LoveMaking Ke Side Effects: SS PT 2 pg 15 Jan 8 - Page 8

Such an amazing start! Absolutely loved AsYa here ☺️ Continue soon!

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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I have been waiting for my present for so so long di but the wait was more than worth my while😃😃

As i said i couldn't have asked for a better birthday present from you.This was just perfect and i think even fate knew that this SS was just for me because the moment I was about to log out and go to sleep i get a meesage from my dearest Rabbit Narges that you just put up the SS and asked me to res my spot😳😳.A big thanks to Narges for giving me the first position but i guess it was my birthday so i did deserve it😆😆...Also since this was for me so me getting the first spot was only fair and i have been plotting how to secure it for long so again thanks to rabbit for being kind enough to give this coveted first spot to me...It means a lot😳😳😳

Now let us move to the update...

First of all,I loved the setting for the SS...As i already mentioned had something like this had happened in the show with a similar setting i would have probably gotten back to watching QH but well Gul isn't as good as you to know what I want😆😆

Ahh moneymoon in Paris zoya finallt got to see her dream city or atleast i hope she did 😆😆

"Haan-phoophi-wo-I mean ammi," Zoya smiled. She was still getting used to addressing Dilshaad as ammi' "one week was too short."

I loved how you showed that zoya was still getting used to the idea of calling Dilshad ammi...

Too short really?😆😆Damn looks like she hasn't had enough of her Mr.Khan

"Mr. Khan! Aapke liye nahin hoga! Trust me ammi, Mr. Khan had no interest in seeing anything in Paris." Zoya blurt out absentmindedly, "inka bas chalta tho hum yahin Bhopal mein hi honeymoon kar lete."

Dilshaad tried her best to suppress her smile while Asad turned red as a beetroot.

Haha she really said Mr.Khan had no interest in sight seeing...Her foot in the mouth disease is causing asad a hell lot of an embarssment😆😆

But zoya why would he be interested in sight seeing when he can see you all night long😉😉

Nestled in the curve of his strong arm, she gazed up in his eyes, "lekin maine kuch jhooth tho nahin kaha na? Paris se zyaada hotel room ka nazaara zyaada dikhaya aapne. You still owe me another trip to Paris." She whined.

Now this was naughty☺️But i guess that is what honesymoon is for learning hotel room's architecture😆😆

With a faint smile on his face, he touched her lip with his finger, "agar aap itni khubsoorat na hoti tho shayad Paris ke nazaaron mein zyaada dilchaspi rehti."

Awww this was so cute...I have read your work so much di but i am still amazed at times that how do you manage to write such beautiful lines...Since you say you aren't very romantic in real life i guess bollywood plays its role here😆😆

But i really want to ask have you ever tried saying something like this to Mr.J?😳😳

Their bickering and the makhi wala argument was so cute and funny😆😆I guess somethings never change...

also i love how you always maitain the essence of their character😳😳

"WHAT OKAY?" She pushed him away and held the strip near his face, "YEH DEKH RAHE HAIN AAP MR. KHAN? THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!!"

Haha saari galti asad miyan ki hai jaisi ki aapne kuch kiya hi nahi zoya...go read some biology books again😆😆

As the color drained from his face, she broke into a wide grin and pinched his nose, "gotcha Mr. Khan!"

Haha i can only expect zoya to do such a drama when she discovers she is pregnant...she is one in a million😆😆

Before he could react, she wrapped her arms around his neck and nestled her face in his neck, planting a soft kiss there. "Thank you Asad." His heart fluttered whenever she addressed him by his name. Relieved, he knew she must be ecstatic about something - Asad was her way of expressing her heartfelt feelings for him.

Awww these lines are so perfect😳😳

Hum hamesha uske saath rahenge Zoya." He showered her with kisses; tears of joy swamped his eyelids.

I loved that you brought their childhood insecurities of being abandoned here...I guess both asad nd zoya who have had a pretty rough childhood will be the best parents to make their child's journey a very memorable and smooth one😳😳

Omg their bickering about how to raise their kids was so sweet and funny😆😆

typical asya...are you a honey singh fan di?

I agree with asad here honey singh is no honey from any angle

"Ab zindagi bhar ka saath nibhaana hai Mrs. Khan tho room chhodne se kya main aapka saath chhod doonga? Agar aap khafaa hokar hamare bedroom ko chhod sakti hain tho main aapko manaane aapke bedroom mein tho aa sakta hoon na? Tho aaj raat hum dono yahin soyenge," he tucked her under his arm and turned the night light off, "Mr. and Mrs. Khan shall celebrate their good news together in this room for a change."

Aww the way he come to zoya's room to make up with her was so so sweet...i actually had tears in my eyes when i read this part...It was so sweet and beautiful and dare i say it was my favorite part😳😳

"MR. KHAN!" Zoya stomped her foot, "please take that statement back. Aap mujhey careless keh rahe hain? Aur aap kya hain? Agar aapne thodi precaution barti hoti tho itni jaldi main pregnant nahin ho jaati!"

🤣🤣Omg bechara asad...zoya ki foot in the mouth disease costs him big time every single time😆😆

But i loved that you showed asya a little overwelmed and shocked with the news i guess that is the most natural reaction for the first time parents especially the newly weds😳😳

The doctor smiled at both of them, "you are the cutest couple I have ever met. Never saw a couple address each other so formally but argue so informally in front of a stranger."

This is so damn true...and yes they are the cutest couple😳😳

"Jee," he nodded, smiling, "yes she is precious----I will make sure she has an effortless nine month journey."

Aww can we all have an asad in our life😳😳he is such s sweetheart and such a caring and loving husband😳😳

Zoya lowered her chin, glancing at his hand on her tummy. Something about his hand on their tiny baby inside her womb gave her goose bumps; a warm and fuzzy feeling throughout her body. An unbreakable connection, a lifelong bond, a link between the three of them had been established. The three of them were as if a unit now. Years ago, did her ammi, Zainab also feel the same after she was conceived? She placed her hand on Asad's and then gazed into his eyes, "promise me Mr. Khan, yeh hum teeno ke beech jo ek naya rishta ban gaya hai, hamesha aise hi rahega na? Aapka saaya humse kabhie door tho nahin hoga na?"

Aww this was so so so cute...I guess i may too young to understand this feeling but i can imagine how special this feeling must be😳😳

"Ab pyaar kiya hai tho uske kuch tho side effects honge hi Mr. Khan." She hid her face in his chest

"Yeh side effects mujhey qubool hain!" He wrapped his arms around her, silently thanking the almighty for blessing them with the best news of their lives.

Such a wonderful ending to a very beautiful update...I am waiting for the next part eagerly

This was such a beautiful part di..it was funny,romantic,sweet and still so touching...it had the essence of asya nd i could feel for my asya again just like old times and no one but you have the talent to do so😳😳

Di thanku thanku thanku a million times thanku so this birthday gift...i can never thank you enough for such a special gift...It means a lot...you mean a lot to me and to get such a wonderful gift from you is a very very wonderful feeling for me...

Thanku for making my day so special...

I love you di❤️❤️

P.S.-I asked you to write from your life expereince to is update mein se kya kya hua hai appke sath?😉😉

Originally posted by: Mayeesha2217

OMG Sangeeta dee you are back with another story..yayyy😃I sooo miss your ff..Faasle😭Its such pure joy reading your stories...and Asya in this one are sooo adorable..I wish they go this track in QH..wahan to nikaah hi nahin ho raha hai..honeymoon aur bacche kya khaak honge😆

Its lovely seeing you back😃🤗

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-

What an amazing OS!! 👏 Treat to the mind!

You always bring me close to tears when you write such heart warming stories! Can't wait for Part 2! 😃

Originally posted by: sheilasandhu

👍🏼 OMG that was beautiful and touching . Awesome feelings of mother and fatherhood. Waiting for update

Originally posted by: volatile

Hi bheegi,

I was waiting for this weekend, cos you had said that you would be posting an OS. But a 2 parter is definitely a pleasant surprise!!

I didnt realise how much i miss your AsYa until i read about them again! Although you didnt follow the Faasle storyline, it felt so nostalgic to be a part of their lives again!

Love how they were arguing about how to raise the child from the 1st minute, and omg, Asads yo yo sugar singh was hilarious! I can so picture him saying that! It was funnier for me i guess, so even my hubby insisted I listen to bhajaans instead of Bhangra when I was pregnant!😛

Looking forward eagerly to the next part! Oh and btw, maybe all of us should PM you our birthdays, so maybe you get motivated to post something to make our day as well! 😉😉

Originally posted by: metoyou

A rainy day...a nice cup of tea, blanket, laptop, good music and my undivided attention. What else do I want? Nothing much, since this SS has given me a lot! Perhaps, more than I wanted...

Part 1 - Honeymoon ke side effects

Location: Khan Villa

weeklong honeymoon in Paris (aakhir Zoya ke wish poori ho gayi) 😊

Mr. Khan had no interest in seeing anything in Paris (He was way too busy looking at something else...rather someone else who is more beautiful than Paris) 😉

She ran over and hugged him from behind, burying her face in his back (Always wanted to see this kind of hug) 😳

you have that foot in mouth disease (Oh yes, that she has for sure!)

Paris se zyaada hotel room ka nazaara zyaada dikhaya aapne (Are you complaining Zoya? Who cares about Paris at that time)

He smiled and touched his forehead with hers gently (Very cute and lovely) 😳

he touched her lip with his finger, "agar aap itni khubsoorat na hoti tho shayad Paris ke nazaaron mein zyaada dilchaspi rehti." (How can she not blush and melt) 😳☺️

I can still runaway with someone more romantic and less boring (Oh no...don't say this Zoya, don't)

Ab jaisa hoon, poora package aapko accept karna hi padhega (Mujhe Qubool Hai, Qubool Hai, Qubool Hai. Keh diya...) 😃

"Mrs. Khan, kya aapne socha hai agar aap apni zindagi qurbaan kar dengi tho mera kya haal hoga? (Wonderful) 👏

A few weeks later: Asad's and Zoya's bedroom

Dressed in his white kurta pajama (That's the way I like it)

with a strip in hand (Mubarak ho Mubarak ho)

Don't hold it that close to my face. Have no idea where it's been (LOL) 😆

Kya galti huyi hai mujhse? (Bahot bahot bhadi galti huyi aapse...as in huge!)

Aapne jo kiya hai, wo aaj tak mere saath kisi ne nahin kiya (Ya Allah, yeh ladki kuch bhi bol leti hain. Thank God, someone else did not do that to you)

"Thank you Asad." - Asad was her way of expressing her heartfelt feelings for him (When will she start to address him by his first name)

"I am an architect. Not a strip reader!" (Mr. Funny Ahmed Khan) 😛

Our child will always have his parents with him/her (Never ever break this promise)

Hum dono se zyaada yeh koi nahin jaanta ki bina abbu ya ammi ke zindagi kitni gumnaam hoti hai (True...)

I can only handle one of your kind. Abhi aadha pagal hua hoon, poora pagal nahin hona chaahta (What is this...Mr. Khan is hilarious) 😆

Unhein pregnancy ka shaq bhi nahin hota (Hahaha, he is not THAT stupid)

kya naam hai uska-----sugar singh? (You crack me up, Mr. Khan) 😆

ya phir Ustad Nusrat Fateh Ali khan (Wah wah...)

"how incredibly foolish. Yeh ammi ban na chaahti hai? Looks like I will end up having two kids!" (Hahahaha, bechara Mr. Khan) 😆

"Where would you like your back rub Mrs. Khan? Lower or upper back?" He whispered softly (Okay, that's it...I melted)

"Aur aapki tarah khush mijaaz." (Wow Di, loved the use of 'khush mijaaz') 👏

Next morning at the doctor's office

why-did-you-have-to-ask-such-a-dumb-question look (Yes, I can very well imagine that look on his face)

Agar aapne thodi precaution barti hoti tho itni jaldi main pregnant nahin ho jaati! (WHAT?! Think before you speak Mrs. Khan)

most women start eating healthy once they get pregnant (Aap bhi, Sangeeta Di) 😉

I will make sure she has an effortless nine month journey (Such a caring husband) 😊

Back at the Khan Villa

Dilshaad's birthday was at least three months away (Really Zoya? You could not think of something else? Better?) 😛

"Gynecologist ke paas check up?" (LOL...Zara bataiye Mr. Khan. Check up for men?) 😆

"I second that." (I third that...I know this one does not even exist, but its my own invention) 😎

"Zoya---agar door hi jaana hota tho itne paas kyun aata?" (Beautiful...)

Kahan se shuru karoon, Di? Acha chalo, first things first...Welcome back! So good to see you here after a long time 😃 Aap aaye toh forum mein ek dum jaan aa gaya.

You never ever fail to impress me. With this SS you have proven, yet again, that you are the mother of stories. What a perfect blend of romance, comedy, love and relationships.

Can I say one thing? I am in love with your Mr. Khan. Mujhe bhi aisa shauhar chahiye 😳 I love his funny side (I think he does not even know himself he could be that funny).

He is so caring towards Zoya now; time table, making sure that she has the right nutrition. Do men like him exist Am I living in a dream world now? Yes, aur woh sab aapke wajah se hain... You write so damn good that one forgets about the current track (where there is no AsYa romance whatsoever) lekin yahan toh ek dum 24x7 nok jhok chal rahi hain.

Don't we all love that about them?😳

Aap toh jaante hain, I am a big lover of good written dialogues and you top that list! Literally, I loved every single word and dialogue. In fact, I wanted to quote a lot more but the only thing I would say is: perfect, wah, kya baat, amazing, wonderful, lovely, nice, cute, sweet, beautiful, great, fantastic, mindblowing, zabardast, jhakas, superb and much more.

Throughout the whole chapter I had this huge big smile on my face, so my jaws really hurt now 😆 AsYa ke liye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayar hoon 😆

On a serious note (surprisingly enough, I can be serious too): You were, you are and will always be my most favorite! No second thoughts and doubts. Keh diya, BAS!

The best part about this that all the single ladies got a sneak preview of a woman's pregnancy. Kuch seekhne ko mil gayi 😊

I must thank my Tamatar too for being the birthday girl. Warna aap humein aise superb wala SS dehte? 😛 I can not say it enough Di, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

What do you want as a reward??? Filhaal this is what I can give you: jaadi ki jhappi 🤗

a place in my heart ❤️ and a chumma MUAH!!!

Originally posted by: farha15

sangeeta di 😊missed ur posts.you are a fabulous writer👏happy to see you back di. good story.Asad and zoya as banter on healthy eating😆.

Originally posted by: webuser7

Loved it Sangeeta!! Good to see you write again!! Thanks to Shona, we got an AsYa story from you!! Happy birthday again Shona!! 🤗

Lovely nok-jokh from our fave couple! Wonder if Zoya will ever be cured of the foot in the mouth disease!! Probably never!! She needs to eat nutritious food now! Well, whole wheat pizza with spinach topping is yummy! The Khans should try it out!! 😃

Mr. Khan has no clue what's in store for him!! The mood swings will be fun to watch!! 😉

It's a busy weekend for me, so sorry for the short post!

Originally posted by: nisha150

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Woww dii u bak 🥳🤗

I m sooo happieee😃 tears of joy roll downed my eyes...!!😃

Missed u alottt di...and even ur workk!!

Awww...Asya they are over cuteee and adorableee at most of the timess...!!

Love them ❤️

Sooo now we getting a stubboe\rn zoya and a caringg asad...!! waiting to see more of it...!!

I hav no adjectives to describe it that howw sweett and amazinggg asya are now...!!😊😊😊

You were , you are and You vil always be the bestt writer...and even one of the PERFECT writer...!! 👏

Love u lott for write again somethng very beautifull!!🤗

Updtaee nxt prt soon-ishh 😳😳

Love

Nisha ❤️