Ammi, Aapne Aisa Kyun Kiya? OS - Page 2

Such an amazing surprise!

wonderfully written Bheegi and I am very glad to read something written by you on this forum. I would totally want a scene like this but sometimes CVs seem to be so out of touch with what is obvious that I expect to see more Haseena crap tomorrow( 75% Haseena/farhaan/Nikhat etc and 25% KV/SM).

Is there any way you may want to elaborate on this OS? May be make it 2-3 parts?

Most likely the Ayaan leaving scene will be shown next week.

WOW! see thatz y we need u here everyday yaar...

Originally posted by: me2you

Unexpected surprises are often the best...

"17 saal pehle unhone mujhse mere abbu cheen liye, aur aaj, meri ammi." (One of the best dialogues) 👏

Wo bilkul toot jaayenge phoophi (No words can describe that feeling)

Meri jagah tum hoti tho kya tum Asad se door reh paati? (Ouch...)

Usey kabhie akelapan mehsoos nahin hone dogi (A child will always feel incomplete without a parent)

"NNNAHHH!" He yelled at the top of his voice (I so wanted to see him doing this)

MERA IS DUNIYA MEIN KOI NAHIN HAI- NA AMMI-NA ABBU-NA BHAI-NA BEHEN-NA DOST (Shattered...)

She felt the intensity of his sobs as she ran her fingers through this thick hair (Wow...👏)

"anjaane mein sab se gehri chot hamare apne hi humein pahunchaate hain." (So so true...)

"some wounds are too deep and can never heal with a bandaid." (Very well said)

Don't compare the two situations! (Yes and no)

"I will never forgive him for what he has done to us." (Ek dum right)

And if she doesn't come, I will assume that like you, even I am an orphan (...😭)

As if the first five mins of the epi were not enough to make me cry, you give us a even sadder OS. Dialogue wise: superb. I could very well relate to some of those words (real life experience)

Feelings and emotion wise: perfect. It really made me cry. This is exactly how it should have been. Yes, a breakdown hug would have made it even better but we all know Mr. Khan's character: someone that wants to be alone whenever he gets angry.

Do I understand Dilshad's decision? Yes and no. Do I understand Mr. Khan's pain? Definitely!

His character has so many layers, one of them being the most important one: a damaged childhood. That will have a lifetime after effect and his character portrays that very well.

Thanks a lot Sangeeta Di for sharing this with us. This is what I call a continuation from yesterday's episode. 👏 👏 👏

CV's are you listening, watching, reading this? If so, please take this into consideration. Thank you.

❤️

P.S. This was so unexpected that I did not even PMed RK Mom!!! Sorry 😳

Originally posted by: volatile

As I was reading this, I found myself hoping that they show at least a fraction of what you have written in tomorrows episode! Love how zoya was being a supportive partner to asad, without judging her beloved phoophi or Rashid.

Beautiful piece of writing as usual, bheegi.

Originally posted by: qhpankha

wonderfully written Bheegi and I am very glad to read something written by you on this forum. I would totally want a scene like this but sometimes CVs seem to be so out of touch with what is obvious that I expect to see more Haseena crap tomorrow( 75% Haseena/farhaan/Nikhat etc and 25% KV/SM).

Is there any way you may want to elaborate on this OS? May be make it 2-3 parts?

Most likely the Ayaan leaving scene will be shown next week.

Originally posted by: Npdeepa

WOW! see thatz y we need u here everyday yaar...

i so wanted the same thing to happen between AsYa...pls cv's...sangi post this on forum 32...

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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Well i did think that i would read this in the morning but i just couldn't help myself and i am reading this just for you.

I thought earlier that i would give it a miss coz QH at present doen't appeal to me at all but i read it for you and I am glad i did coz this was beautiful just so so beautiful and i would have been at a loss had i not read this😳😳😳

You know QH doesn't effect me anymore and nor does any character's pain but i cried after reading this with asad and for Asad😭

I guess the opening line is from QH😕😕but i am pretty sure even though i haven't seen QH that the original scene wouldn't even come anywhere near close to this coz this was perfection👏...

"Zoya, Asad aur Najma ki mohabbat ki wajah se hi tho main yahan 17 saal Rashid se alag rahi. Tab bachchon ko meri zaroorat thi Zoya. Lekin aaj-lekin aaj Rashid ko meri zaroorat hai. Mere pyaar ne mujhey 17 saal baad pukara hai Zoya. Ab main unse aur door nahin reh sakti. Meri jagah tum hoti tho kya tum Asad se door reh paati?"

i can't even understand how she can compare asad and zoya's love with hers and rashid...honestly it is pukeworthy🤢🤢

I do believe that after a certain age when your kids are settled your spouse and your happiness should be your first priority but this is just unacceptable...Dilshad is leaving asad an ideal son for a whimpid rashid?Love truly is blind and i here i mean it in a very bad way...

Had she fought for her happiness with any other man i would have supported her fully and bashed asad for not supporting her decision but what Dilshad did today is unforgivable IMO...and i just want to strangle her here...

This isn't a mistake this is a crime and i hope Dilshad is punished for it lifetime...i want whimpid to leave her and asad to never accept her again...I know that won't happen and asad will just forgive her but i hope things never go back to normal again coz for me there is no normal for her...She left and deserted her son for a man like whimpid and she shouldn't be redeemed for it...

I wsih i can kill dilshad more than anymore coz honestly i don't get how she can make this decision and if loves makes you completely destroy your son for a man who has never cared for you i wish i never get this kind of love coz this isn't love its madness😡...

I honestly believe after what she did to asad she doesn't have a right to call him her son...she failed as a mother to zoya long before and today she failed asad too and i don't think this test can be retaken and i hope she doesn't get a chance to coz she doesn't deserve it😡😡😡She needs to pay for this for her life and i wish she does

"TUMHEIN JAANA HAI THO TUM BHI CHALI JAO!" He bellowed, "I DON'T NEED ANYONE! MERA IS DUNIYA MEIN KOI NAHIN HAI- NA AMMI-NA ABBU-NA BHAI-NA BEHEN-NA DOST"

Oh man di you made me cry for a man whom i wished all sorts of unhappiness in his life just a few days back,...now that is talent😆😆😆

I could feel asad's pain like it was mine😭😭😭...

I loved how zoya handled the situation with asad giving him some time to cool off before trying to talk to him😳😳😳

zoya's hand got caught in the window

"I know Mr. Khan. Main jaanti hoon aap mujhey kabhie chot nahin pahunchaayenge.Aap mujhey bahut chaahte hain aur jab koi kisi se mohabbat karta hai, wo jaan boojh kar kabhie unhein chot nahin pahunchaa chaahta. Lekin yeh baat alag hai,"She climbed through the window and landed on the sofa in his room, "anjaane mein sab se gehri chot hamare apne hi humein pahunchaate hain."

i know zoya was just trying to make asad understand dilshad's POV but i honestly belive that she should have just held him and told him that everything was going to be ohk coz Dilshad nd her love for that whimpid doesn't deserve to br defended or explained😡

Loved loved loved the way zoya calmed asad down😳😳😳

Jab hum ek doosre ke bina kuch hafte na reh sake, tho unhone ne tho 17 saal apni mohabbat ke bina kaate hain. Shouldn't she be entitled to live with the man she loves?

Did zoya just comapare her and asa'd love with dilshad nd rashid's🤢

why why why?is she demeaning her own love by comparing to them😭😭

Asad is right i don't think Rashid loves Dilshad and for dilshad to have left Asad for him well she deserves a life of pain is all i say🤢🤢🤢

Jo cheez aapki hai wo wapas aa jaayegi aur agar nahin aayi tho wo hamari kabhie thi hi nahin Mr. Khan.

Wow i loved how you used this saying here👏

Phoophi will always love you, wo hamesha aapki ammi rahengi lekin unhein jeene ka haq hai, waise hi jaise hum dono ko hai. Please give her a chance

Yes i agree she has a right to live but not at the cost of killing her children and definitely not for a man like rashid🤢🤢🤢

A person should be given a chance to make a mistake nd not to commit a crime and for me this was a crime

"Theek hai Ms Farooqui. Main filhaal khaamosh rahoonga. Na ammi ko phone karoonga na unse milne jaaunga. Agar ammi ko meri fikr hai, tho wo khud yahan mujhse milne aayengi. And if she doesn't come, I will assume that like you, even I am an orphan."

Kya lines hain to end this perfect OS👏...

and asad i do belive you became an orphan today😭

Brilliant OS di...i am sorry if i ranted a little too much i just couldn't control myself😆and well you can imagine how good this mush have been ki from not reading to reading to i have come to write this much...

You are amazing Bas😳

And i love you❤️❤️

Wow Superb
Love every bit of it

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-

Such an amazing surprise!

Reserved!

Unreserved.

Thank you so much for this OS Sangeeta Ji! 😃

This is just what I'd wanted to see in QH except that its so much better than my imagination and what we can expect from QH.

I really wish that they'll show something along these lines only.

It couldn't have been any better!! I want this bus no matter how much it makes me cry. The CVs really need to read this OS.

Asad's anger and then his breakdown in Zoya's arms. Zoya's anger after he threw the tray. His hurting Zoya's hand and his apology. Her trying to get him to open up and his doing just that. Their conversation was perfect!!

And the last line nailed it!!

if she doesn't come, I will assume that like you, even I am an orphan."

My heart broke into pieces!

I wish you were one of scriptwriters.

P.S. Please come back. I really miss your detailed posts.