AsYa TS: Attractions, Confessions & much more... Part 3- Page 32 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

awesome update...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MissAsian

Honest opinion... I LOVED it! You're a talented writer Marsha'Allah :)


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiLover1

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinks2911

Please do update soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ria1891

interesting...😊

please continue..


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

It was super cute.. Please do update soon..
Its been a month since you posted part 1


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello, my darlings! 🤗

Yes, I am updating after nearly 4 months. Dont kill me, please! 😆 I am extremely sorry for the delay! I have finally written down something for you guys! I totally lost my inspiration after KSG left the show and I stopped watching it! In my breaks, I used to catch with the old episodes of Qubool Hai and that inspired me to write again.. KaBhi ❤️

So here is the next part! Mostly from Zoya's point of view, as my readers had requested! 😳
Note to readers: Asad is way different in my TS from the serial's Asad. So dont keep that akdu image in your mind while reading this! 😳



Part 2- Attractions, Confessions & Much more..

Taking calculated and careful steps, Zoya made her way to meet Anwar. She was feeling really conscious about the way she looked. Her 5 inch heels seemed like a nightmare to her and she wondered if she could carry the saree gracefully! Seeing that her Jeeju was engrossed in a conversation with a few guests, she looked around to search for her Aapi. While scanning the room, she spotted a familiar face lost in his thoughts and immediately recognized her first crush! Excited, she wondered what he was doing in the party and thought about the day she saw him..

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Clad in a baby pink anarkali suit and with a big box in her hand, Zoya finally managed to arrive at her childhood friend Nikhat's sangeet. After a bunch of hugs, salaams and hellos, Zoya found herself in a corner looking at the proceedings of the Sangeet. Born and brought up in India, Zoya had never witnessed a close wedding. She was a lovely girl, who lost her parents in a road accident 5 years back and lived with her Aapi-Jeeju since then. Since Jeeju was settled in New York, she decided to pursue her studies in New York as well. When she was informed about the wedding in India, she couldn't be happier and decided to take a short vacation to India.


She looked around and saw how happy and excited everyone looked. The younger cousins were jumping around, the teens were doing the last minute preparation for their dances, the oldies were praising the arrangements, but Nikhat looked the happiest. The bright smile on her face brought a smile on Zoya's face and she was happy that Nikhat found the perfect guy for herself. As the soft and soothing music started in the background, the sudden frown on Nikhat's face and then the glare did not go unnoticed by Zoya and she wondered what was or rather who the reason was for this.


'Kehte hain Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye..'

She looked towards the left and couldn't help but notice the extremely gorgeous man who entered the venue. He was dressed in three piece business suit and Zoya wondered if this hot man knew this was no business meeting. Chuckling inwardly, she noticed how Nikhat was ignoring the poor guy. She guessed that Nikhat was really close to him and hence she was throwing tantrums! She noticed how he forced her to eat the chocolates and ultimately succeeded in bringing a smile on Nikhat's face. Before she could think further, she felt herself being pulled on the dance floor by her new found friend, Najma.

'Sapne mein milti hai, o kudi meri sapne mein milti hai
Sara din gungte me band kudiya si, oe oe oe oe oe...
Sara din gungte me band kudiya si, akhiyon mein khulti hai'

Groaning inwardly at the choice of song, she looked at Najma who was dancing and looking at her with pleading eyes to join her. Thinking to herself that she will get a chance to talk to the hunk later on, she joined Najma and started enjoying herself. Feeling conscious of all the eyes on her, she moved towards her Phuphi, Dilshaad. She had immense respect for her phuphi ever since she met her, she connected so well with her phuphi and after interacting with her a couple of times, she felt like she was talking to her own mother. She pulled her phuphi, Shireen phuphi, the cousins, the aunties on the stage. Thinking of asking Nikhat to join along with her brother, she looked back, only to notice the gorgeous guy being pulled away by another cousin who seemed a bit younger than him. Feeling a bit disappointed, she pulled Nikhat and continued dancing. Later that night, she received a call from her Jeeju saying that slight complications had taken place in her Aapi's pregnancy and was admitted in the hospital. Hearing the news, she apologized to Nikhat and bid farewell to Dilshaad phuphi, hoping to see her and her crush again in her lifetime...

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After a year, here she was. Standing infront of the gorgeous man she couldn't stop dreaming about since the past one year. Once Zoya returned, her aapi delivered a beautiful baby girl after 2 months. Despite the complications, the baby and the mother both were healthy. Since it was Zoya's last semester in college, she got ample of time to spend with her aapi and her wonderful lil niece, Amaira. One day her jeeju informed her aapi and her that he had decided to move to Bhopal and open his own business there, Zoya couldn't be happier. Bhopal had so many memories as her parents and she lived there before the horrible accident and she couldn't wait to meet her friends and relatives and relive those memories.

Shaking her out of her thoughts, her Jeeju tapped on her shoulder and said, Aao Zoya, I want you to meet Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan'. After exchanging pleasantries, she found herself getting introduced to Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan, the guy she was attracted to. FINALLY!', she thought!

Zoya was never the kind of girl who was shy or not confident enough to make new friends. She was an extrovert and knew how to handle situations. But she found herself tongue-tied infront of Asad. Gathering some courage, she said, Salaam. Jeeju told me about his new project with your company.' Hoping to keep the conversation alive, she smiled a little. But before he could answer, Najma pulled her into a tight hug and then adding the bits and pieces, she realized Asad was the son of the same woman she respected and loved a lot, her Dilshaad Phuphi.


Before Asad-Zoya could speak more to each other, Ayaan interrupted. 'Ahem, wont anyone introduce me to this beautiful young lady here? Leave it, you guys. I'll do the honours! Hey beautiful, I'm Ayaan Ahmed Khan! Pleasure meeting you!'


Chuckling at his attempts to flirt, Najma pulled Zoya and took her to meet her Ammi. Zoya was really excited to meet her Dilshaad phuphi after such a long time. She spoke to her about Nikhat's wedding, her niece, her experience in New York, inquired about her health.. the list was endless. All this while, she could feel someone's eyes on her and looking around, she caught Asad staring at her. Blushing a little, she moved towards the bar to get herself a glass of her favourite drink, Diet Coke. Seeing this as an opportunity, Asad moved towards her and they immediately hit it off. After a few talks, the numbers were exchanged and they just became more comfortable with each other. The rest of the night passed away with Dilshaad noticing the looks exchanged between Asad and Zoya when they thought the other wasn't looking and she couldn't but pray to Allah for the beginning of a new relationship...

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His texts, his phone calls were the only things that managed to bring a smile on Zoya's face each day! Both of them met a couple of times, enjoyed each other's company, got to know each other, spent time talking about random things. After a tiring day at work, all she wanted to do was snuggle up with her blanket in her cosy bed and text Asad all night. She checked her phone excitedly when it beeped!

'Hey you! You looked pretty in red today!'

'Woah! When did you see me? Why didn't you come meet me?' Zoya replied.

'You were with a few colleagues, walking towards the caf down the street around 2. Thought of not disturbing you.' Came his reply.

'Yeah, was going to collect my lunch. Atleast I get a compliment on texts. Face to face, toh tum phattu ho ;)* Danger territory Zoya! Beware, she thought.

'Oh really? I remember a certain someone was too shy to say hi when we first met!'

Damn! 'Oh please, I atleast tried to make a conversation!'

'After staring at me for like 10 mins? NIIICE ;)'

'Like I was the only one staring. Who was staring when I was talking to your Ammi?' It was Asad's turn to be embarrassed!

She waited a while, but no reply. After a few minutes, her phone rang. She felt slightly nervous, thinking she had offended him. Picking up the phone, she heard him say 'So is it a crime to stare a girl who you are attracted to?'

Her heart skipped a beat. Asad was attracted to her? REALLY?


'Zoya, I am so not doing this on the phone. Can we meet tomorrow? If that's okay with you?'

Zoya was still trying to observe whatever just happened and did a happy dance. When Zoya went all silent, Asad assumed she wasn't comfortable with this. 'I'm sorry, I am not forcing.. '

' I would love to, Asad' She whispered.

'Great, tomorrow at 5? Starbucks infront of your office?'

Sure!'

'See you then, Zoya! Bye!'

'Asad, listen?'

'Hmm?'

'I miss you!' Blushing she cut the phone and hid her face in her pillow to hide the huge grin!

Her phone beeped! Miss you too. Can't wait to meet you!'


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Still short? This is all I could manage in 2 hours! Sending PMs to all those in my buddy list! Leave me some love, guys! 😳

Oh and the more the number of likes and comments, the sooner the update will come! *Evil laugh* 😆

Give me 75 likes and 10 pages of comments, update will be here! 😃


Edited by -ARLover- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Can 't believe that asad interacted with zoya
The feelings of zoya were described beautifully
It was a cute one
Thanks for the pm n please update soon
Edited by -Hinaloveasya- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved this!!! Especially how they hit it off straight away and there wasn't any big obstacles, just nice and straight forward
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Posted: 11 years ago
You write 😲
Obviously you do I saw my comment on First page 😆
But dont blame me you are updating after 4 months i may forget 🤔 :P

Lovely Update ❤️
Asad-Zoya are like normal ppl here. No fighting for a change :P
No Akdu Asad. Thank You for that 😆
Why you stop 🥱
Just tell me when next you are updating?
Or else i ll spam 😈
And you ll help me here too 🤣
Edited by -RM- - 11 years ago

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