'You Made Me Smile..??'

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"You Made Me Smile..??"



Zoya's POV

"Tu meri beti kehlane ke layak nahi hai.. tujme apni behno jesa koi gun nahi hai..
kuch sikhti kyu nahi tu unse??" Meri maa mujpe chila rahi thi..


Mene galti se vase gira diya tha.. jo meri behno ne kahi dafa kiya hai
par humesha mujhe he daat milti hau..
kyu..?? kyu ki me sabse choti hu??
humesha me he kyu sunti hu apni maa se??
me he kyu jelu ye maar pit aur gali galoch


Ha apne sahi sunna..meri maa muje kafi karti hai..
aaj toh unhone haad he kardi..
unhone mujpe haath utaya..
ek baar nahi kahi baar..



"Bas hua ab maa.. bahut sehan karli apki maar wo b un cheezo ke liye jo ek galti thi..
me ghar chodke jaa rahi hu"
yeh kehte he me apne kamre ki taraf bhagi..
2min socha kya me sahi kar rahi hu??

fir mene apna bag utaya..
kuch kapre apna phone aur iPod and kuch paise usme dale..
aur ghar ke bahar nikal gayi..

issi umeed me nikali thi.. shayad meri MAA muje rokle..
chahe kesi b hai.. hai toh meri maa na..

par kuch dur jate he mene dekha koi nahi hai mere peche muje rokhne ke liye..


Me garden me jake ek bench par beth gayi..
apne bag se iPod nikala aur apne headphones lagake sunne lagi full volume pe..

meri aankho se aansu nikal rahe the..
aankhe rone ke karaan sujke laal hogayi thi..






Asad's POV


"Thak gaya hu tumhare lagatar fail hone se.. kya tum khoshish nahi kar sakte Asad..??" mere papa mujpe chilate ja rahe the pichle aade gante se..

"Mene khoshish ki thi papa.. par apne dyaan he nahi diya..jab me pehli baar fail hu apne notice kiya..?? nahi na.. kya maanga mene apse.. bas apka thoda waqt aur attention"
mene rote huwe papa ko jawaab diya
"thoda sa he dyaan dete bura he sahi"


"Nikal jao mere ghar se" papa ne gusse me kaha

"Thik hai.."
mene chilate huwe kaha aur apne kamre me bhaga

apne thode kapde iPod phone aur thode paise leke mene bag me dala aur rote huwe gahr se nikal gaya..


Jb me gahr se chala gaya mere papa muje darwaje ke pas khade khade looks de rahe the..


me vaha se chala gaya..

kuch he dur ek garden tha..
socha vaha jake bethta hu..

par mene vaha ek ladki ko bethe dekha..
uske kaan ke iPod k music ki awaaz muje kafi dur tak sunai de rahi thi..

"Shayad usse mere saath ki jarurat pade" me yeh sochke us bench ke pas gaya aur vaha beth gaya..

Us ladki ne meri taraf dekha

uski aankhe dekhte he me shock hogaya..
uski aankho ka raang laal tha.. kitna dard tha uski aankho me..

uski aankho se ab b aans behrahe the..
uske najuk gallo pe lafe (slap) ka nishaan tha

Yeh dekhke muje bahut gussa aya.. mene maan me socha "Itne pyari ladki ko koi kese dukh pocha sakta hai.."



Usne apne kaano se headphines nikale aur kaha " Kya chahiye tumhe..?? "

"Mujhe jagah chahiye sochne ke liye " mene jawaab diya.. abhi b me uski aankho me khoya huwa tha..

"Kya tum kahi aur ja sakte ho?? Muje akele rehna hai" us pyari si ladki ne kaha..


"Nahi.. bilkul nahi.. me itni beautiful ladki ko itni raatko akele nahi chodunga"


"Please" kafi dard se usne kaha

"Nahi.. Am Asad.." mene baad badalte huwe kaha..

"Zoya" usne jaldi se jawaab diya..

"oh wah.. vese Zoya tum itni raatko yaha garden me kya kar rahi ho.."

"Meri maa muje apni badi behno se compare karna nahi chodegi.. me thak gayi thi in sabse..
isliye gharse bhaag nikal gayi.. aur tum??"


"mere papa ne muje gharse nikal diya.. me humesha fail hota hu.. aur unhe failure beta nahi chahiye.."

me thoda khush tha wo mujse baat kar rahi thi.. aur ab uska rona band hogaya tha..

"i m sry.. bahut buri baat hai yeh.." usne achanak kaha

"tum maafi maang rahi ho.. lekin q??"

"kyunki mene aoni marzi se ghar choda.. par tumhe gahr se nikala gaya"


"par me wo nahi hu jiski aankho se pani araha hai baby.. muje khudse jyada tumhari fikar hai.."


"par hum abhi toh mile hai" usne kaha..

"wo toh hai.. par me tumhe janna chahta hu.."

"par hum abhi toh mile hai" usne firse kaha..

me hasne laga.. "muje acha laga"

usne pucha "kyun??"


"kyunki me bale he apne ghar se nikala gaya hu..
par muje tum jeso khubsurat ladki mili.. jo mujse baat bhi kar rahi hai abhi.."

"me khubsurat nahi hu" usne kaha

"ha.. tumho.. kisi sur ko kuch aur kehne mat dena.. yahi sachai hai.. ki tum khubsurat ho"


ye sunke wo sharmane lagi..
yeh dekhke mene uske balo me apni ungli dali aur uski aankho me ankhe dalke dekhne laga..

"tum b bade handsme ho.. sirf mujpe he dyaan mat do.." kyunki wo topic change karna chahti thi..



"kya me itna handsome hu ki tum mere saath date pe aogi..??"

"Abhi.?? abhi toh 1am hua hai.. itni raatko kaha jayenge.??" usne muskurate huwe pucha..


"tumhari smile bahut pyari hai" fir usme khoke usse kehne laga..


"Tumne muje kese hasaya?? abhi 30 min pehle me ro rahi thi.."


"kyun na hum ye apni date pe soche??
vese Mc Donalds 24x7 khula rehta hai.. malum hai 1st date mc donalds me thoda ajeeb lagta hai.. par hume is thand se nikalna hai"



"thik hai.. yeh he thik hoga.."


Me khada hogaya.. aur neeche juka uski madad karne ke liye..
usne apna bag utaya.. aur apna haath mere hatho me diya..


Dis is hw i made my new friend (date) smile :)


Hey Friends dis is my new os..
wrote after a long time,
do tel kesa laga..
good or bad bth comments r welcomed..

Lots of Love
Mamta (Kajen_ki_Mamta)
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sgksg3 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mamta di u rock..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super adorable Post Mamta...👍🏼
I didn't knew tum itna achhca likhti ho yaar 😉
FB pe kyun nahi post karti tum?😊
Aaj link na mila hota FB pe se toh pata hi nahi lagta tumhare hidden talent ke baare mein 😆
Keep Writing😃
Lots of Love❤️
Facebook waali Sweta😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was so sweet❤️ can you please change the font color of asad pov... that yellow is really hard to read... write more like this😊👍🏼
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Thanks Alott Dii.. 😊 😳
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Originally posted by: sgksg3

Mamta di u rock..
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Thanks Alott dear... 😊 😳
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Thanks Alott Dear.. 😊 😳
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Thanks Alott Dear.. 😊 😳
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Originally posted by: -_Sweta_-

Super adorable Post Mamta...👍🏼

I didn't knew tum itna achhca likhti ho yaar 😉
FB pe kyun nahi post karti tum?😊
Aaj link na mila hota FB pe se toh pata hi nahi lagta tumhare hidden talent ke baare mein 😆
Keep Writing😃
Lots of Love❤️
Facebook waali Sweta😆



Thanks Alott Dear.. 😊 😳

Mene link post ki thi fb pe
and i wrote after a long time 😊
KaJen_Ki_Mamta thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

that was so sweet❤️ can you please change the font color of asad pov... that yellow is really hard to read... write more like this😊👍🏼




Thanks Alott Dear.. 😊 😳
done
i changed color of ASAD's POV

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