummy ka naam kya hai?😕
Ayaan asked her curiously I knew he just wanted to make conversation with the girl but I didn't blame him the girl was too adorable to not to talk to.
Girl: Mewi ammi ka naam hai....
But before she could finish the Doctors office flies open and the person I see coming out leaves me frozen. The same women who has taunted my dreams with her smile, her laugh, her eyes, her voice is now standing in front of me, my Zoya.
My happiness knew no bounds I had tears of joy just looking at her face. She hadn't changed much, but this time her eyes held sadness and only sadness. Me and Ayaan both get up but before we can say anything
Girl: AAAMMMIII😛😃
The girl screamed while running to hug Zoya. Once again I felt as if my world was collapsing on me I felt my knees go weak as a thought came across my mind
Was she married?????...
Part 2 is here for people who havent barfed on this yet:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98685373
K so that was my rubbishness
I will Accept whatever you are throwing my now.
BTW do you guys this setup of my writing with the colours for different characters and the font size and the whole writting in the middle or should i keep like i did with the my ss
and do you guys think that the smileys are okay or should i remove them.
Please do let me know
anways please do comment and tell me if i should upload part 2 or if i should remove this part as well so that it doesnt burn your eyes out🤣
see ya next time
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