Drabble/OS Prompts - #22 up FEB 26 (Index for all prompts on page 1) - Page 40

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

KIDS and AsYa

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

Res!

Will return in a while!😃

🤗

-Unres!-

Hey Sims! And I know That I am beyond Late this time but maaf kar do yaar😭...and and OMG it feels so good to be reading your works again!

I'll Go prompt wise...

#1 VACATION OS:

Yay!!!!😃 I suggested this! Thanks for writing and considering it! You are a STAR!⭐️

Have I told you this before? You write the world's best Family stories! Yes you do! They are just sooo CUTE and ADORABLE!😳😊

You wrote this so well man! No one could have.👏

"Ewafans!" Mehtab jumped up and down as he started to run, tugging on Zoya's hand.

Ewafans! The first line itself broke the cute-o-meter! Mehtab is shooo Cute

I just love the way you portray the relationship between Asad Zoya and their babies! It's so real...and not to forget it makes me wanna eat Asad!😆 Why is that not possible???? He is just the BESTEST(sexiest) Father ever!😳😊

Loved Ayan-Humeira too...sneaking out for some alone-time' haan?😉

"Do I hafta do this one?" Mahek asked, looking to her mom, squinting her eyes against the sun. "It's for babies. I wanna do something else," she said

And Oooh! My baby Mahek is all grown up!😆

Love this character and I swear if someday (after years and years of ridiculous crap!😕) the show finally decides to show A-Z's babies and If their names are not Mahek and Mehtab- I am going to BLOW up! They just have to be Mahek and Mehtab!😊

"You don't have to meet the princesses, you are a princess," Asad teased as he dove to place kiss on her flushed cheek with an extra loud smack.

See this is what I am talking about...Daddy Asad takes my heart away!

Dilshad who had been silent till now, spoke up, "Did you, now? I hope you didn't scar the kids on the ride for life. It is a long ride in a darkened place and you two look awfully happy. "

The kids looked at their grandma in confusion while the adults spluttered out the drinks that they were drinking.

"AMMI!"

Oh My! Dilshaad Momma-you ROCK bas!😳😆

Lovely Lovely story Sims! It was so well written...and well that's not new considering that you are an out of the world- Fabulous- Fantabulous writer!👍🏼

I am sure that day is not far away when you become a bestselling author and I can proudly say it to the world that- Aah! I always knew it!😆

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# Sick Asad:

Great topic by the way.👍🏼

Dilshad gave him a tentative smile. His eyes locked on her face. She saw the play of emotions on his face as he went from relief, to love, to confusion, to realization and then finally his face hardened and he moved himself away from her hands.

Sims these lines are so perfect!👏 How the hell do you do this?

"You can leave, Mrs. Rashid Khan. I don't want faux care from Janab Rashid's wife, but if you see my Ammi anywhere, tell her that her son needs her."

Impactful lines!👏 WOW! Why couldn't they show this in the show? Sims...you have to start writing for QH!😆 Trust me.😃

Loved this concept and even though its short you have done full justice to the story. Flawless writing!👏

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# Asya in NY three years later.

Another family story! Wohoo!

Mann I want Asad bas!😆 Trust me there should be one such Asad for each and every girl in the world! It's a shame otherwise!😃

Asad tutoring his 5-month old son to play guitar? I mean where do you get such AWESOME ideas from?

Just as she raised the camera to capture the moment, Zain dive bombed the neck of the guitar, wrapped his plump fingers around the bottom of it and tried to chew on the wood.

"Maybe we should wait to do this when he isn't teething," Zoya giggled.

God this was funny!🤣

content to be the center of his parents' world.(My fav line!❤️)

And why Zain and not Mehtab?😲 I missed him!

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# Kids away, Asya alone:

When the kids are away, the parents shall play- Interesting topic😳...I always wanted to read something like this.😃

As the door closed, Asad came behind Zoya and circled his arms around her waist and nuzzled her neck.

"Mmm, you don't waste any time, do you, Jahanpanah?" Zoya teased him.

Oh Boy! Asad slow down😆...she isn't going anywhere!

The entire story was very well written and I loved it seriously.❤️ I absolutely love the way you handle mature content, It never comes out as vulgar.

Is there any genre you haven't perfected? Sims you are amazing!🤗

"No. I am fine, but let's..." trailed as she shook her head and got off the bed. She picked up their clothes and handed him his. "...dress before we nod off. If the kids are home early, we don't want them to get a visual of how they came to be!"

And the above lines show how well you connect with the characters and their situations.👏 You make everything seem so real! FAB work!👍🏼⭐️

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# First day at school

Arrey wah! Another AWESOME prompt!👏

"Ammi!" he cried as he moved out of his mother's grip. "No kiss! You are barrasin' me!"

Aww I have already fallen for this little guy!😃

He leaned in to nip at the sensitive spot just below her earlobe. "We'll have the house to ourselves to do what we want, where we want, and when we want," he teased, "for hours."

She blinked a couple times, absorbing that little tidbit of information. This pregnancy was proving to be a bit more difficult than the last, since she had two rambunctious children who needed to me minded constantly. Their needs were taking priority over the demands of her hormones.

"Oh!" she breathed.

Ermm...Asad since when did you become all naughty haan?😳 But let me tell you that I love this side of you!🤗

Another wonderful story Sims!👏 In just a few words you have managed to capture the essence of the plot beautifully! And that's what I absolutely LOVE about you! Greatly presented and flawlessly written! Claps for you hon!👏

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Thanks Simi for writing all these stories for all of us here! They are a blessing trust me❤️. Your stories always give me the warm fuzzies and the way you write- WOW!👏

Sorry for commenting so late and thanks a bunch for sending all those PMs. You are a darling!🤗I missed you and your stories! Keep writing coz you are just beyond AWESOME at it!⭐️

Loads of Love.❤️

Ps. Will leave my views on the rest after a while!😳😊

Originally posted by: nilusoni

thank you so much for it

awesome loved it just wow

thanx for pm

do pm me for next prompt

continue soon

Originally posted by: TAnAz_

So nice and wonderful.

Originally posted by: saida.m

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Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

Hi Sims! Arrey why are you saying thankyou? I should be the one saying thankyou for writing such out of the world stories really!😃

And you called me Santa?! THANKS!❤️...a big fat bone crushing hug from my side! 🤗I LOVE Santa!😳

And yeah I want to eat a sexy-father! well who doesn't?😳😆

And thanks for explaining the Mahek-Mehtab-Zain- Zuri thing! It makes perfect sense to me! But will you hate me if I say that Mahek and Mehtab are my favs?😃

Simi your stories are just amazing! One more thing a few days back I read GOLDEN SLUMBERS By you and decided to comment later but I cant find the link somehow now! So let me tell you here only...that story was FAB...one of my favs by you(after Ayaan Chachu!)...God I can't get over that story and I made all of my friends read it and they LOVED it! You have got a bunch of crazy fans now! They send their love coz they aren't on IF!😆 I loved that part when Asad has the baby sleeping on his chest! A D O R A B L E!

Love❤️

(Next set coming soon!)

Originally posted by: Ani-asya

This prompt was so cute & lovely... 👍🏼👍🏼
asya & zuri
Cuteness overloaded👏

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

so wonderful!