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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SimplySmile


Hiii😃

As always your epilogue did not disappoint whatsoever. It was the perfect ending to the perfect story, loved reading every bit of it.

Asad's care fr his wife is so admirable and adorable and cute'able, I'm pretty sure that cute'able is in no way a word but in his case, every cute and hot word should be a word.

I mean the way he gently took of her when he saw her sleepy and tired made me jealous as to how Zoya won the freaking lottery with him. It was just to much for me. Too cute'able.

The bathroom scene between the two was of course hot'able. Nice to see a bit of 16+ added into the story,


I hope the lion king's daughter is not troubling you too much?"

Oh my god why is that line so perfect. It just sent me back to memories of my childhood, like about 4 hours ago when I was listening to Hakuna Matata. It's a wonderful thing, it means no worries for the rest of your day, its our problem free, PHILOSOPHY. Getting carried away there.

"Yesh lion king!", replied Afreen.

"Okay lion princess!", replied Asad.



What a cute'able father daughter scene. Afreen, why does she have to be so damn adorable??? What am I saying she's AsYa's kid of course she's gonna be adorable.

Ending was once again so AsYa filled, and it made me grin like an idiot while my mother was asking me whether I needed to go to the hospital.

Loved the story to bits,

Now please update Zehnaseeb soon😃

- Lots of hugs🤗, Sonny (girl by the way)



Your comments indeed is cute'able! 😳 Indeed he's a lottery and I wish I have a husband like THIS Asad! I was actually listening to Hakuna Matata when I took a break mid way and that's what lead me to this dialogue! 😆

Zehnaseeb will come around tonight... a bit later but tonight! 😉

Lots of love and hugs Sonny! 🤗 ❤️

- Mrina <3


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover

ah it was a hot ending!


Originally posted by: aarzoo50

awesome epilogue...
loved it


Thanks both of you! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks Surish! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dpsreddyncl

Loved it, Great story.


Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Olelelelele... Kita cute epilouge tha 😃


Affu bohut cute hai...

Lion king and Lion princess 😆

But afsos khatam hogaya 😭

Chalo koi baat nahi Zehnaseeb hai na 😉


Thanks Niya baby! 🤗

Hahaha.. Zehnaseeb will go on for a long time! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-


Thanks Niya baby! 🤗

Hahaha.. Zehnaseeb will go on for a long time! 😉

Zehnaseeb ke Update main aur kitna time ??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Awesome epilogue for awesome story !! ❤️
Afreen is such a cutie pie !!
It was beatiful story that i'll miss a lot !!

Love u !! 🤗 ❤️


Thanks Bano! ❤️ I'll miss writing it too! 😳

Love you too! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww lovely epilogue!! Affu is so cute!! ( my pet name is affu ) Lion king and lion princess 😆 AsYa's romance ☺️ Loved it!! Even commented on zehnaseeb. Do accept my buddy request and plz pm me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
just finished reading the whole thing now...!!
Fabulously written...!!

Too good!!

But wished you hadn't stopped here...!

Oh wait have i mentioned? I'm in love with your writings...!!

Do PM me for your future works and also PM me your index...!!

You are one truly a fabulous writer...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Az07

It was a cute epilogue
I will miss this story


Originally posted by: roxon

loved the epilogue...


Originally posted by: rosamale

Every good thing has to come to an end😭

I will miss this story for sure


Originally posted by: nilusoni

wonderful and lovely ending

thanx for pm



Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update.

It was So cute Epilogue.
I am missing this FF very much.
You done a Great Job.
Keep write like this.



Thank you so much for these lovely comments! 🤗 I'm glad you liked the epilogue! 😳

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