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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

plz update maliha

eager for next part

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Amazing.

Loved it.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

plz update soon its more than two days now

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Zaya_Kabhi

@Zaya_Kabhi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#724

Oh My God,
it was so so so amazing and well written,

you are one of tthe best writers of the forum, who deliver these emotions with so much excellence, that the readers can feel the pain,
i was reading comments, and many commented k you made them cry, its the power of words

Asad ahmed khan, he was the hero of this update
and asad-zoya bonding that was out of world, short part but still much power and meaning ful
asad-najma part showed the belief a sister holds on his brother

dilshhad. i don't want to comment

overall i just loved this update

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Zaya_Kabhi

@Zaya_Kabhi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

He
so am done with it
it was much shorter,,
promise next update is in 2 days😳😳

what about the last line?

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Zaya_Kabhi

@Zaya_Kabhi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#726

Update Soon
Update Soon
Update Soon

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For me to know and you to guess :)

@-Awaari-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#727

Dilshads blinded...so much that she is not seeing asads pain
I feel sad for zoya too
My poor asad bhaijaan...I want to give him a hug :'(

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#728

First i want to say sorry for not commenting earlier. Actualy i forget what happend in previous updates. So thoda confuse tha. So i read all chapters again. Thats why i m late hope u dont mind. Not come to update. U nailed it again with your amazing writing skill. The way u written the broken asad is just perfect. I m imagining this scene as KSG as Asad. The way zoya get panicked after hearing that asad goes to meet rashid is awesome. The pain of asad the fear of zoya for asad going to his shell is beautifuly described. The way zoya trying to console him, try to calm him is amazing. It remind me after the situation of gudiya factory revelation in february. I imagine KABHI as ASYA in this scene. I fell in love with your story again. Dont want to say anything about dilshad. I just hate her. So selfish. Thanks for pm. Hope u not mind for late. And please pm me next part when u give update. Please

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#729

It was a superb update..just perfect..
loved the every bit of the entire chapter..
the way Zoya supported Asad..she has proved that she is the best life partner anyone can get..
nd Dilshad..i am now hating this women..
nd that Rashid..he is the main root cause of Asad's pain
nywayz awesome it was..do continue soon..!!