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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan



OKay deal😉

I will translate too when i'l write in french😃


ok deal mango...
So when r u updating apple has updated today her story...
Wbu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--


ok deal mango...
So when r u updating apple has updated today her story...
Wbu


I'll maybe update tonight or tomorrow 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan



I'll maybe update tonight or tomorrow😃


ok haas u will at last update na... Haha
i am waiting mango for ur update... So will u send pm with update or will send afterwards... I know u will tell that i am lazy so will send tomo...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--


ok haas u will at last update na... Haha
i am waiting mango for ur update... So will u send pm with update or will send afterwards... I know u will tell that i am lazy so will send tomo...[/QUOTE

LOL yes i'm going to update 😆

I don't know 😛

No i will send PM with the update but if you want i can already make one comment and RES like this it will be more simple for you 😃😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan


no its bette mango that u shld send pm to all that will be easy for u n others
so send pm so ppl will read it with easy...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi this is another part of my SS i hope you will all liked it.

I want to dedicated again to my bubby Swapno ( I love you and thank you for your help 🤗) but also to Cherry ( --SH7_Sunny--) who is an IF-Rockerz now and to ArabFlower thank you for your advices.


PART 5

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM?" shouted Zoya.

Farhan said nothing and just kept starting at her; Zoya rose and shouted at him.

"I said what you are doing in my room; get out from my room now"

"Don't raise your voice and don't talk to me like this, this is my house so I can do what I want to do and this room is in my house so just shut up"

"I don't care, just get out of here" Zoya had tears in her eyes, she began to push him to the door, but he stopped suddenly grabbed her by her arms.

"I said don't talk to me like this" and he pushed her and he leave the room with an evil smile on his face.

Zoya did not know how to react she was shocked her tears began to flow and she began to sob too.

"What I'm doing here? I want to go home. I don't want live here anymore. I'm going to call my parents and told them how this family is mean with me. I want to leave" she cried for a long time. Finally when she was calm, she decided that she was not going to call them because they had sacrificed so much to send her here to treat with the best doctors. She could not be selfish and told them all that and she did not want to worry them at all for nothing.

She wiped her tears and left the room putting a big smile. She will not going to let him spoil her day

"Stupid cockroach, what he thought of himself." She muttered to herself.

"Because of him I got up early for nothing. What I'm going to do all day? Nikhat in Najma are in school and I'm here alone... arrrghrrr".

She went to the kitchen, but stopped short at the door

"Allah Miyan!! What's happening here, how do all these dishes come in the sink? I had done all the dishes last night before going to sleep" Zoya was disgusted.

"And coincidentally it is me who must still need to do it again. I wonder what does this Billo do in this house" as Zoya found that Tanveer looks like a cat she decides to call her Billo.

LATER IN THE DAY IN KHAN MENSION

"Ammi, can we go to see Zoya and take her for shopping? She must be bored alone all the day and like this she can see the town and where's the mall" asked Najma.

"Yes it's a good idea I really like her" said Nikhat.

"You are right Najam but I don't know if her Aunty will let her go with you, try to call her and asked them" replied Dilshad.

Asad who was going to the kitchen heard them talk about Zoya and he said

"Zoya, Zoya what do you all have with her?"

"And what do you have against her" replied Nikhat.

Asad glared at her, he was burning with rage. He was about to say something when Dilshad interrupted them.

"Not again, please. You two are impossible. Nikhat this is your elder brother. You must respect him; this is not a way to talk to him."

"One day, when Ammi will not be there to stop me and you will see what I will do to you and your big mouth" and saying that Asad went in his room.

"Girls go call Zoya, it's been late" Dilshad nudged them.

IN ASAD'S ROOM

"This girl really annoys me" Asad was very angry with Nikhat. He did not understand why she was like that.

Asad did not know why he reacted like this?" She doesn't look like a bad person but Farhan will never lie to me if he said that it's surely the truth" thought Asad.

Thinking about Farhan "what is he doing?" He decided to send him a message.

"Hi ! What are you doing I want to go out for some fresh air, want to came?"

Few minutes later his mobile pinged.

"I can't go right now, an important thing to do but we can go later if you want"

"Okay, see you later then" replied Asad.

SAME TIME IN SIDDIQUI'S MENSION

"Okay I'll come I need some fresh air" said Zoya to Najma who was in line with her phone.

Zoya hang up and took her purse to leave but Tanveer stopped her.

"Who are you talking with and where are you going?"

"I don't owe you any explanation and this is not your problem, so move away please" Zoya tried to be the most polite possible.

Tanveer could not believe her ears.

"Don't talk to me like this and just answer my question" She said with outraged tone.

"Or What?" Zoya was really tired about all this rubbish but she decided to reply her.

"I'm going to the mall with Najma and Nikhat, now move"

"You are lying I'm living here since my childhood and they never asked me to go out with them"

"And what can I do about that?" with that Zoya stormed out of the house.

" Ammi, did you hear how she was talking with me?" Tanveer complained to her mother.

"Yes, don't worry. I will show her how to talk with the other when she will return home" Razia said with an evil smirk on her face.

IN THE CAB

"Hi Farhan, I'm on my way. I will join you in front of the library and I can't wait" send Nikhat to Farhan.

"Okay, see you there I can't wait too"

"With whom are you talking, can't you let this poor mobile rest a little?" Najma was very irritated by her sister and her mobile.

"It's Houdah I must join her in front of the library. She has my history book and I really need it. So sorry girls I can't come with you but I will join you later" Nikhat lied to them.

"Don't take much time Nikhat, you know Asad will not be happy with all this."

And with that Nikhat joined Farhan and Zoya and Najma leave there for the mall.

LATER IN THE EVENING

Asad was with Farhan and their other friends.

"Guys look this is Ali. I hate him, he's not even ashamed" said Farhan.

Ali was one of their friends but one day they saw him kissing one of a sister of another friend of them and since they stopped to talk with him.

"The guys who will touch one of my sisters, I'm going to kill him " said Asad with anger in his voice.

Farhan look at him with scary eyes and an evil smile and thought

"What are you going to do? You can't even imagine how I hate you Asad." Despite the fact that he hated Asad, Farhan was also really scared of him.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update !
Loved it !
Zoya 😭 My poor Baby 😭
She's all alone 😭
Tanveer 🤬😡
Farhaan is such a jerk ! 😡
What's his problem !?
Now he doesn't even like Asad ?
Like he doesn't love anyone ! 😡
Nikhat is such a big fool ! 😡
Hope Asad will soon see Farhaan true face !
Eager to read your next update !
Continue soon (:
Thanks for the pm (:
Edited by zola007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the whole update!!🤗

but not the more of Asad-Zoya...
when will their part come buddy???
I missed them.
Farhan is awarded with " world hater" from me. He hates everyone...How can that possible.
Well written but again short update.
I need longer one next...
Update soon..
and thank you so much for this "quick" update..😛 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update buddy ,,
hate Farhaan soo mucch now !
but their wasn't Asad-Zoya scene ??
but its getting interesting ,,
soo update sooon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update :)
Getting interesting
What's with tanveer and Farhan?
Hope to see done AsYa scenes next time
Why asad doesn't like Nikhat ...I forgot this part
Update soon :)

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