Unpredictable Lives - FF #3 Completed Pg 86 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
i hope ayaan take zoya on time to hospital...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i want to know what haroon going to do now... since
zoya escape...

asad coming for you 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hope your are not ... free...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey
BIG THANK YOU to all of you for all your comments.

And just because I love you all I am updating this one a day early 😊

Please see below for another hopefully convincing action packed chapter

Do let me know what you think

Lots of Love

Saima

Fifty Eight

Asad took his first step towards the damned street and as he did all hell broke loose. Arjun and Ajay, who had been caught on to ran towards him and then turned around to face the goons that had been following them. As the screaming girls and cowardice pimps ran in to the safety of their rooms they left an empty street that on one side had three brave NIA officers who were ready to kill and a troop of mismatched fools who were getting ready to take them on.

As they all stood there facing each other Haroon, Arvind Shinde and Dev Raaj stepped out into the open. Seeing Haroon angered all three of them 'you guys just can't stay away...how many more times are you going to walk in and ruin our plans' Dev Raaj screamed at them. In all the time Dev Raaj was addressing them Asad had his eyes fixated on Haroon 'Mr Khan...looking at me like that won't achieve anything...there is no reason to be surprised...you see how gullible you all are...you call yourself the best and yet you didn't know what was happening right beneath your very own noses' 'You are not getting away with this Haroon, you are going to pay for Kunal's death with your own life...you traitor' Arjun shouted back at him 'Kunal was a fool, he was given the chance to talk but he didn't so he lost his life...just like the three of you will lose yours today' Asad looked at Ajay and then both looked at Arjun, it really was now or never until their back up arrived they had to face what stood before them alone.

'On the count of three' Ajay said 'one...two ...three' as soon as Ajay said three all of them dived forward and rolled into different directions. The sounds of guns being fired filled the air as a full-fledged fight broke out. With limited ammunition Ajay, Arjun and Asad were left with whatever they could pick up to use as their weapon against the mob and if there was nothing they used their bare hands to rip them apart.

Asad refused to show any mercy, with what was roaring inside him right now only Allah could have saved anyone from him, but none were so lucky. Asad found himself standing face to face with Shinde he picked up a bat they lay on the floor and started to walk towards him. Shinde ran forwards trying to punch Asad only to be hit mercilessly over the head. Blood started to trickle down his face, he stood up knowing full well that this was it 'Asad...no...please...I am willing to tell you everything...anything you need I will tell you just don't kill me' Asad didn't respond he just carried on walking towards him with one thing on his mind, death. Asad pulled back the bat and with his entire strength he hit it agaist the back of Shinde's head making him fall flat, Shinde took his last breath spluttering out blood.

It didn't take long for the police and other NIA officers to come in. as they took care of the men Asad and Arjun ran after Haroon and Dev Raaj, they chased them through the streets and small alley ways that were just big enough for them to pass through. Asad and Arjun finally managed to catch up to them as they came to a dead end. Haroon took his gun out and pointed it towards Asad 'one...one more move and I'll shoot' he said as he tried to catch his breath. Asad didn't care that Haroon was pointing the gun at him, he continued to walk towards him at which point Haroon pressed the tigger 'shit' he said screamed in frustration as nothing happened , he had run out of bullets, throwing the gun towards Asad Haroon charged forward, and jumped on Asad making him fall back.

On the other side Dev Raaj took on Arjun, as each one of them tried to knock out the other harder a lot of blood started to appear. Dev Raaj had hit Arjun hard making him fall to the ground, he picked up a large rock and held it over his head but before he could let go of it a gun shot fired, the bullet came flying to hit him in the gut. Dev looked up as he dropped the rock and saw Ayaan standing there with a gun in his hand, keeping his eyes on him he fell to his knees and then collapsed before Arjun. Arjun looked at Ayaan and nodded with a faint smile as if to say thank you.

The two of them ran a few yards further to the left where Haroon was still trying to get a punch that would actually hit Asad. 'Get his leg, that will put him out of action' Arjun said to Ayaan who was still holding the gun 'or I could just let Bhaijaan continue to beat the shit out of him' Ayaan said smiling 'Ayaan...' 'Ok...I'll shoot' Ayaan aimed for Haroons right leg and in one shot managed to cripple him. Asad stopped as he saw Haroon fall to the floor; he turned around to see an all too smiling Ayaan and a very tired and injured looking Arjun.

Mr Roy came running towards them with Raj and Ajay, he saw Haroon lying on the floor wincing in pain 'take him away' he ordered. Ajay and Raj picked Haroon up and pushed him all the way back to the van. Mr Roy walked up to his men 'I am very proud of you, not only have you brought down Victor's men but you were able to get Kunal justice...' 'not just yet sir, our fight doesn't end here, not until that piece of scum tells us where Victor is, the day I put Victor and the rest of his men underground I will not rest...Kunal will not have received justice' Asad said. 'Ayaan get these two to the hospital now...I will see you back at base...well done boys'.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Wow, awesome another power packed update. Finally they caught that traitor Haroon. I loved all that chasing on the streets. I was imagining it happening in real. We didn't get to find out anything about zoya. I hope she is fine. Looking forward to read more.

Thanks again for the lovely update.

Vinita
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinita459

Wow, awesome another power packed update. Finally they caught that traitor Haroon. I loved all that chasing on the streets. I was imagining it happening in real. We didn't get to find out anything about zoya. I hope she is fine. Looking forward to read more.

Thanks again for the lovely update.

Vinita


Hey

Thank you. Hope it was realistic enough.

Asad and Zoya coming up in the next chapter.

🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
This part was very realistic i loved their fight 😃

But i would love to see Asad beat more Haroon he really deseve it😈😆

And thank you for this udapte 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally the action I awaited for long time and I was so engrossed in it never knew when I reached the end
I felt like I was watching it alive asad stepping in his roaring voice which is enough to send chills down the spine and then only three of them but enough for those dumb ass
and the way he took the bat and hit shinde and chased haroon I wished he would have beaten him black and blue but that he can do in remand room also
I was all action packed and ayaans entry on right time made it blockbuster hit
just too good
thanks for pm and thanks for updating It one day earlier than its actual posting thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: akaswan

This part was very realistic i loved their fight 😃


But i would love to see Asad beat more Haroon he really deseve it😈😆

And thank you for this udapte 🤗



Aah thank you...that's a relief I kept reading it again and again wasn't sure if it sounded childish

Haroon gets wat he deserves lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: snehasya

finally the action I awaited for long time and I was so engrossed in it never knew when I reached the end

I felt like I was watching it alive asad stepping in his roaring voice which is enough to send chills down the spine and then only three of them but enough for those dumb ass
and the way he took the bat and hit shinde and chased haroon I wished he would have beaten him black and blue but that he can do in remand room also
I was all action packed and ayaans entry on right time made it blockbuster hit
just too good
thanks for pm and thanks for updating It one day earlier than its actual posting thanks


Thank you so much Sneha I really appreciate it..

I posted one day earlier just as a thanks and token of appreciation to you all, it's the least I can do 😊

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