AsYa/KaBhi FF: Chained HeartsNote PG 139 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update😊 continue soon😊
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hey thanks for the pm and really it was awesome he saved her and he was engulfed in her thoughts only

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Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

wow!! lovely

tn AsYa meeting was very nic,,
it was jst tooo gud..
continue soon..


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Originally posted by: kals82

wow... i love this story... since i read the 3 parts in my mobile... couldn't comment ...then and there...


looking forward... on how zoya enter KV...mansion...as she has already entered asad heart...

continue soon...


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Originally posted by: sasir

nice.

but hope zoya's phuphi is dilshad.
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Thanks... lets see what will happen!!

Originally posted by: sasir

nice.

but hope zoya's phuphi is dilshad.
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hey tis is amazing...

hopefully she will find her phupi soon...
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Thank you,.. yes, she will find her phupi soon,... hope so😆

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Lovely update. Enjoy asya first meeting and fight. Hope she finds her phoophi soon. Waiting for next part now. Thanks for pm and updte soon


Thank you, even i enjoyed writing that part!!

Originally posted by: aashiqua

d best way n meeting each other..zoya is realy a blabberng queen


Thank you, truely she'a a blabber queen!! no doubt in that😆

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Originally posted by: kritz4ever

loving this ff very much


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lovely update😊 continue soon😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all the readers for the likes and comments!! Pm's will be sent in the morning

Chapter 4

'akram,.. koi khabar mili, wo khambaqt ka?? asked a frustated razia...

'aapi,... wo pata nahi hai, lekin usney bank se paisa nikala hai, she's very smart aapi, agar yaha waha card istamal karegi, toh usey pata tha, hum dhoondengey isiliye pehle se hi paisa nikal diya hai.. aur uska mobile phone yahi chodkar gayi hai,.. ' akram said in a very polite manner...

' itna shaant hokar baat kar rahe ho,.. tumhe andaza bhi hai, agar wo hath se nikal gayi toh bas!! samjho ki hum dono ka sapna, sapna he reh jayega,... bevakoof' razia shouted at her brother...

'relax aapi, kaha jayegi, dhoonlenge, bohot jald,..' akram tried to calm her down..
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zoya as usual got ready to go in search of her phupi.. she was tired, she had never in her entire life got such situations that she had to walk on unknown streets, under burning rays... she had enough!! she thought of continuing the search the next day,.. now, all she wanted was some sleep!! peaceful sleep... she hadn't slept well the previous night... she waited for taxis, none arrived, she decided to walk further, with all her might, she started to walk... she was lost in thoughts again... she kept walking and walking, her eyes were heavy and her throat was completely dry, she felt week, her body gave up...
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'ayan... maine kaha na, nahi matlab nahi...' shireen said keeping her face straight..

'ammi.. please, its just 10 thousand, poora ghar girvi rakhne ko nahi kaha maine' ayan laughed out at his mother,... just then najma came over and held his ears,...

'aise baat karta hai koi apne ammi se, have some manners ayaan miya' chuckled najma... n slowly she hinted him looking towards her purse... ayan gave a very happy look and rolled his eyes at shireen...

'theek hai, theek hai,.. nahi chahiye aapka paisa,... ' ayan said trying to show his fake anger and rushed to his room waiting for najma...

'waise ayan miyan... ull get the money at one condition!!' najma said,walking into ayan's room...

'kya' gulped ayan

'you need to tell me the reason? aur iss paise se kya karoge ye bhi batana hoga!! bas' najma said to ayan who was staring at her like a student who was questioned

'wo,.. yaar najma, har waqt tum paise dete ho, lekin iss baar poochne ki kya wajah hai? main koi galat kaam nahi karunga sachi' ayan said in a low voice,

'No!! not acceptable, bhajaan ne mujhe sab bataya hai, about your bike race'

'shhh... najma dheere,... meri ammi ne sunn liya na, ghar pe tsunami hojayega' said ayan and both chuckled closing their mouths

'look ayan if its for the betting race, then you wont get a penny!!' najma said in a serious tone, ayan pleaded with his eyes...

'please najma... i will never fight with you, and ill drop you to college every day, and i wont tease you... please najma' ayan pleaded..

'NO, No means NO... najma said and walked out...

'tamatar' ayan said loudly...

'ayan not again,.. ill kill you if you say that!!' najma screamed and ran towards him to punch him...

'tamatar, ta-ma-tar!! bohot nautanki kar liya hai' ayan said so and took her purse, checked thoroughly and threw at najma's direction

'ayan how dare you, you have no manners in you,.. go to hell' najma took her purse and walked out of ayan's house.. walking towards her house, ayan followed,

'so miss nautanki,.. all this was your plan so that you could distract me before i could convince ammi.. huh,.. you dont even have a 1000 bucks' ayan said mischievously,

'yes' najma said sheepishly,.. 'that's the only way i could stop her to give you money, you spoiled brat!!'

'what ever, i know you very well.. hate you!!!' ayan said and went out, zoomed his bike out of the neighborhood.

shireen observed all of this and came upto najma...
' najma, bohot accha kiya, iss badmaash ko, tum aur asad hi samhal sakte ho,.. dono bade hone ka farz nibharahe ho..' shireen said keeping her hand on najma's head.

' haan khala, iss ladka pata nahi, kab sudhrega... allah!!'

' jald hi uske liye ladki dhoondna hoga, nikah ke baad sudhar jaayega..'

'bichari ladki jo bhi usse nikah karegi' both the women laughed and walked towards asad's house... both the families were very close, the would barge into each others house when ever they wanted,...
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zoya opened her eyes to find herself lying on the hospital bed... the nurse called the doctor immediately...

' you must be wondering your whereabouts, dont worry and please relax, you should thank the lady out there who brought you her on time,.. your name??' the doctor asked politely

'zoya..im zoya..' zoya said nervously...

'do not worry miss zoya, your perfectly fine, you must be taking a lot to your head!! stop taking tensions, and stay calm,.. ' the doctor said and moved out,... zoya could see the doctor talking to some lady outside the ward, zoya turned her head to get a view of that lady, who was supposed to be her savior... she saw the women approaching her...

'hello,...' dilshad greeted zoya, zoya tried getting up

'please,.. beta , you dont have to get up.. lie down' dilshad said pushing her shoulders backwards,... while zoya smiled,.. but it immediately turned into tears..

'thank you so much aunty' zoya said controlling her tears

'no problem beta, your zoya...??' dishad asked and zoya gave a questioning look

'doctor ne bataya, waise tumahare ghar walon ko batao beta' dilshad said handing her the phone,

'wo, wo,.. im alone' zoya said while tears formed her eyes, dilshad felt bad for her

'tumhara ghar??'

'main, yahan kisi ke talaash main aayi hoon... main newyork se hoon, aur do din hue lekin main unhe dhoond nahi paayi' zoya said sobbing,

dilshad kept her hand on her head and gave her an assuring look,..
'agar sacche dil she talaash karoge toh sab kuch mil jata hai,.. waise tum rehti kaha ho?'

'main ek hotel pe rukhi hui hoon filhaal'

'ek kaam karo beta, tum mere saath mere ghar aa sakte ho, if you dont mind okay' dilshad gave her an option

'nahi aunty, im fine... main aapko takleef nahi desakti... main kisi ko dhoond rahi hoon, tab tak mujhe hotel main hi rukhna hoga, im fine... ill manage' zoya said,.. dilshad could easily understand her difficulty, she knew that zoya felt lonely in this city,.. she could tell, looking at her face itself, and the doctor had told her too, that zoya was quite weak,.. she was emotionally weak

'waise kiske talaash main ho beta?'

'wo, aunty,.. wo meri...' zoya stammered, thinking of her phupi, suddenly she got worried, what if her phupi wont accept her, where would she go..

dilshad thought that zoya hesitated to share it with her, she decided not to push her further

'koi baat nahi hai beta,.. your coming to my house,.. okay'

'nahi aunty,.. please..' zoya said

' dekho beta, your too weak as of now, agar tumhe aise hi nahi rehna hai, toh you can stay as a paying guest, is that okay atleast' dilshad said to zoya, and she responded with a nod... dilshad knew this was the only way to help her , she understood the self respect she had ...
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shireen and najma were sitting on the sofa, their eyes glued on to the screen and the hands motioning from the bowl of chips to their mouth, dilshad came in along with zoya...
shireen and najma were too busy to notice dilshad and zoya at the door, dilshad just rolled her eyes and took zoya towards the guest room and made her feel comfortable...

End of chapter 4!!
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Edited by zoyaaakhan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mindblowing update loved it .
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nice update finally zoya in asad house
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

nice update finally zoya in asad house

thanx for pm
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continue soon


Thank you😊
Yes finally she's at asad's house!!

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Originally posted by: Luckyforever

mindblowing update loved it .
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