SS-Lovestruck..Prequel to FF Turnaround!! Updating soon!! - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
the explanation for Mr. Abercrombie and Fitch??

when she explain what it means...and her own dreams..
she blurted it out in front of asad...
without thinking...

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Posted: 11 years ago
they were playing around running like kids...

zoya short angry.. coz asad did not try to pacifier her...

so funny...enjoyably update
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Posted: 11 years ago
And starstruck finally comments! 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG this SS is total fluff and I'm loving it. 😳

my favorite scene was when Asad was hit by the ball and he pulls Zoya to kiss her

Haaye maar daala
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

Mein aur fluff queen😲..well thats a first..I guess😆

n as for ur comments...wah wah..kya baat hai..kya takia kalaam use kiye hai...👏...
mast mast mast😉..😆 ..but thank u so much for an entertaining comment...I had a wide grin..readin it all😃





You had a wide grin reading my comment?Oh thats good..now come back soon and make me grin with some more cheese and fluff coz I am here bored to deathJaldi se update kar yaara..nothing can be more amazing than reading your stories..sach me..I read the first two parts again and fell in love with them again😳😳I wish mera bf bhi Asad ki tarah itna romantic hota😆I will make him read this story of yours..he can always use some ideas😉Ab jaldi se update kardo..the more the better you know😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
So without any further wait...
Here you go peeps...

CH3 The First "I love you" (Confession)

It was a month of torrid passion, of burning desires, unadulterated,evolving love and intangible, invincible ties. Asad and Zoya were inseparable..their moments of togetherness sealing in the fate of their tommorows. They were in love but unaware of its existence, enjoying the glory of their everydays. While Asad was the intensity and the rawness in the relationship, Zoya was the spontaneity and the fire. In just a matter of a month they had found the deepest of emotions within their guarded hearts and had sold all their inhibitions to the fire of passion.

Good morning Zoya, in his deep husky, lustful voice was Zoya's wake up alarm, her umm...I need more sleep..his undoing, his welcome start to his morning. The day would then consume the 2 in its everyday chores, classes, jobs and assignments. Leaving barely any time for them to meet, but that didn't stop them.No matter what the time...they met, their hearts feeling limp and lifeless otherwise. They met, in the middle of the night, when Zoya ran up to Asad's dorm and sneaked up to his room, dodging the guard..only to kiss him goodnight...Asad returning the gesture, by grabbing her in between classes and making out in any empty corners they could find. This was the way life went, as they continued to explore each other, falling deeper and deeper in love with each new piece of information.

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It was the 15th Of September, and as the city of San Fransico enjoyed the coolness of a foggy evening, Zoya walked to her dorm raging, mad. Asad had ditched her,he had left her hanging on a date they had been planning for the last week.The reason, another girl, that, big boobs, small brains blonde bimbo of a girl who couldn't help but push herself onto Asad, acting like a damsel in distress who couldn't pick an apple from a bunch of oranges... Arrghhh...she was mad...and Asad being Asad had decided to go all out and help her, calling Zoya at the very last minute to cancel their frigging date.

She stormed into her room...and literally swung her hand bag towards her bed...not caring what it destroyed as it landed...

Huffing and puffing..blurting blasphemies Zoya paced around her room..

Zoya-What does he think of himself, and how the hell does he ditch me...me Miss Zoya Farooqi and that too for that...hungry blonde ass of a hippo female...Arrghh...I am going to kill that man...and then...chop him up into pieces and roast him on the barbeque..and toss some salt and pepper on him...cos this man truly has no taste... I mean...that girl..oH for crying out loud...what the hell does he see in her??? And here I am...thinking that he has better tastes than that when clearly she is his kind...the blonde...big boob bimbo...Oh I tell ya if I see her anywhere...I swear I am gonnaa...ARGGHGHHH...I HATE HIM I HATE HIM I HATE HIM...

Or do you...asked Asad, standing at her door that she had forgotten to shut behind her, wearing distressed faded blue jeans,and a grey v neck t-shirt, his back pack slinged on one of his shoulders giving him an air of a carefree college guy.He had been waiting by the door from the past 10 minutes...enjoying Zoya's over the top dramatics, her incoherent monologue..where she continued to curse him, and wanting to chop him into pieces and roast him...sprinkling salt and pepper cos supposedly he had no taste?? That just made him...laugh...She surely had her moments...

Zoya-O just shut it...yes I hate you..

Asad-And why is that Might I ask?? He moved into the dorm..his eyes not leaving hers even for a blink.

Zoya- Oh no no no no no your are so not coming in MR....she said...trying her best to push him out of the room...but her attempts just garnered one reaction from Asad...his laughter.He continued to move in as she tried to push him out, her push not wobbling his steps...

Zoya-Asad no..you... are... not ...coming... in.,.so... now..just ...let ...me ...push ...you ...out...

Asad-You can try...but I aint going anywhere...

Zoya-You have to cos I no longer want to see you or ur pretty lil face...I just don't want you around me anymore...

Asad- And why is that...might I ask??? He was already halfway into her room, his eyes mirroring his emotions perfectly...He was..thoroughly enjoying Zoya's bluster and wanted to take it a little further.

Zoya-Cos you ditched me on our date.I was frigging stitting there in the restaurant all by myself waiting on you...and you...you were busy...with ladaaofying your nainaas with that...Blonde...baboon...

Asad- Oh please tell me you are not jealous of Leyla...she is such a nice person....he stated..delibrately...just to rile up Zoya...I mean..she is so good natured, so polite and soft spoken...and I was just helping her out as she was having troubles with one of the assignments...that's due at midnight tonight, and she was so lost in it...SO how could I say no..after all she is such a good hearted girl...Believe me she is very nice..and has a very bigh heart...

Zoya- Of course bada to hoega hi naa...and ofcourse...you would notice that for sure...cos who wouldn't...after all big heart = big boobs in ur guys dictionary afterall...So why wouldn't you..stay back..and ditch your girl...at a restaurant all by herself...

Asad literally dropped onto her bed laughing hearing her outrageous reasoning...

Asad-OMG... big heart = big boobs... He laughed...rolling onto the bed...caring in the least at Zoya's horrified expression...

He was not taking her seriously...and that made her mad..so she tried grabbing the pillow from her bed to hit him...but Asad was already onto it...

Asad- How clich, and now the girl hits her guy with the pillow cos he laughed at her outrageous and utterly ridicilious comment...

Zoya-Asad ke bachhe...Aaaj to tumhari khair nahi...his comment just made her angrier...as she grabbed her purse that she had recently thrown...and started to swing it around him, trying to hit him..as Asad used the pillow to block her...

He laughed...she grunted...he defended while...she initiated...She missed every time...her anger...clouding her focus...

Zoya-ASAD...I am going to kick ur bloody ass...

Asad- And I am not gonna let that happen...meri jaan...

Zoya- WE WILL SEE...she swung her bag to hit his tush...but he blocked her attack...

Asad-You missed...maybe try again...he challenged...laughing like a maniac...as they went round and round the small twin bed...

Zoya tried again...and this time...he caught her bag...pulling her to him...and giving her a kiss on the lips...

Zoya- How dare you...she shouted taken by surprise as he kissed her...pulling her bag out of his grip...He let go...flicking his head in mock. Arrogance...and winking at her...

Zoya- You are such a pig Mr Asad Ahmed Khan...she swung again...and he grabbed her bag again...pulling her in and once again planting on on her lips...and letting go...

Zoya- DON'T YOU DARE DO IT AGAIN...you arrogant cow...I am going the beat the crap out of you for ...picking that...ghoncho..gori over me...for...calling her...nice..and good natured and...polite..and good hearted...cos she is not...bobble head...she is just wanting into your pants...and wat better way to...she hit him again. Thinking he would miss...her conversation meant to distract him...but he just bent side wards and grabbed her bag with ease...repeating his gesture...kissing her...not paying any heed to her previous threat...

Zoya- ASAD...

Asad-Zoyaaa...

Zoya- Stop kissing me...and trying to distract me...

Asad- And why not...

Zoya- Cos I am mad at you...ARGGHHH...you are just too much...and you truly deserve that bimboo...cos ur as dumb as her...

Asad- Well if I do then what will happen to you...

The pillow/purse fight was ongoing...back and forth, hit and miss...the bed was...ruffled to the extreme...and Zoya was already leaning in, almost on the verge of falling...but she didn't...

Zoya- You don't need to worry about me...Jackass...I'll just go grab one of the many guys...that were staring at me...as I sat all alone...looking Oh so gorgeous ...waiting to come rescue me...out of my...lonesome...solitude...you just worry bout your...heaving chimpanzee...and get lost in her..big big heart....she gave her final swing...Asad...grabbing her in and pulling her down.

She fell on him,and in a blink of an eye..he moved...pinning her under him...kissing her...with fervor...

OW...he yelped...OW ow..ow...he continued...As Zoya bit his..lip...punched him...in his guts..and shoved him off of her...

Asad-OW...what was all that for?? He asked...still gaging from her punch...

Zoya_' wow you have really lost ur smarties...spending time with her...huh..

Asad-Zoya...don't u think u...stretched this enough?? Come on...just let it slide...

Zoya_'NO...

Asad-Why not...he said..standing up from the bed holding on to his tummy...and wincing a little pretending to be hurt...

Zoya-You knw you cant act...then why are you trying...

Asad shook his head and straightened up...his face smiling wide...

Asad- Well atleast I can try...after all some of ur dramatics seem to have brushed off on me too..

Zoya- I AM NOT BEIGN DRAMATIC...

Asad-Really??? Then tell me whats bothering you???

Zoya-No I wont...why should I ...she pouted...

Asad-Just spit it out Zoya...or else

Zoya-Or else???

Asad-I'll just grab you again and continue with the kissing...

Zoya-NO you wont...you wont even come touch me cos I am mad at you...cos I don't like you any more...cos you are a bad bad bad...boyfriend...and Ya I know I am acting childish..and over dramatic but I don't care..cos I know what I am feeling and I have the right to react...

Asad was finally losing his cool a little and he wanted to yell back..but he held on to his horses...as Zoya continued with her rant...

Zoya- You know why?? You want to know why??? She tossed her water bottle...his way...

Asad-Enough Zoya..

Zoya-NO I am just getting started...So let me tell you why...she tossed her keys...his way now..n he dodged it just in time...

Zoya-Because I don't like to see you with someone that is using you for their advantage and don't care for you the way I do...I am not being jealous cos I know...you are mine...and I have no issues with u hanging out with girls ...but not with her...cos she is using you...And when I see you comply to her requests..it just makes me feel stupid cos...you seem to act stupid...and let her use you...Asad...you just really really make me mad...when you..do thing as such...and I cant help but yell at you..cos that's all that I can do...I don't want to turn out to be one of those girls that suffocates her guy and doubts his every move...I don't really have the time or the desire to do so, but I surely do expect for you to be aware of whats going on around you...She is using you...simple as that...she is trying to win a bet...with her friends...I heard...and you know it too...and still you ditched me...me...and our already planned outing for that conniving female...

Omg god I am repeating myself over and over again...damn you...honest to god...if I didn't love you...I wouldn't take any of your crap..and would just...dump you and move one...but hell...I love you...and I am stuck with you...and your...knuckle head of a brian...AAA...god save me...

Asad- Oh just enough with it...I am the one who needs to be saved by god..cos I love you...you crazy...over the top dramatic...emotional...and impulsive girl...I am the one that should be worried about you...cos I see people take advantage of you all the time...but I let you be...When you say..guys stare at you..and want to rescue you..it just enrages me...but I control...cos I know..you wont even look at them...But you are nave Zoya...and I see that everyday...how people come to you and take advantage of you...

Zoya-Oh shut up..I am not nave

Asad- Oh yes you are...and you are also..stupid...

Zoya-No you're stupid...

Asad...rubbed his head in frustration...his girl was really messing him up..and she was so wrapped up in the whole situation...that she didn't even bother to realize that..they had just confessed their love for each other in the midst of this madness for the first time...so he did what worked best...and what was known to be the only way to calm Zoya down...and make her listen and register to what had just happened...He dawned his angry face and grabbed Zoya by her waist...lifting her up and tossing her...onto the bed. He turned around locked the door, walked back to the bed, towering over her...hands folded by his chest as he stared into her eyes...not touching her...his eyes...doing the trick.

Over the past month...Asad had realized that the only way to get Zoya to stop her...out of control babbling was through silence. Everytime he had not reacted to her and had stood passively...doing nothing but capturing her gaze...Zoya had stopped...The moment their eyes locked..Zoya would forget all about everything else.Her breath would even out, and her words would stop immediately...There was some magic when they looked into each other eyes.They could see...layers and layers of each other's souls through them, binding them together..stronger and stronger with each new layer that they unraveled. They would have endless conversations with their eyes without a single word, sharing their secrets and theirs hearts emotions...Asad and Zoya..found their home in each others eyes and everytime they...looked into the others eyes...they felt complete...

Even today...this approach seemed to have the same effect on Zoya, as she instantly stilled her eyes...locking with his. She stood up from the bed and kneeled on the bed...her eyes meeting upto his...

Asad lifted his head as if trying to tell her to read...and she understood...their eyes...began their magic as Zoya slowly began to look through them and following the journey...of their emotions...

Her words started to come to her...reminding her of what she has confessed...

Zoya-I love you...were her words..out loud...as she...acknowledged her thoughts...

Asad-I love you too came the response...his eyes...getting dense with emotion...

Slowly...she crawled closer to him...still kneeling..as she bridged the gap..and traced his face with her fingers...

Asad smiled...their love had found its unique way to be let out...and it made him feel happy beyond words...filling him with a contentment he had wished for ever since his father left.

He pulled her in and kissed her gently...

Asad-I love you a lot...Zoya he said...holding her face in hands..and healing his soul through her eyes...through her love...that surged through them..

Zoya-I love you too Asad...I love you a lot...a lot a lot...

Asad-I know...that was the reason why you reacted as such wasn't it??

Zoya-Yes...cos you are mine...

And - Yes I am...and you...mine..and only mine...

Zoya-Always..no matter what...

Asad-Forever...through it all...

I love you they said in unison...sealing their soul's confession with a kiss, a hug and an undying promise of togetherness...through it all...

Well so goes it...hope u liked it..cos I jsut went with it n worte watever that came to mind...hope u liked it...do leave ur comments n lemme know...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome prequel

Keep writing

Cont soon

Thanks 4 the pm

Love
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice Update!
Loved every bit of it.
Thnx for the Pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was super cute.. the way they calm themselves down and the way they confessed...😊

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