ASYA SS: 3 years later. Completed - Page 22

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

omg so much happened! bravo girl! it was really nice to see finally everything cleared. the cherry on the cake was Asad understanding the meaning of real love and the fact it can never stand against hate :D

i couldn't help but notice that you have taken creative liberties in proving Razia's DNA match with the hair sample without even getting her sample😆it's k on the grand scheme of this SS it doesn't matter. and the arresting statement of "the right to remain silent..." is only in the US i think or maybe in other countries but i have never seen Indian police officers offer the right of silence speech😳😆but again its k...

i know it aint good to point out things like this but these things made me smile so had to mention it :)

oh forgot to mention i loveee Ayaan too much to take his impulsiveness and galtis to heart so it pains me to see Ayaan suffering... pl kuch keejiye na😃

lovely update! :)

They work for the CIA and if you remember it's related to the case they were solving in America. Hence they had to say the right of silence speech as Gaffur and Razia will be arrested under the American court. And the DNA is because they've been working on their file for a while and the American police has a database that matches people. Hence the hair. Haha I added the hair like CID does in their episodes because I needed to put Razia in jail. Anyway I liked your observations. But I thought if clarify that Rehaan is still working for CIA, hence it's their duty to say the rights.

Thanks for the feedback. Appreciate everything :) and you'll see what happens with Ayaan soon. I keep mentioning him because I haven't forgotten him

Originally posted by: angel2930

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">amazing part...👏
u r such a gr8 writer...👏
and let me tell u... u made me cry...😭

do i really need to say nythng further...???
evrythng ws just so so perfect...👏
described so so beautifully & perfectly...👏

could feel Zoya's pain...Asad's pain...Dilshad's pain...Rehaan's pain...😭

thnks fr the pm dear...😊</font></font>

Haha I didn't think my work had the potential to make readers cry, so thank you so much!

Originally posted by: oaz30

U better not say it's ending soon . I want to see raz and gaf suffer ... Haila they are sooo cute asya. Lovely part

Lol no, I still have a few parts lined up. But I see it ending in let's say 10 parts? I don't know yet. Once I finish I'll let you know ;)

Thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: manognasai

Emotional update...Zoya cudnt take this much sorrow,betrayal at once.She is broken!She lost her mother bcoz of him,she was more concerned abt Asad that bcoz of her father,Asad and his family had gone through a lot!😭The best was when Asad said "So after Zoya is discharged,she will be mine" and his dialogues with Zoya...❤️Update soon...

Yes! He couldn't let her go, his love is much stronger than his hate. And he knows Zoya is not at fault for what happened. So he'll always be with her.

Thank you for the feedback :)

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

<font color="#333333">Hey Dear,</font>

<font color="#333333">This part was so emotional & so well written. It brought tears to my eyes. It really hurts to see Zoe hurt so much due to her biological father. I wish Asad & Rehann get them charged & locked up for a lifetime.</font>

<font color="#333333">I know Asad's love is not so weak that he would reject Zoe due to the blood running In her. I t was so nice to hear the last words Asad said to her before sleeping.</font>

<font color="#333333">I hope they get together in the next.</font>

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<strong><font color="#333333">Love..</font>

Aw! Thanks !

Originally posted by: neemasya

They work for the CIA and if you remember it's related to the case they were solving in America. Hence they had to say the right of silence speech as Gaffur and Razia will be arrested under the American court. And the DNA is because they've been working on their file for a while and the American police has a database that matches people. Hence the hair. Haha I added the hair like CID does in their episodes because I needed to put Razia in jail. Anyway I liked your observations. But I thought if clarify that Rehaan is still working for CIA, hence it's their duty to say the rights.

Thanks for the feedback. Appreciate everything :) and you'll see what happens with Ayaan soon. I keep mentioning him because I haven't forgotten him

WARNING: There's a lot more Haider-Humeira-Ayaan in this, compared to the AsYa moments.

PART 11

Haider had been trying to speak to Humeira about Ayaan's return, he knew that Humeria was still in love with Ayaan but was not ready to accept it. Since his tries with her failed, he took the oppurtunity to get Ayaan alone at the hospital and talk to him. "Ayaan.." Ayaan looked up, surprised a little, considering it was Haider walking towards him, he stood up, "no, sit down, I wanted to speak to you.." Ayaan turned around, but was stopped, "It's about Humeira." Ayaan stopped, nodded his head a little and sat down. Haider took a deep breath and started, "look, I know you love Humeira, and I know you made a mistake by leaving her those years ago," Ayaan looked down ashamed of his mistake, "but I also know that you regret it," Ayaan was confused as to where this was going, "Humeira has always loved you man," to say Ayaan was shocked, would be an understatment. "But..you..and hu.." "she's only with me because I supported her, and was a good friend to her. Yes, I love her, but I will never be able to make her fall in love with me.." Haider looked away, as it hurt him to say this. Ayaan felt guilty that he was the reason that all this had happened, "I know the only person who can make her happy, is you Ayaan. I will support her all her life, but I know that her heart won't ever accept me completely. Please, don't make her go through with this wedding," Haider said in a small voice, as he was now in tears. His heart broke but he knew that he had to do this for his Huneira's happiness. He was willing to sacrifice his love for hers, and he knew that he won't regret this. Ayaan was surprised, his heart swelled at the thought that Humeira still loved him, but Haider's condition made him sad. He couldn't understand how this man was willing to give away his love to someone else. Until today he respected Haider for being a good support for Humeira but there was always a feeling that hated Haider for stealing Humeira from him. But today he realized how wrong he was about Haider, Haider was anything but a selfish guy who had stolen Humeira from him. He didn't know what to tell Haider, he kept silent. "Don't worry about me, I will definitely find myself a hot and happening girl soon Ayaan miyah," Haider tried to lighten up the mood, he stood up patted Ayaan's shoulder and said, "I hope you won't ever hurt her again, regardless of what happens I will always be her friend," and he started to walk away.

Haider had to walk away because he was now crying, he had given his heart away to a man who had broken it years ago. But he knew he had to take this step, he saw how Humeira looked when she saw Ayaan after all these years. He knew he couldn't ever take his place in his heart. While walking away he failed to see Humeira silently listening and crying behind the pillar. She cried, and cried, she knew what she did with Haider was wrong. She lead him on even though she loved Ayaan, she knew she couldn't love Haider yet she promised all the things she shouldn't have. And here he was, he gave up his love for her. Haider had proved time and time again how much he had loved her, but she had failed him, how could she do this. No, I belong to Haider she thought, she closed her eyes to listen to her heart that said for the first time you love him, you love Haider, go after him Humeira. And she ran, Ayaan saw her running, he was confused. "HAIDER!" Humeira screamed after him, Haider turned and saw Humeira running towards him with tears in her eyes. She crushed herself into his arms and cried. Haider was perplexed, "Kya huwa Humeira? Are you okay?" he started checking her up and down, and she smiled and said, "agar aapko meri itni fikar hai, toh kyun mujhe chorkar jaa rahein hain?" Haider was speechless. "hum sirf aapke hain Haider, aur aap sirf humare, aur ye hi sach hain," Humeira continued with a determined tone as she knew what she wanted. She couldn't stand the sight of a dejected Haider leaving. He was hers, and she wouldn't let anyone change that. Yes, she had loved Ayaan all her life, but she realized that she was in love with Haider.

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Zoya woke up after a few hours, a little disoriented as to where she was when she felt a tug on her right hand. She saw Asad sleeping on it, and she smiled. But then she rememebered what had happened, and how she got here to a hospital. Her eyes welled up again, and she sniffed waking Asad up with a jerk. "Zoya.. Zoya, how are you? Are you in pain? Should I .. DOCTOR" and he ran out to get the doctor leaving an amazed Zoya behind. Why doesn't he hate me?! My blood is impure, why is he...her thoughts were interuppted when the doctors walked in and checked her vitals and gave a thumbs up to Asad. He smiled and looked at Zoya and said, "I'll be able to take you home soon." She turned away from him, but he walked upto her took her hand, and turned her towards him. "Zoya..please. Don't turn away from me, from us," Zoya looked a little shocked, "..but..I'm.." "Anwar and Zeenat Farooqui's daughter, who is extremely bubbly, has the most stupid shayaris, is very impulsive, but has a heart of gold. And I love her with all my heart, and soul," Asad interuppted and made sure she knew his choice and decision. At this moment Zoya felt like the luckiest girl in the world, she sat up and hugged Asad with all her might. "Please don't ever hurt yourself again, think about what Rehaan, Jeeju, Ammi, Ayaan and I have to go through. Think about everyone who loves you, how they feel when they see you like this. Please," Asad pulled her chin up and continued, "agar apni nahin, toh meri jaan samajke apne aap ko rokna, I swear Zoya from now on you're never going out of my sight. Tum meri ho, aur tumhari zindagi par mera haq hai. Yaad rakhna." He finished by kissing her forehead, and leaned in to peck her lips softly. Zoya smiled and was happy that Asad hadn't rejected her as she had expected. She was so happy she started crying, "Arrey, ye kya? Dukhi hoti hain tab bhi roti hain, ab khush hain to bhi ro rahi hain. Nikaah ke baad mujhe kaise pata chalega ki aap khush hai ya nahin?" Asad teased her, and she smiled while playfully hitting his chest while hugging him. He smiled and kissed the top of her head, he knew that here in his arms was jannat.

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Ayaan was heartbroken when he saw Humeira run to Haider but he knew what she said was true, he had left her and now she was happy. He had no right to ruin that for her. Haider was Humeira's happiness and Ayaan would give her, her happiness. He was in the garden sitting on the same swing as the one Humeira used to sit on when they fought. He felt a hand on his shoulder, he turned and saw Humeira standing there with a smile. "Ayaan, mujhe aapse baat karni thi," Ayaan straightened up and said, "Ji, boliye," "Ayaan hum jaante hain ki humare beech mein jo tha, ussey hum kabhi nahin badal sakte. Aur na ussey hum bhula sakte hain, lekin..aap jab humein chorkar gaye the. Tab aapne humein ek baar bhi murkar nahin dekha," "haa.." Ayaan tried to defend himself but was stopped by Humeira who said, "abhi humari baat khatam nahin huwi hai, please mujhe bolne dijiye," when she saw Ayaan nod, she continued. "us waqt mein humesha Zoya ko kos ti rehti thi, sab ko kos ti thi, ki un sab ki wajah se ye sab huwa hai. Phir ek din Haider aaye, aur unhone mujhe tang karna shuru kar diya. Unhone mera dost banke mere ghav (wounds) bhare.. Mein sochti thi ki meine jo aapse kiya tha who mohabbat thi, lekin mohabbat ka matlab toh mujhe unhone sikhaya.. Ayaan hum jaante hain ki humne aapse bachpan se mohabbat ki hai, lekin please, mujhe apne Haider se door mat kijiye.." Humeira stopped as she had tears in her eyes. Ayaan understood what she was trying to say, so he smiled and said, "Mein aapko aapki khushi se door kabhi nahin karunga Humeira ji, bas aap ek baar soch kar bataiye, kya yeh aapka akhri faisla hai? Koi dabav nahin dalega aap pe," he still had a little hope. Humeira looked up and said, "Ayaan, aap humare bohot aziz dost hain, lekin mein pyaar ... Is baat ka ehsaas mujhe bohot der se huwa...aapko pata hai, aaj tak meine Haider se kabhi bhi aisi koi baat nahin ki jissey unhe aisa lage mein unhe pasand karti hoon? In fact mein hamesha se ukhri ukhri rehti thi, kyunki mujhe lagta tha ki mein aapki jagah kisi aur ko kabhi nahin de sakti.." Ayaan looked up, he knew this was true, and he nudged her to go on as he needed to hear this too, "lekin aaj tak unhone is baat ka dukh zaahir nahin kiya, kabhi bhi aisi koi harkat nahin ki jissey mujhe bura lage, in fact who toh itne dino se mujhe convince kar rahe the ki mein aapke paas wapis chali jaon," Humeira smiled through her tears, "aapko pata hai? Agar mein abhi is waqt bhi unhe jaakar kahoon ki mein aapke saath jana chahti hoon, toh who khushi khushi meri baat maan lengey?" Humeira looked at Ayaan who nodded as he knew this. "Mujhe hamesha se lagta tha ki mein aapki jagah kisi aur ko nahin de sakti lekin us din, jab Haider ne kaha ki who humein chod dengey aapke liye, tab mujhe pata chala ki mein aapke bina nahin, unke bina jee nahin paaungi.." Ayaan felt his heart break, "I'm sorry Ayaan, lekin mein..mein.." "Mein jaanta hoon Humeira, aap Haider ki hi thi, hain, aur rehengi. Jis din mein aapko chor kar gaya tha, tab kahin na kahin mujhe pata tha ki meine aap par sare haq kho diye hain. Mein..Mein aapke aur Haider ke liye khush hoon. Aapki khushi se barkar mere liye kuch nahin, aur aapki khushi Haider hai." Ayaan smiled as his heart felt much lighter than he expected, he knew that this was the right thing to do. Humeira hugged Ayaan, they stayed like that for a few minutes before they broke the hug, both of them smiled through their tears at they both just got closure.

Humeira and Ayaan walked back to the hospital, where Haider was waiting, hoping that Humeira had decided to be with Ayaan. He saw them walk in hand in hand, he tried to stop himself from being sad, he needed to be strong for her. He saw them walk upto him, he was about to say he was happy for them, but he saw Ayaan take Humeira's hand and put in Haiders. "Apni amaanat ko sambhal kar rakho Haider miyah, bas nikah ke din humein bhool mat jana," Ayaan said with a huge smile. Haider was shocked to learn that Humeira chose him, he looked at her and said, "Lekin Hune..Humeira ye..aap toh.." Ayaan took this as a cue to leave, he knew they needed to be alone to sort this out. "Mein aapse bohot mohabbat karti hoon Haider, please mujhe apna lijiye, mein jaanti hoon ke mere..mere abbu ammi nai..lekin..please ab aap bhi mujhe mat choriye, please.." Humeira started crying, Haider hugged her, he was so happy. "Huneira begum, hum aapko hamesha khush rakhenge, yeh humara wada hai," Haider assured her, "mein bhi aapse be intehaa mohabbat karta hoon," "Toh phir who hot and happening larki ke paas jaane ki baat kyun kar rahe the aap?" Humeira snapped as she hit his chest playfully. Haider smiled and they both continued arguing, Ayaan watched as his Humeira was now happy, despite his heartbreak, he didn't feel as sad as he thought he would. Maybe Humeira was made for Haider, he thought and went home.

Haider was more than happy, he had gained everything, even though they argued a lot, and even though it took her 3 years to admit she loved him, she was his, and he knew that here in his arms was jannat.

I'm sorry, but Ayaan leaving Humeira pissed me off. I think she deserves someone who would love her like she's their world. I'm sorry for AyRa fans who hoped I'd bring Ayaan and Humeira back. I can't do that, Ayaan has always taken her for granted in the show, and I don't appreciate that. Hence why she's going with Haider, and see Ayaan isn't mad, he knows its the right thing to do.

Don't know why I'm justifying this, because it's my story. But yeah, that's all. Hope you enjoyed!

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nice update...

Good...Humeira accepting Haider after 3 yrs.. Well I agree what Ayaan did was wrong but she loved Ayaan since her childhood and it was true love from her side .. Though it is acceptable that life has to move on.. could not accept this. sorry...