Asad-Zoya FF: Heartbeat Warfare II Chapter 22 Pg 119

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Shau

@delena_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Very nice update please do continue soon

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livelovelaughh

@livelovelaughh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

loveedd it !! plz update soon and thanks for the PM!! :)

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deziqt611

@deziqt611

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

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nnnnnnn

@nnnnnnn

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

why look at the bloopers when we have such an exquisite piece of work to read ?!!😃

Wonderful !

i so loved reading this ...

thank you for the pm

continue sooon😛

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

This story is truly getting interesting..👏

Asad has started falling for Zoya..😳

But why did Zoya see her Ammi?? Bit confused there..🤔

But hope everything goes well..🥱

And once again an awesome update👍🏼

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Hey Dear,

The update was really well written. Asad has come to a point where he feels Zoe's pain. His presence in the OT even after his own weak state showed he cares about her & the promise he made to her & of her wish of him to be around him.

I just loved Dr. Gupta's line: "Your Life's life is safe."

He has realized that he has fallen for her & I am glad he's not running away from it, or it looks like it to me now. He has accepted that her well being matters a lot to him. The smile that he had on his face rushing back to her ward at least made me feel as if he has accepted her as his legal wife by heart & not only on paper.

I just hope she's fine. the last line has left me scared.

Plz continue soon.

Congratulations on the new thread.

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Another brilliant update👍🏼

To be quite honest i actually don't mind the medical bloopers, maybe because i have no clue about medicine apart from what meds to take when you have the flu...I appreciate the story though😃

There is so much realism in this story...It does not seem far fetched at all...This is simply amazing👍🏼

The way you described asad's reaction in the theatre was superb...Saagar and raavi's convo was sweet, they both worried for their new friend...

Asad realises he has feelings for his paper wife,"Allah, tera lakh lakh shukar." 😃

Zoya seeing her ammi...Side effects of the drugs and because her body has been through so much...Just my thoughts...

Congrats on the new thread🥳

The story is amazingly brilliant...The author is fatasticly talented...so all in all this new thread is very well deserved...

Thank you for a great read and beautiful characters🤗

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

hey congratz for the new thread dear😃

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

thank god zoya is save😛

lovely update

everything is going perfect...loving this story

one of the best story for me

continue soon

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Ananya Agarwal

@..Ananya..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

I'm not very well versed with medical facts so I won't comment on those details 😛
This update brought out Asad's inner emotions so well ⭐️ The way he kept looking at her,wondering about her heart beats, remembering their first meeting and growing uneasiness seeing her pale state it really pointed out his growing care towards Zoya which moves beyond the relationship of a doctor and friend 😃 I loved how he told them the meaning of Zoya with so much affection..Life she is his life after all 😳 I love Dr.Gupta and Raavi for their concern for Zoya and Dr.Gupta for saying something so dynamic in such a simple manner and easy words..Dr.Asad, your life's life is safe 👏 this guy is so cute 😉
Loved Loved this update..Please continue soon 😃