AsYa FF Battling The Curse - Thread Two - Chapter Seven To Ten

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Sadie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Bubble the hide and clap part was inspired from the movie Conjuring right?

Oh i love that movie, d update was good

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rockstar_16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

wooowww

i loved it

it was really scary...😲

i have decided that i will not read your story in night i will read it in early morning 😆😆

i am really phattu 😆

i have hardly seen any scary movie 😆

u r too good

i can hardly wait to know whats gonna happen next ???

please continue soon 😃

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

great update... zoya is pregnant...i hope all of them will remain safe in that haunted house...thanks for the PM...😊

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#794

AWWW I LOVED IT THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Awesome update...

like the OCD Asad & messy Zoya's fight...& loved this caring Asad so much...

& then OMG Bubble that scary scene just superb...

lights r gone...doors get locked...then that clapping sounds...& suddenly zoya touch her...i just hold my breath & then her whisper...You caught me!!...ohhh god!!!!! i can feel zoya's state that time...

so nicely written...loved it !!!!!!

continue soon...

Thankew so much for pm 😊😊

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Hey great update. The much awaited scary element is here and really enjoyed reading it. I am so curious to know things that happen next. Loved the dialogue "u caught me".

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Hey di awsum shawsum update ... n its time for d arrival og ghosts... luved it.. got worried wen ayaat and zoya were apart... itcwas scary a bit but i m not scared coz i m a brave girl...hehehe... but who knws wats in d package may b it scary ahead well waiting fuh d next update..

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#798

That was great Bubble!!! Am really excited to read more😊

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-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#799

That was really scary😲...n u wrote that part so well👏..I felt as if the scene was playing out in front of my eyes😲...it gave me goosebumps😳...so the spirit is for real😕...I so wanted this to be a thriller n not an actual ghost story😭...I so wished Sophia to be the ghost😭...looks like she is really a good girl😔...😆😆...ASYA part was really nice,so Zoya is pregnant😳...I love Ayat🤗she is such a brave girl,just like me😉 though I'm about 5 times her age🤣🤣...update soon😃😃

P.S.-when I tried to imagine the girl ghost's face,the overpainted n weirdly dressed ghosts from the tv show 'AAHAT' came into my mind which looked more like clowns than ghosts🤣