SS-Lovestruck..Prequel to FF Turnaround!! Updating soon!!

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Intro...

SO here I am with the promised SS..the prequel to the FF Turnaround... called. Lovestruck...

I have gotten mixed review about this..as I am goin backwards with the story and for those of you who have already read Turnaround..you know what comes next...after this particular SS...so keeping that in mind and also..abiding by the desires of my other readers that do want to read the pre turnaround story...I will give u 5 chapters...of their past...

CH1-Attraction

CH2-Courting

CH3-Confession

CH4-Marriage

CH5-Acceptance

Each of this will have its share of cheese...and I will only be focusing on the fluff (yup just fluff)😆 I plan to keep these chapters drama free and all about romance..so if you think you wanna ingest a lil more romance then by all means..this ones for u...😉

Also since I never mapped this SS out..I am going to pull some flashbacks from Turnaround and reword it into these chapters..and also add in some random..cliche sappy moments in the story..with my own lil spin to it..so I hope you enjoy it..😃

Now lemme just fill you new readers with the character description a lil..but hey..if u really wanna enjoy this..then drop by my FF Turnaround n read that first..cos if u read this first n then go read that..it would ruin the twists... I'll linK the 2 threads for that FF down below so do check it out...

TURNAROUND
N now for a brief...description of the characters...

Year-2006'

Asad-

22 yrs of age...

Studying in San Fransisco to become an architect... in his last year of B.Arch

Models part time to make some extra cash to send to India to his mom and sister.

Bumps into Zoya when he his walking the ramp for the university summer fair of sorts..

Zoya-

18 years of age..

Moved to San Fransisco from NewYork to pursue her degree in computer engineering

Is in her first year.

Bumps into Asad when she is busy with her volunteering job for the university, taking pictures of the summer fair...

The story starts from the summer fair...where Zoya is taking pictures of the fair n then ends up at the ramp walk..where she sees Asad for the first time..and as she tries to take pictures..girls go crazy over Asad...as he has become a popular guy in the university from the past year that he has been in SF. The girls try to reach him..and a girl bumps into Zoya making her fall onto the stage...her camera flying off and breaking.She falls right in front of Asad...( I know its cheesy and very clich so I fore warned u didn't it) n he lifts her up...n then..comes the upcoming chapter...so Hope you enjoy it...its in the next post...😃

INDEX
CH1-PG1
CH2-PG11
CH3-PG21
CH4-
CH5-
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Here you go peeps...Didn't get a chance to proof read so bear with the errors..

CH1- The first step (Attraction)

Asad felt he was on fire, the moment he felt her skin touch his, her hands slipping into his,relying on him to lift her up, and as he did, his heartbeats went in a disarray, his pupils dilating at the sight in front of him.She was beautiful yes, but there was more, that was making him lose his senses...more than those eyes,the small compact body, those supple lips and long black hair Her eyes, they were pulling him in..making him see and feel things he never knew existed. Asad was spellbound, emotion after emotin exploding within him. This was new, this sensation so alien.He was losing himself in those deep brown eyes, feeling a strange sort of connection building. He didn't want to let her go; she was a sight to die for and holding her filled him with a sense of wholesomeness. His heart sang as he saw the same fliker in her eyes, as if she was experiencing the same array of emotions he felt.

Zoya suddenly felt hot, his gaze burning her inside out.She couldn't tear herself away from him. He was beautiful, handsome an understatement. He was actually a beautiful specimen created by god only for her, her heart claimed...the declaration taking her by surprise... She could see him all day and still feel it to be not enough...She wanted to touch his body, his sculpet form and memorize everything about it...living her life trying to capture his form onto canvas. Everything about him was idealistic, yet he was real.

It was making her head spin, as jolt after jolt of emotions cruised through her body...making her brake their reverie. She couldn't handle it, his touch was too hot, it was too much for her to handle... she was losing herself and she needed to get a grip.

They finally looked at each other, Asad trying to speak, stuttering at forming words,his effort wasted as he heard her yell...

Zoya-Allah miyaan whats wrong with you, look what you've done...OMG..my camera is broken...because of you...your stupid...hormone driven bimbos just shoved me to the ground,in the process of groping you and Damn they broke my camera... What the hell am I to do now??? You you...its all your fault...she stammered...trying very hard to avoid his gaze as she bent down to pick up the pieces of her broken camera. Damn it..Mr...who told you to be all...OOoh I am a greek god with a body that girls wanna just devour...touch and do nasty things to...Like honestly, could you not have worn a shirt?? She babbled...not aware of what she was saying, her words reflecting her personal thoughts...Arrghhh...Screw that, its getting late, I need to be back. Damn it, damn it damn it..you are just good for nothing...don't even have the decency to apologise.. Zoya cursed and walked away, leaving a flabbergasted Asad behind.

He snapped back to his present, his hands feeling incomplete as she pulled out her soft hand and stomped away.Finally his brain caught up with what she had said and realized that she had accused him of breaking her camera, he was enraged. He picked up his shirt and sprinted in the direction she walked in. He was going to give her a piece of his mind.

Zoya had just made it to the premises when someone grabbed her from the back and shoved her to the wall. She was petrified when she saw the rage in his eyes.

Asad-HOW DARE YOU BLAME ME FOR YOUR ABSENTMINDEDNESS? I was not the one who was so engrossed in their camera that they forgot where they were standing; I was not the one who came in the way of the fight and stumbled in someone's way, I was not the one who didn't not have her camera strap on her neck, so before you go around blaming others for you negligence, get your facts straight, and next time...don't dare and talk to me in sucha tone...

Zoya- How DARE YOU, you male chauvinist pig, Besharam insaan, ladki se baat karna tak nahi aata, who gave you the f****ng right to grab me like that or talk to me like that, you jerk,

Asad- mind your language and stay in your limits, don't make me cross my limits,

Zoya-Warna kya, what do you think of yourself, body kya bana liya khud, samajhte ho u'll scare me, whatever screw you and get off my face, she stared to push past him in an attempt to walk away. But before she could he grabbed her and pushed her even harder to the wall, claiming her lips in his.

The touch of his lips eroded every nerve in Zoya's body, making her want to pull him close at the same time push him away.It was her very first kiss and it was way beyond what she had ever expected it to be..It was making her head spin, making her feel tipsy with sparks and sparks of explosive emotion coursing through her body... It was just too much for her to handle.., it was making her go crazy... they were fighting just a minute ago and now...she had to get out... She put all her strength and pushed Asad away, slapping him for his audacity. Asad grabbed her again and kissed her harder, not letting her go this time. The more she resisted the deeper he kissed squeezing her closer to him each time.

Zoya was losing the battle..., the sensations were tearing through her anger, she wanted to free herself at the same time trying to squeeze her in him. She was enamored by the pulsating desire playing with her senses, making her move past the anger and melt in the moment. She couldn't resist this sweet torment anymore as she responded with fervor, finally kissing him back, rewarded by his low menacing grunt. She got bolder, letting her hands explore his body, tugging his hair and deepeining the kiss. Asad was feeling her body, as if he owned her, he was a lion, a predator claiming his prey. The passion wouldn't cease, but finally their bodies gave up. Breathless they leaned on each other, shocked by the turn of events.

Asad slowly took, Zoya's face in his hand and looked into her eyes

Asad-I am sorry for manhandling you, but I am not sorry for kissing you, I have never felt so alive in my life, and if Allah grants, I would love to kiss you senseless everyday. Zoya stared at him, her eyes dancing at his declaration. He closed his eyes and bent down to her neck, inhaling her scent, arousing his senses and easing his heart. Her smell eased him and gave him peace. I am Asad btw, he said, finally catching his breath

Zoya' She said as she gently kissed him and pulled him into an embrace, trying to calm herself down.

~~

Zoya made her way to her room, all the while replaying the images in her head, smiling and sighing and wanting to dance.. It had been the most unexpected day of her life,ending on the craziest note of her musical life...She changed and lay down on her bed...her fingers caressing her lips, trying to feel his lips on her...gently tracing the places he had touched her, the images surging through her mind, making her burn, this new sensation, making Zoya wanting to explore this further.There was no room for rationality in this scenario but still she needed to understand what was going on??? She needed to know.Tommorow she thought, tomorrow I need to find out about him, and about whats going on with me.With a new built conviction Zoya finally fell asleep, Asad's face a constant presence in her dreams.

~~

Zoya walked around the campus trying to find him, but no luck. The university was still gearing up for the semester to start, so the presence of students was minimal on the campus, making her search more difficult. She felt stupid now, for not bothering to know anything about him, Well you were busy swooning in the kiss you dumbass...she accused herself...the image once again flooding her mind, making her more desperate to find him. She focused all her energies on finding him, pushing aside the what if's.

Zoya-Umm excuse me...she stopped a random student walking by...Do you know anybody by the name Asad she asked?? The boy nodded a no and walked away...

Zoya-Umm excuse me...she stopped a group of girls walking by...Do you a guy called Asad?? They said no in unison...I uh mean..were you gals there at the ramp walk event yesterday...O ya we were..I mean who would miss out on some eye candy...OMG..did u notice that brown guy???I mean..wow...he was like so handsome...like...I cant even say...I was like...WOW...I can eat him up..and lick him all over like..OMG he was like a hot cuppa mocha... O ya...I like fainted looking at him...and OMFG...did u gals like see him in the field today?? I mean like there were so many girls there...sitting and staring at him play soccer..N I was like...bitches..he is mine...Like OMG wats wrong with these gals...

Zoya just stood there as the girls continued with their blah blah blahs...her ears perking up when she heard them mention the brown dude...rushing to the football field, hoping it to be him.

And there he was... effortlessly playing soccer with the guys, in his shorts n vest, glistened in sweat, unaware of the drooling girls around him.Infact those girls bothered Zoya, as she walked up to the other end of the field far away from those girls, her eyes stuck on Asad.

Asad completely unaware of Zoya presence, tried to concentrate on the game.He had to let out some steam after last night, Zoya;s image playing in his head all through the night, the kiss making him wanna jump out of his bed and run up to her dorm and kiss her senseless, inhale her soft,flowery smell.This was very new for him, what he was feeling and it was making him insane.He needed to distance himself, to distract himself to try and make sense of his actions. He tired to focus on his game as he caught of some movement around him. He turned to see Zoya...standing there...looking at him...looking gorgeous in her jeans n tee...Nah...that's not possible he told himself..as he shook his head and concentrated on the game, waiting on his teammate to pass him the ball...Once again his eyes wandered back to where he thought he saw Zoya, just to make sure he was hallucinating, but instead there she was, awkwardly fidgeting with her bag,barley looking up to meet his eyes...What the hell?? Is she really here he thought...his mind completely distracted by his thoughts...and BAM...the ball hit him in the head, and he went down...

Zoya almost yelped as she ran up to him, kneeling down and holding his head in her lap...caressing his forehead...calling out his name..the team members...tactfully backed out seeing Zoya so concerned, while the girls on the other side, gasped and pretended to care...

Zoya-Asad are you ok...hey..wake up...tell me you're ok...or we'll call the doctor...

Asad groaned as he finally opened his eyes...moving his hand around Zoya's neck and pulling her down. He bridged in the remaining distance between them as he lifted his head and locked his lips on her, kissing her with unguarded passion...Zoya having no choice but to reciprocate...He kissed her and his teammates looked away...the girls...booed...and disheartedly walked away... while Zoya and Asad remained oblivious to what was going on around them

Finally he let go of her lips only to graze his mouth by her neck, inhaling her with one deep breath.

Asad-Ummm you smell so good...he said...his eyes opening to meet hers...Now I am ok... he smirked...and Zoya playfully smacked him...getting up and trying to straightenherself up...

Even a short kiss had left her breathless, her heartbeats erratic and restless.her face flushed and her lips swelling up.

Asad slowly stood up..shaking his head to orient himself...He smiled when he looked at Zoya...complelty unashamed of his action, and thoroughly enjoying her failed attempts to collect herself..

Asad- I doubt that's going to help...he gestured towards her as he caught her trying to wipe her face and manage herself... You look good like this...your lips seem even fuller this way, tempting me to see how far I can take them...Asad stood there and grinned...

Zoya-Well no need to act all smug MR... atleast I didn't hit myself in the head with a ball...cos I was busy staring at a gorgeous girl, forgetting that I was in a game...

Asad-Hmm...who told you you were gorugeous huh??

Zoya-Well your impulsive desire to kiss me...MR...

Asad-Not necessary, it could very well be due to my concussion

Zoya-well than care to tell me what hit you yesterday night?? When you shamelessly ran up to me, grabbed me and kissed me?? And continued to do so even after a tight slap on your face??? Her eyes gleamed with mischevious challenge...

Asad..smirked...as he looked away...she had him there...he walked up to her and grabbed her by the waist...eyeing her...as he spoke...

Asad-Well I'd have to say..a girl with her camera...taking my pictures..and falling onto my feet...her touch..sending jolts of electricity thorugh my body...her beauty...punching me in my gut...and her big brown eyes...shooting me in my heart...had me suffering from more than just a concussion...

Zoya-Hmm...she met his gaze...well it seems like you have a lot of issues...we need to get you checked up...and ease your ailments...she flirted...her hands ever so gently drawing feathery cirlcles on his chest...making him lose his concentration...

Asad-Well I don't need a doctor...

Zoya-Is that so?? Then how will we ease you out of your misery???

Asad- Well I already have the answer to that question...

Zoya-Do share...

Asad- Well Miss Zoya...if you truly care about me so much..then I don't think you would mind...in easing me out of my misery..and go out on a date with me...I would like to get to know the girl who has so easily awoken this part of me...

Zoya-Hmm and which part of you did I awake Mr Asad???

Asad-A part of me that wants to look at you, smell you, kiss you senseless and explore the infinity...

Zoya-Hmmm I see...she teased...

Asad-So is that a Yes?? Or is that a Yes???

So I have nothing more to say..I just hope u enjoyed it...leave ur comments n lemme knw...n also don't forget to like it...I'll cya soon with an update for Turnaround...

Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love it !!!!!
I love it as much as i love turnaround...
Do continue and update soon!
Yu have an amazing style of writing...
Now in this ff...we'll know where and how all thepassion and love came about...and its all fluff,,,what more could i ask for!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start! I'm loving this 😆

Continue soon :)
Edited by rjhr - 11 years ago
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I have been remiss! I am going to catch up with Turnaround! And then come back to this 😳

Or should I read this first 😳

🤣
Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i love this !!!! l just love this !!!!
awesome

continue soon
thx for the pm😉😉😉
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Originally posted by: mochhug

I have been remiss! I am going to catch up with Turnaround! And then come back to this 😳

Or should I read this first 😳

🤣

Well If u really wanna get the feel of the story than turnaround should be read first..cos if u read this..then u'll know all bout the twists in turnaround..well atleast a few of them..😆😃 so ya choose wisely😉
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Originally posted by: starslinedup

Well If u really wanna get the feel of the story than turnaround should be read first..cos if u read this..then u'll know all bout the twists in turnaround..well atleast a few of them..😆😃 so ya choose wisely😉


Turnaround first it is! 😃

Expect long comments for each chapter 😆😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Or is that a yes? or is that a yes😆 you are back again with your signature line😃😃 i loved this
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Originally posted by: mochhug


Turnaround first it is! 😃

Expect long comments for each chapter 😆😳

U made the right choice baby AahaROFL..sorry couldnt help it...Embarrassed😆
But ya...WO hooo for long comments...I'll eagerly wait to read themEmbarrassed
Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago

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