AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!'

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@BelleAme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

hiii juliet😊

Any chance of an update??

Its weekend,and m eager to meet the world s best boyfriend..our very own Asad😳

update this today...paleeezzz

Update!

Update!update!!!!!

Ur reader,who keeps waiting for U to update,

Pinky😉

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mhd72

@mhd72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
hey Darling Mili,

I will, I just have some personal agenda happening where I cant sit alone and type,

I will try to put the update through before tomorrow night.

Its w/end already dear...no update so far..

Make it a long one when you do...😛

Update I mean..😉

🤗

Mili.

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@A.Kh_20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

yaayyy!!!!!! first one !!!

love u ..

all i want to do is dhinka chhinka...

Edited by akh20 - 11 years ago

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

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Hey Juliet

Sorry for getting so late with the comment. Had been travelling.

Yet again thoroughly enjoyed myself reading the update.

I am just loving the pace and flow of the story. So many things coming up and adding spice to Asad and Zoya's relation and it is an utter joy to read it. I am a fan of your way with playing with words. Sexy vocabulary u have and your super sexy imagination, hands down. It is just awesome.

The entire scene in the bedroom in the morning was extremely hot. Wow.

Looking forward to how Rashid is going to affect their life and how Asad is gonna handle him.

Loved Asad's predatory ways. He is definitely territorial but its time for Zoya to make him understand certain things though territorial Asad is fun.

lovely update.😊👏

Will be waiting for the next update. Take your time and Take care.

Edited by jasminerose - 11 years ago

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

wow part

thanx for pm

do pm me for next part

continue soon

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#706

Hai girl

Seriously browsing net at 2 ...especially when u r sick. ...health mAtters. ..

Take care s
And take time. ...u r one unique writer..
On ur own...oops. ...too much
...cant helpit...I 😃

Ok now to our lovestory...
I s
Am in a love hate relationship with ur asad...love the concerns and care... hate his dominance...this kind of blind things will just suffocate. ... the partner...
Hope zoya make him realize that soon...

Love the friends group of zoya. ...nice bonding. ...is goa still o ...n...
At the same time zoya should have talked to asad. ...before saying yes for goa...they r equal partners nowsothe fault is is equally zoya 2gg

Love the way asad claims her..love the declaration of zoya to het friends the

looking forworddrfar yeah dr update from u... aftet a long gap..

Take care

Love

Kalyani. .

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

Hey hope you're feeling better now. Thanks for updating as had been waiting for this ff to be updated.

Hope Asad will not fight with her again.

Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#708

awesome as usual
asad working extra hours to spend some time with zoya.hayye how romantic
The butterflies were bloody traitors, Asad
Addicts! give them Asad and they will switch
sides, when did they ever side her anyway.
i loved these lines very much 😆
jealous asad s fun to read 😉
hate dat rashid simply 😡
everything s beautifully written
loved it throughly
cont soon 😉 😊

Edited by CHOCOSWATHI - 11 years ago

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#709

Loved it...!!! Nd its k... get well soon...! hope dat raashid's situation does nt become too difficult...! nd d surprise is still on no...?! eagerly w8ing fr d surprise...! bt hope Safiya sint ruin it with confessin abt Zoya-Zafar crush thingy...! Oh lord...! dont make any fights between asya..!

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-RM-

@-RM-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#710

Uhh what is wrong with Bloody Rashid 😡
Hope his stupid action wont sabotage the much awaited honeymoon 😊

Asad oye hoye! Wat one needs to say about him. He is every women's dream

Just hope he ll maintain his calm after hearing Safiya's stupid revelation ;)

And Zoya is such a rebel man!

Take care of yourself :)

Edited by -RM- - 11 years ago