AsYa TS: The Architect and The Corporate Golden Girl [Complete]

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Just amazing 👏 this is an awesome story and thank you for this 🤗

I hope that you will write more story in future 😃

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

it's the best...so beautiful...i never thought someone could tell such a long tale in a compact yet perfect way...
u r really an excellent writer...bravo!!!
do write more...

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TanjoreGirl

@TanjoreGirl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Perfect!!!! Just loved it . You have a flair for writing continue to do so!!

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

I just loved it a lot...🤗
Nothing can be more perfect than this!⭐️
U are an amazing writer!👏

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

AWESOME...really its amazing..it was quiet a gud ending..n Asad sending her flowers everyday with a special note was wonderfull...n also Zara was too cute..lovely it was...

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-Shormi-

@-Shormi-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

absolutely freaking brilliant👏...i hv no words coz i'm at aww😳 & u really write so very well⭐️...i luv luv luv da 7 days flower thingy...da way asad's notes were written were exceptionally beautiful❤️...dat being said zoya ws really a hard nut 2 crack😆 plus i luv da role-reversal here wich is quite diff. 4rm da show😊

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

tis is totally fabulous...its superb...mind blowing...

totally luv it...'its so cute n lovely...

totally imagine the whole scene like a beautifull movie...

luv the flower n notes scene...

hw he manage to imoress her n win her...

thx fr the pm...

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reenah

@reenah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

I am so glad you wrote this OS.
Its an amazing piece of work and really speak to my heart.
The way you potray Asad and his persistence in wooing Zoya,

I love the way you show how Asad saw the real and inner Zoya
Especially when others just saw what she wanted the world to c.

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Blaaaaaaah

@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Loved it. Loved it. Loved it..

Everything was perfect! The length , the story , the way of writing , the emotions .. everything.

Thank you for this brilliant TS. I am glad I didn't miss it.

lots of loveee!