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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Wonderful updates, the last two were so different to the other, thankfully I read the last one first and the former after, because the one you wrote lately made me cry. You've beautifully penned down the reactions any parent would give on losing their child. And how dynamics would change for their own relation.

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Prajakta

@kajen_crazy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

It is so emotional and touching...!!!

Hats off to your writing.. How could you even manage to write such beautiful thing... Its beyond words.. Trust me..

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

A very well written os
It was filled with cuteness
Zain is soo cute and really love asya as well
Awesome work!

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Simi, you have hit the nail on the head for me. I'm an even better fan of yours than I was before. 😭

This OS was so, so sad, yet I liked how you kept it hopeful, as if things will get better in the future for Asad and Zoya. And Zoya's reaction/character was like, BANG ON. Most mothers would react the exact same way. Just wanting to space themselves out and keep themselves isolated from the rest of the world. And the fact that her sweet little girl died in a fire just made it even more heartbreaking. And Asad's characterization was fab, as well. Him wanting to talk with his wife, and just wanting what's best for her and not for her to keep herself separated, yet still being upset over his loss. And the writing of course, was amazing as well. 👏 👏 👏

The last scene was probably the best. Devastating, yet you kept it nice and hopeful and I liked that. Sorry if I'm going off on a tangent. 😳

Wonderful job, Simi! I think I'm going to request something super-happy and super-fluffy, because that's what I'm all about. Might as well call me Fari the Fluff, I bet chocolate and whipped cream flow through my veins. 🤔😆

Good job once again! 🤗

-Fari the Fluffball. 😳 ❤️

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Superb os
Loved it loads
Love zoya's dialogues the most
She has such craving mash potato with caramel wow lol
Asad is such a sweet hubby
It was a very well written and beautiful os!

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Siki it was a brilliant but was very emotional
u made me cry... I was feeling a dull pain reading this chapter
this was the effect of ur this update on me...
It was very sad to know that asya lost their daughter
this was very heart wrenching update...
Loved how zoya said those blissful words to her daughter said by asad to her...
Loved how asad carried both women in his arms n got off there
awesome update Simi
thanks for the pm n update soon

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Simi it was a brilliant but was very emotional
u made me cry... I was feeling a dull pain reading this chapter
this was the effect of ur this update on me...
It was very sad to know that asya lost their daughter
this was very heart wrenching update...
Loved how zoya said those blissful words to her daughter said by asad to her...
Loved how asad carried both women in his arms n got off there
awesome update Simi
thanks for the pm n update soon

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

very well written...! u made me cry...! beautifull..!

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

I am sorry I couldn't make myself to read this as I read first few lines in blue which showed the concept of story I m sorry but I have became too fragile emotionally to go through this karan left the show and emotionally ihave beedn drained I know it sounds weird but I ws attached to much may be and I am sorry again I know you would have given the bestshot but I cant make it to read

thanks fo pm and pm me when u update next and sorry if hurt