ASYA TS: WITH YOU FOREVER ( Updated Chapter 3 last part) - Page 17

Originally posted by: shonajain

awsume TS
read all the parts in one go
simply loved it
speciallly last part and last line...anger management classes🤣
write more Ts os n ss

lots of lov
shona

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Choco,

Just read this TS. Well I am surprised to know that I had read your OS but didn't know it was you. lol.

This one was a beautiful piece. I so loved it. You know this time period in the serial was so critical & unnerving. I really didn't know what was going to happen. Over here you've used the perfect words to create the same situation & the emotions.

It was so sad to see the ever confident AAK all broken & hurt, crying like a baby. It shattered my heart hearing him say that Zoe would leave him too. He really had been hell throughout his life now assuming the only last person to love you would leave was natural.

I love Zoya so much for being there for him at each step of these difficult days of his life. Her faith nor love faltered even once during all this. I agree with Zoe, she must have been apprehensive about facing him after their love making cox of his nature to reprimand such behavior. But I was really glad that he was happy & normal & in fact even more expressive of his love.

I don't know who to side with on the issue of leaving to New York. Both had their reasons & both were right on their own place. Asad no doubt was broken beyond repair. All he had in his life was Zoya, & he wanted to take her away to some place where they could begin a new with just the two of them in their own world. Zoe was right too. She knew what a torture it could get to stay at the pagal house & someone needed to be there for her. Zoe had found a mother in her & she couldn't find it in her to leave her ammi.

The months after Asad left were pure torture. Seriously, how dumb can he get at times? It took him months to realize no to accept that he couldn't live without his love. Oh my Zoe's condition behind him broke my heart. I don't have words to tell what her daily routine did to me. How can she be so loving & caring?

I was relieved to see Asad accepting Zoe without a huff. I thought he would start on his lectures again. I know it must have killed him to see Zoe suffering alone for what they did together & that too without a regret or fret. So glad to see them back with each other, where they belong.

Start your new AsYa one soon.

Love lots..

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

OMG! How come I haven't read this TP> 😲 I completely loved every bit of it Berry. This is something very beautiful! ❤️ I really wish that Asad and Zoya continued to stay in the Khan villa instead of going to Siddiqui Mansion.🤔

Loved how beautifully you have portrayed the emotions of Asad and Zoya in this TS!

Fantastic work! ❤️

- Mrina <3

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Just found this story and read it all in one go...it's amazing😳...beautifully written😳...loved it to bits🤗..

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Thanks Mrina, glad you liked it 😃