We Belong Together...ASYA SS-Th#2 (Chapter 6-10) - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .KSGIAN.

yes i am,😉
now when you will update next? am waiting

i guess if am not enough late then in 3-4 hours
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA


yes i m happy for this ICU kiss. But cant enjoy it because of the pain of asya

pain is jus going to end soon,,
hope fah the best😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
woud soonish update,,in 3-4 hours😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amruta04

awesome update..loved it
very well written
do continue soon and thanks for the pm..

thanku so much
woud soonish update,,n pm too
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

I lved ur update.
Finally some asya romance.
Plz continue soon.
Nd if uh dont find my cmnts thn plz dnt mind coz my xams r there so sry in advance.

thanku so much
yup atlast,.. i made them to, however n wherever😉😉😉
woud soonish update,,n pm too

n best of luck fah your exams,,
n don't be sorry,,
exams are important,,😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maano_Kabhi

unresed my comments on # 21

thanku,,

i thought mae frst page would ever live with res comments,,
out of 6 comments on frst page were resed even before mae pm'ing,, n still 3 of them are😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maano_Kabhi

would you update today??

i guess if am not enough late then in 3-4 hours
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maano_Kabhi

res

unres

Update was awesomly awesome!

meray favorite dialogues/lines:


Zoya was incapable to comprehend which thing she should ponder to, he was in conscious,, her Asad wake up,, her asad took one step back to their life, but then how his step was bunged somewhere in the way,,

He was all stagnated in the middle of two lives,, The one which was worst than thousand deaths, and the one he had to live after dying once.

Tears broke out of her eyes like an unbridgeable dam,, who had to flow and to break apart all the left bridges..

what if he would leave m,,...She couldn't even think about that

Hope? We have hopes... Zoya eyes lit up with the word of 4 letters,,

Her fragrance was enough for asad to divert his attention from a live less roof to love of his life, his Miss farooqi,,

he could see the hurt and pain and loneliness deep in her eyes too. Her eyes were reflection of his own.

In very that moment he promised to his lord, that he wouldn't ever leave this girl, he would live every moment of life of his, unless she decides to walk away.

tired, very tired, like he had been running away from someone in a dense jungle. after a long run of a day, he came to know, he could not, he could not run away anymore, because he was trying to run away from himself.

Has she decided to walk away too?

Crimson was slightly making its appearance under thick pale sheets of his face.

What was that? i thought it was just mine heart who went numb on your touch,,

the wires connected to PO at his hands were now entangling in her hairs,

Who knew kiss in the ICU can be so intimating!

the wires connected to PO at his hands were now entangling in her hairs,Who knew kiss in the ICU can be so intimating!

Look at the irony bhaijan, here you are lying in the bed following a severe crack down of your nerves, and here you want me to not even run down the tears,

but one thing am sure about is that I cannot exist without two people in my life, if one is ami, then other if definitely youwe can give options and opinions to people but we cannot smudge our decisions on their's,

Bhaijaan its not about growing up...its about masking up your discomforts under your smile, for those who still care for you,, who still love you..

This is my bhaijaan, who is laying in ICU following nervous breakdown due to the reaon that his mother left him without telling him,, and now he is asking if she got there easily,,

I was angry on myself, I was angry on my luck. Whenever in my life I think, now everything would be okay, and I would atlast live a satisfied life, then suddenly something happens which throws apart mae all beautiful dreams leaving me empty-handed,.

Haha! But I really wonder najma, if I would really have a tomorrow and that too beautiful


the update was just mazing

thankyooou so much
love u fah liking, commenting n pondering...
thanku again
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maano_Kabhi

LOVED THE WHOLE UPDATE
WAS JUST AWESOME,,

I FEEL ITS SLOW PACED,, I WANT TO READ MORE SCENES IN ASYA FUTURE,

HOW PAIN AND COMFORT ALTERS WITH EACH OTHER,, YOU HAVE EXCELLENCE ON THAT

CONTINUE SOON

thankyou 😃
yup it is as am not fond of writing sad scenes,, n here am,.. so can't accelerate it, as its not mae forte

n thnxalot fah the compliment
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Posted: 11 years ago
That kissing part was awesome ❤️
and what about Dilshad Y is she not there in hospital

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