Asya OS - A day in SM

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My first :-) comments welcome
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Backdrop : Shirin has gone to be with Ayan, Rashid still not well,Asad decides to let his Musibat work in his company's IT department so he can be with her . Zoya is finally back in the game doing what she loves to do best.
Has already made friends and her office folks laugh /gossip/eat lunch/ talk Dhoni with her and there is a month left for the wedding. Razia cant do much cause Zoya is hardly home and sleeps for 6 hours the rest of the time is her work/deadline.

Asads POV

I finally managed to drag my Musibat out today at 6:00 from work, wanted to get her blueberry cheese cake and kachori.. been so long I feel she may faint during our wedding, she hardly eats/sleep, guess my fault I shouldn't have let her get back to computers and instead let her deal with the aunties.I have to agree I am in love with my working fiance and at work most of the time I want to do things to her that would be totally inappropriate.I thought will freshen up and go out .

As we walked in to the house I saw a bunch of ladies again waiting, Zoya tugged my hand and I roll my fingers into a fist and wonder ab kya hua.

Luckily ammi was smiling so that cant be too bad right ?
Any way we entered home to find all the aunties , 4 to be precise jumping on seeing us.
One of them came in front and said " aaj dilshad bi ne bataya ki aap jaldi aa
rahe ho isliye hum aagaye. Woh kya hai ki hume patha chala ki kaise Zoya ka
photo badalkar chipwaya gaya, to hum dar gaye..humari bhi betiyan hai. Kya zoya hume thoda computers sikha sakthi hai? Yeh Facebook kya hai..
?"

Before I can answer my Magnet rushes " of course khalas of course..aaj se shuru karthey hain.."
And for the next 2 hours she creates a schedule and goes to teach them.
Promises to come home by 7:00 and do a 1:5 hours session for them on how to use the computer/how to friend ur own kids in FB.
The aunties are totally gushing over her..and then they ask "beta hum badle mein kya de tumhe"
My Dimpled Magnet goes " aunties mujhe khana nahi banana aatha woh be traditional toh sikhaoge? My unke liye kuch tradtional banana chahti hoon "

Of course aunties are fighting over whose house she comes to learn first. They decide Sunday mornings and decide to take turns .After a lot of hugfest with zoya they finally leave.

So now goes my weekdays,Sundays and ofcourse cheese cake/kachori for the day.

Seeing me angry and walking around ammi says "hota hai" hands me our dinner and says "jao khao "

Now I see her with her computer in the living room , someone from work had to call since the code broke.. .

I push her laptop away and feed her, she realizes I haven't had food and starts to feed me too. Gives me a peck on the cheek and both of us blush.

I am just about to return her favor when Nuzat comes and says "Bhaiya mujhe bhi khilao" and now I am feeding both of them.
Then Dadi comes and says "main asad ko khilati hoon"
Dinner done and wasim chacha takes our plate and zoya starts her shayari
Before we know it nuzzat is sleeping on Zoya on the couch, Zoya is sleeping on her fav part my shoulder, Dadi is holding my hand and sleeping on the other side. Even I had to agree it was a cute sight and a nice feeling too.
I saw everyone sleeping and did what I had wanted to do all day, kissed my Musibats lips and her forehead and then slept . I had to agree Mr Gafoor did invest well in his furniture's :)
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Please this is only for IF readers
-ranu


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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is sooo cute... 😊 😊
👏 👏 👏
nyc 1...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u'r wlcm...
i knw its os bt try 2 ryt its 2nd part...
asya on date... wd kachori, cake...
n raziya drowning in jealousy lake... 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rjhr

u'r wlcm...
i knw its os bt try 2 ryt its 2nd part...
asya on date... wd kachori, cake...
n raziya drowning in jealousy lake... 😆 😆



sure let me think I would think Razia would get Jealous only if Gafoor is getting impressed with Zoya.I would love to see in the show the zoya who is so good that its infectious just like asad everyone learns to smile too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot! all your comments really make me feel good . I have been a silent reader for the most part .

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