AsYa TS: The Perks of Coffee Breaks *COMPLETE* - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
What a beautiful update Raz. ⭐️👏👏
I hope i can call you so.
Always mesmerised by your writing. Mr. Silky Locks.. yumm! 😆 And his killer description you penned down. Mar gayi mein!
Liked Zoya's outfit, so elegant. And and fate works in such mysterious ways that finally she ended up in his cabin as his PA. How will she survive this job? 😳


P.S Will wait for the next part, do send me a PM too.. Though I'm always late, I will read it. And wishing you a very joyful Christmas. And we'll meet in 2014. Have fun and stay blessed always!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is a wonderful story..!!
Please update soon.. Waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
why didn't i see this ts before??
oh yeah i know the reason !
MY EXAMS :&

omg
i love this ! i love this !!
it's so interesting !
come on update the next part !
i want to read more !!
i want to see Mr.silky locks reaction !
come on update already !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Before i read d update... a huge hug to from me...! Yay...! U finally r back...! Hope u had a good tym...!
Edited...!

WOW...! My first reaction..! U gave us sooo much too read and i loved it... srry took tym cuz i ended up reading d 2nd, 3rd and d 4th post twice...! M already swooning... Bt i find d name "Mr. Silky Locks" real cutie...! I'm soo gonna add dat to my list of qualities which my prince charming shall have... 😳! 😉 bt d way she says no no more fumbles... Mr. Silky Locks...!

Bt this was soo hilarious yet cutee...! I cud imagine him and her actually doing this scene...! Beautifully written...!

"Tell me Ms. Farooqui," he said. "Do you need a speech therapist?"

"WHAT?" Zoya yelled and immediately clapped a hand to her mouth. He raised his eyebrow in amusement and Zoya averted her gaze.

Hmm... r v really seeing a naughty asad...?! Ya Allah...!


"Well then, I guess I'll have fun with you as my PA," Asad said emphasizing the word "fun". Zoya blinked in surprise and another pretty blush settled over her cheeks. If only he had any idea of the type of fun she had in mind.

"Yes sir," she replied.

"Call me Asad," he told her. "After all, any friend of Aiyaan, and now Humaira, is a friend of mine."


bt dis seems a new rule dat if any person is ayaan's or humeira's friend he/she has to be asad's friend as well...!

😉

Moreover m very happy dat in smway he is taking d initiative...!
Lol Gangnam Style...?!

This just proves that smiles do kill...! Nd surely Zoya's dimpled wali smile does create havoc...!

so she settle on smiling her cute dimpled smile which caught him totally off guard.

Asad was shocked at the smile she gave him. It was such a bright and beautiful smile that was filled with innocence. He blinked to clear away the haze that was taking over his head and cleared his throat.

Love ur usage of words to describe asad...! Smoking hot sexy Boss...! Its sorta rhymes...! Bt its true... He is truly a masterpiece...! (KSG)
So he is actually taking d lead/initiative nd isnt d emotionally challenged...!! Yay...!! Feel lyk dancing...!

"This tie isn't going to fix itself," Asad called after her causing her to halt in her tracks.

Is he trying to make a move on me? Zoya wondered incredulously.

Am I flirting with her? Asad asked himself surprised at his own antics.

I really want to see them on first name basis...! 😳

nd they smwhat did i guess... atleast halfway thru...!!


"Zoya," he whispered.

Zoya's eyes snapped open when her name fell from his lips. Time just froze as her name echoed in her ears. She had been right, her name from his lips sounded like honey dripping from a jar. This was her undoing.


OMG...!! They kissed...! Finally...! Bt m dissapointed wid asad dat he dint take d lead...! Bt m very proud of Zoya...!


"Aiyaan, you're still here?" Asad asked as he stepped out of his office. If Zoya was in turmoil, then our Asad wasn't far behind. He was fighting an inner battle with himself where his heart told him that he wanted to pursue Zoya but his mind told him to focus on his career.

"Bhaijaan, I was just inviting Zoya for dinner tonight," Aiyaan replied.

"Why?" Asad asked sharply. Zoya gave a start and looked at him blankly and as soon as those chocolaty eyes met his, his gaze softened and Zoya dared a very small smile.

I actually freaked out thinking he regreted nd therefore the next moment he was back to square one, Ms Farooqui...! All d praise i had written wud be all wasted...! 😲😉 Bt this was truly EPIC:


"ASAD! Why the hell didn't you tell me before?" Zoya shrieked as she tried to find her concealer. Asad's mouth fell open in shock when she called him by his given name for the first time before he cleared his throat and stared at her.


Ayaan nice one..! though m surprised Zoya dint notice when she had gone to d washroom... Bt loved zoya's jealousy...! though at first i read it as Karan...! I guess m wayy tooo obsessed wid KSG...!


Loved dis:

Allah miyaan, what's wrong with you, Mr. Khan? Using the word "eat" and "you" in the same sentence when you're with a girl me isn't the way to go.


Bt i loved zoya's honesty...! So he did make d first move...!


"Mr. Si-Mr. Khan, are you...are you asking me...out on...a date?" She stammered. Asad looked at her with a small smile on his face.

"Maybe I am Ms. Farooqui. Unless," Asad broke off and frowned, "if you don't want to go then I can-."


WHen he was like wid boss... i was lyk what d hell is he trying to do...?!! Bt then relaxed when i saw dat he regreted it...!

Bt his confesion made me go all gooey...!!! This was soo cutee...!!!


"What I'm trying to say is that I think I sort of kind of like you," he muttered. A dazzling smile illuminated Zoya's face and Asad blinked a few times and grinned nervously.

"Liar," she whispered before she wrapped her arms around her neck, without any regrets this time. Asad's grin turned into a smile at her comment.

"Fine. I'm insanely attracted to you to the point where I think I might even have fallen madly in love with you," he corrected. Zoya chuckled and tightened her arms around him as he kissed the crown of her head. She pulled back and smiled at him shyly.

I swear even a jelly wudnt make u sooo mushyy...!! I'm still stuck at that point...!! I dont noe how more romantic can sm1 get...?!! Bt superb update... hoping to c ur next part soon...! Eagerly w8in...! i noe evn after giving such a lamba vala update v shud hv some shame bt kya karen ur writing is such dat it makes us want more and more...!!!!


Aashka

Edited by asyafreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank goodness you updated !
geez man i was thinking about this ts all day long in my class !
i'm gonna go and read it !
thanks for updating :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG OMG OMG😲😲
i am at a loss of words😲
this update just gave me butterflies n goosebumps☺️
Mr.Silky Locks ufff i love him love him love him☺️
loved how the same arrogant asad falls head over heals for his PA😳
i've never doubted ur writing skills but what u wrote is perfection dear👏
this was just sooo romantic uff❤️☺️
im going to read it again😆😳
awesome awesome awesome!!!!👍🏼

Maha

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