AsYa OS: Reluctance

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@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mochhug

I don't know if I could do it justice 😳 besides you'll just be continuing your own story 😳

and YES. You ARE amazing

Now you are making me blush! 😳

I just do what I love doing! 😃

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: saida.m

Now you are making me blush! 😳

I just do what I love doing! 😃

Blush away 😃

It's the truth 😳

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@Zola029

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: saida.m

Thanks, hun!

Yeah, they eclipsed that part in the show! No way they had a silent car-ride! 😆😆

You're welcome !!!

Knowing Miss Farooqui we can be sure that it indeed wasn't one 🤣

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madina12

@madina12

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Lovely update...
This should have happen in the show 😃
Asad really have issues in admitting his mistakes...LOL
Well done

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wow...That was amazing...

Just some days back I was thinking that we have writers who could write Asya much better and also more beautifuly then 4 Lions's Cvs and writers do these days...Thank you for proving me that I was thinking right...😆

This should have happen in the show, and what we get are very, really rushed scenes, that leaves us unsatisfied...

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Well written!Loved it..😃

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Very sweet os
thanx for pm
do pm me for your future work
continue soon

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grad2011

@grad2011

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awesome!!! please do continue😳

thank for the pm :)

Edited by grad2011 - 11 years ago

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This os was perfect👏
This should happen in our qh..
But sadly its not happened😭
But this made me think abt their car journey
I loved it..
Thank u so much for the lovely pm's...

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Fabulous os👍🏼

They should have showed a scene like this in the serial...Don't know why they just ignored this part...I would have thought something like this would have been pivotal to the story...

What you wrote is exactly what should have happened😃

We need a part 2 now😃 I'm sure you'll be able to dredge one up from some way in that busy brain of yours...Pretty please...