Simi, you have hit the nail on the head for me. I'm an even better fan of yours than I was before. 😭
This OS was so, so sad, yet I liked how you kept it hopeful, as if things will get better in the future for Asad and Zoya. And Zoya's reaction/character was like, BANG ON. Most mothers would react the exact same way. Just wanting to space themselves out and keep themselves isolated from the rest of the world. And the fact that her sweet little girl died in a fire just made it even more heartbreaking. And Asad's characterization was fab, as well. Him wanting to talk with his wife, and just wanting what's best for her and not for her to keep herself separated, yet still being upset over his loss. And the writing of course, was amazing as well. 👏 👏 👏
The last scene was probably the best. Devastating, yet you kept it nice and hopeful and I liked that. Sorry if I'm going off on a tangent. 😳
Wonderful job, Simi! I think I'm going to request something super-happy and super-fluffy, because that's what I'm all about. Might as well call me Fari the Fluff, I bet chocolate and whipped cream flow through my veins. 🤔😆
Good job once again! 🤗
-Fari the Fluffball. 😳 ❤️
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