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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi its the first time i am writing anything like this. I am not sure if you guys would like it.please bear with me.Its my first attempt at writing. After Tanveer is exposed and Asad realises what a fool he has been in believing her , he tries to make it up to Zoya by pampering her. He tries to fulfill all her wishes and to show her how much he loved her...OO

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One moment it was the most beautiful night of his life and in the next instant it turned into a nightmare.
They were on a beautiful date on a small boat in the lake ,it was so peaceful ,he was very close to her. He looked into those beautifull eyes and his heart started beating fast.He was about to get married to this woman but he felt he just could'nt wait.He moved towards her when suddenly the boat wobbled dangerously.He tried his best to steady it but it overturned.Both of them fell in the cold water.
Zoya fell in with a shriek and Asad saw her hit her head hard on a rock jutting out of water.
She didn't struggle any more she was just engulfed by the waves.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey that sounds fresh and interesting!
Continue soon! 😃
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Welcome dear newbie 🤗
So cute preview.. Interesting..
Promising start.. Keep going..
Continue ... I loved it...❤️
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hey thanks for that and I really want you to continue please pm me when you update next

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