AsYa OS: Reluctance

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

A bit late but still ..

RES 😆

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sabnam

@princessromz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

nice one 😊

if this would have happened in the show it would have been great

thanks for the pm

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sabnam

@princessromz

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.
RES!
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Lol, I resed as I thought Monica would be lurking around and steal my spot.😆 I barely get it these days. Being a coolbie is tiring. 🤣 LOL, its loads of fun!😃

Anyways to the update! Nice concept simi :) Really liked this, as the CV;s never explored this part. I wish you had made a little longer and showed us what happened later!

I think a part 2 would end the story well. :)

Nish

Edited by princessromz - 11 years ago

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Awesm dear... Loved it to the fullest...

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

it was good as it can be, but wanted more something romantic ir cheesy and under the line meaning dialogues z!!!

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

that was so cute

wish that could have been a scene in QH

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

this was so sweet😳

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Sonam

@angel2930

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

O teri ki...it ws after Airport engagement...😲
after reading ur 1st line...

Asad claimed Zoya to be his in front of everyone.

i thought it was after Asad claimed Zoya in SM...😆😆😆

I AM ENGAGED...
this dialogue reminds me of ASAD in his room wearing half shirt...hayyyeee...😳

ha ha...😆
Zoya too too smart...:-B
samaj gayi ki her Mr. Khan is staring her frm the corner of his eyes...😉

MARATHON CHASE...ha ha...really Mr. Khan, u did not..???😉

ASAD & ZOYA...
ladte raho beta...cos we love you the same...❤️

and Zoya's THANK YOUs were too too nice...so irritated...annoyed...😆

"Do you have any idea how sacred and pious all these rituals and traditions are for me?"

for Asad also dear Zoya...😊

"Well, you must stop a lot of girls by giving them rings, if this not a big deal for you!"

good one...loved this dialogue...👍🏼

overall...i just loved it...🤗🤗🤗

and pls continue...😛...ha ha...😆

and thnk u so much fr the pm...😊

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
Wow...That was amazing...
Just some days back I was thinking that we have writers who could write Asya much better and also more beautifuly then 4 Lions's Cvs and writers do these days...Thank you for proving me that I was thinking right...😆

This should have happen in the show, and what we get are very, really rushed scenes, that leaves us unsatisfied...

Awww! Thanks so much! 😃😃

I agree that many pivotal scenes are often rushed! And it kind of kills the whole thing then!