AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!' - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update... but i have lot to say ...

so asd is all mind... and zoya is all heart...

loved the way asad stood in the bedroom waiting for zoya to say something.. he want to take the leap of faith... much against his mind... asad is justified...

zoya... sweet heart... love the way u throw the cup... but just like ur butterflies... iwas saying.. he didnt know... he is different from u... this step is big on his part too... he knows he is wrong ... not fully though.. bcoz zoya didnt say anything when given a chance..

so i say... both are equally responsible..

asad does know how to convince his zoya... his persona... wow asad using the right things to convince ur hormone driven wife...

one point ... i cry foul...why..

dont tell me they just kissed the whole night...
rain.. both are wet... too much sexual tension... yet they just kissed... i can accpet asad showing restriant..but our zoya...

did they change their wet clothes...??????😉
but liked that... it is just kiss... now that have faith and trust in each other...

for a marriage to become succes love and trust matters...


i dont know much about love.. or what it is..
but trust matters... more for me...
when i read ur kisss through out the night...
i remembered a story...
the boyfriend comes back for a break from his army post... and was given a kiss by his Gf.. he siad it is not good...
after he goes back.. she practices the kiss with few friends of her.. and get it perfect when he comes back...
when he comes back... he is amazed by the kiss he gets... only the problem is... she didnt enjoy the kiss... bcoz she concentrated more on how to kiss him the best...

i know totally out of context with this story...
but this story came into mind...as i read ur update.. as it was shared to me by my best friend... years back...

i guess i have written a lot of crap...

looking forward for the next update...

one more guess... is the story going to end in few chapter,,,,,,,,,😭

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a awesome update dear...loved it...
loved the garden scene sooo much...its beautifully written...the way asad say sorry...sooo cute...& the rain at that perfect time...then the kiss & the kisses whole night...sooo lovely...
continue soon...
Thank u so much for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Juliet.
Lovely update. Very well executed. I am glad that the misunderstanding didn't last long. Finally it rained and they kissed and it was lovely. Definitely trust is one of the most important aspect of a relationship and you portrayed it beautifully. Enjoyed reading it as always.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tis is very lovely...its fabulous...luckly they sorted everyhting out n to add to their luck it started to rain n her dream came true to kiss in the rain...beautifully written...asya are too cute...eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Suprb yr...
So mr khan has learnt his trust lesson finally...I hope so..
N rain ...what a perfect timing...so kissing night...
.Zoya gt her wish fulfilled...well actually much more thn dat 😉 😉
Chl...waitng fr nxt ch...
Jasmine
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWSOME UPDATE...👏

LIKE THE TITLE AND CONCEPT OF UPDATE SO MUCH...👏

ASYA EMOTIONAL SCENE IS ALSO GUD...👍🏼

LIKE CLIMAX SUDDNLY START RAINING...😉

WHOLE NIGHT THEY KEEP KISSING EACH OTHER...😉

NOW WAITING FOR NXT PART SO UPDATE SUPER SOON...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
This part was so perfect👏
Its all about ''TRUST'' 👏
At first im little scared by his anger.. But later i found it as cute..❤️
I felt happy when dilshad said - start by saying I am sorry😆
cute zoya's thoughts - ''ALL I NEED IS YOU''😳 - Cutely wriiten 👏 👏
Happy when asya MU got cleared...
Finally tat thunder & rain lead to romance😳
i felt cuteness overloaded when asad said'' he will be by the door step untill she takes him back''😃
Specially asya kisses- The KISSES - whole night even zoya lost her counting after 18😳
And asad - say u are mine , say you won't leave me❤️ / / / I am only yours - zoya😳
"I love you Asad!" "Are you going to let your last breath go..."☺️☺️☺️

BUTTERFLIES blinked in anticipation😳

PERFECT IS UNDERSTATEMENT👏 👏
FABULOUS PART👏 👏
I loved it a lot..❤️
Thank u so much for the lovely update & pm 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was a great chapter👍🏼
What a misunderstanding...And all Najma's doing...I had thought that it was zoya's old friend...I'm so glad i was wrong😃
What a lesson for Mr. Khan to learn...TRUST...That was so important...
And it rained😉 The time for not so first kisses has come It was just beautiful...
Zoya lost count of the kisses😲 I'm surprised that she was actually able to count, I would have be driven to Mush after the first touch of those glorious lips😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

This was a great chapter👍🏼

What a misunderstanding...And all Najma's doing...I had thought that it was zoya's old friend...I'm so glad i was wrong😃
What a lesson for Mr. Khan to learn...TRUST...That was so important...
And it rained😉 The time for not so first kisses has come It was just beautiful...
Zoya lost count of the kisses😲 I'm surprised that she was actually able to count, I would have be driven to Mush after the first touch of those glorious lips😆

Hey NAVI55,
Point Taken, Driven to Mush it is the next update.😉
Perfectionist2 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82

lovely update... but i have lot to say ...

so asd is all mind... and zoya is all heart...

loved the way asad stood in the bedroom waiting for zoya to say something.. he want to take the leap of faith... much against his mind... asad is justified...

zoya... sweet heart... love the way u throw the cup... but just like ur butterflies... iwas saying.. he didnt know... he is different from u... this step is big on his part too... he knows he is wrong ... not fully though.. bcoz zoya didnt say anything when given a chance..

so i say... both are equally responsible..

asad does know how to convince his zoya... his persona... wow asad using the right things to convince ur hormone driven wife...

one point ... i cry foul...why..

dont tell me they just kissed the whole night...
rain.. both are wet... too much sexual tension... yet they just kissed... i can accpet asad showing restriant..but our zoya...

did they change their wet clothes...??????😉
but liked that... it is just kiss... now that have faith and trust in each other...

for a marriage to become succes love and trust matters...


i dont know much about love.. or what it is..
but trust matters... more for me...
when i read ur kisss through out the night...
i remembered a story...
the boyfriend comes back for a break from his army post... and was given a kiss by his Gf.. he siad it is not good...
after he goes back.. she practices the kiss with few friends of her.. and get it perfect when he comes back...
when he comes back... he is amazed by the kiss he gets... only the problem is... she didnt enjoy the kiss... bcoz she concentrated more on how to kiss him the best...

i know totally out of context with this story...
but this story came into mind...as i read ur update.. as it was shared to me by my best friend... years back...

i guess i have written a lot of crap...

looking forward for the next update...

one more guess... is the story going to end in few chapter,,,,,,,,,😭

Ho GOD! Kals82,
That kiss story about the Army Dude and the chick! - Terrible. She practiced with many boys perhaps so she didn't like her boyfriend when he kissed her. Serves him right.
Coming to your questions about Our Asad and Zoya in the FF "The Butterflies!"
Yes they changed clothes after they came in😆 I thought it was clear and that's why I didn't add it. So yes dry clothes and wet kisses night long. It is called Making out! It actually works very well as an appetizer before doing the deed.
About if this FF is ending soon- we are in the INTERMISSION. We are half way to the story. There are a lot of chapters still to come. Hope it keeps you interested.
Thanks for the lovely comment. I don't this it is crap at all, it was beautiful. Loved your comment.

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