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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Chapter 4:


You've been a...



WOW!!!!!





This chapter was sooo A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E! ❤️

Asad wrapped his arms around Zoya's waist.

Asad "My Zoya is fine with anyplace as long as I am with her."

Zoya (That is true totally but Asad is just acting.)



This was tooo cute! 😉 Asad is flirting full on! 😆

Nuzzhat "Zoya, you and Asad look just made for each other."

Asad "Thank you!"

Dave "So how long have you both been together?"

Asad "3 months..."

Zoya "1 month!"

Nuzzhat "What do you mean?"

Asad "I have been persuading her for 3 months but she accepted the proposal just a month back."

Dave "How did you guys meet?"

Asad "Well I had gone to the country side market to buy some antiques. And I had bumped into her."

Dave "Oh! The shop where Zoya sells stuff?"

Asad "Yah!"


Hahahahaha!!!!


Thoda planning ke saath jhoot bola karo! Warna pakde jaoge! 🤣

Then,

Asad "But with me its different she doesn't need to tell me stuff after all it's a heart to heart connection."

Nuzzhat "Oh so you people plan to get married soon?"

Zoya "No!"

Dave "You guys not marrying??"

Asad "Course we will... But Zoya doesn't want it soon though I am still trying to convince her for it."

Zoya (Marriage with Asad... That will be...)

Zoya (weird... nah)

Zoya (a dream come true)

Dave "Gosh Zoya you are blushing like anything."

Zoya (Why have I suddenly developed this new ability to blush?)


I'm really loving this! ❤️ They are pretense is NATURAL! 😉

Then,

Zoya "Huh! What happened?"

Asad "Incredibly foolish..."

Zoya "What am I doing on the floor? And why are you over me?"

Asad "A bullet just brushed past you."

Zoya "I am sorry! I should be more careful."




So sweet! 😳


Zoya "I want you to head to your home right away. I can't let you in trouble due to me."

Asad "And I can't leave you here. I won't even if I was not your bodyguard."

Zoya (Not my bodyguard? He would protect me then too!)

Asad pulls Zoya in a tight hug.

Asad "Let me tell you a secret..."

Asad "You are the first girl who has ever cried in my arms."

Asad "And it feels good to make you feel better."

Zoya "Really?"

Asad "Yah silly... Do you feel better?"

Zoya "A lot..."

Asad "You should be lucky that I am your bodyguard?"

Zoya "And why so?"

Asad "If I wasn't I'd probably try to take advantage of you right now."

Zoya (I wouldn't mind that though!)

Zoya "What do you mean?"

Asad "I was just kidding. You get embarrassed easily though."

Zoya "You say stuff like that."




Asad letting out his secret! 😳 Kya baat hai Asad miyan! 😉 Full-on flirting going on? 😉

Mathew "Zoya, let me help you settle in while Nikhat and Asad make dinner and argue about the stuff they want to. Zoya, you can also pick the room you want to stay in."

Zoya (Asad and I in different rooms! That will be... so not nice)

Zoya "Sure!"


Awww... Poor Zoya.. She is used to sleeping in Asad's arms now! 😳 Don't worry! He won't leave you alone in that room at night! 😳

After sometime Zoya and Matthew walk into the kitchen to see Asad and Nikhat talking seriously.

Matthew "You guys still fighting?"

Asad and Nikhat become quiet on hearing this.

Zoya (Something's fishy! They were certainly not only fighting! Maybe some important talk!)




Dekhte hain ab kya hoga! 😆

Asad "Zoya, before you head to your room I need to ask something."

Zoya "Sure!"

Asad "Are you in love with me?"

Zoya (How do I tell him I do?)

Zoya "Of course I don't like you!"

Asad "You hate me?"

Zoya "I meant I don't like you in the whole lovely dovey way."

Asad "Glad we sorted it out. Cause I had a feeling you do and just wanted to clear it not. After all you are my client and I am your bodyguard."

Zoya (I am heartbroken now.)

Zoya "Yah!"


Poor baby Zoya! Heartbroken!



Please tell her you love her Asad! ❤️



And give her a Gift! 😳

Zoya's turmoil and break down was beautifully written!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The Rain scene was cute! Loved the conversation! ❤️ OMG! The storm at the orphanage? 😲 He threw both the phones in the ocean? 😲

Hope they'll be safe and sound somewhere! 😊

Asad "Zoya, trust me. All will be fine."

Zoya "I lost my mom in a similar storm."

Asad wrapped his arms around Zoya's shoulders and pulled her close.

Zoya "We were coming from Duclan to here. The boat crashed due to the storm. No one survived except me. Your dad saved me. I still remember my mom's smile as she saw me safe and the sea engulfed her. I have always been afraid of travelling via sea ever since then."

Asad "I promise you that nothing will happen to you. Just close your eyes and keep your head on my shoulder."

Zoya did as instructed and Asad pulled her even closer.

Asad "I'll be there for you always with all my life!"


Totally loved this ^^ convo between Asad and Zoya! 😳 I'm sure he will be there for her and keep her safe with all his life!

He is Zoya's saviour! 😳



P.S.: You promised me a KISS! 😡

I'm totally in love with this story!


Now I have to wait to read further!!!

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! I wanna know what happens next? 😳

Love the whole update! ❤️

Continue soon! 😳





Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️




*hi five*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Note ~ For FF to SS:

FF to SS... Well, I knew this a week back! 😆
I totally understand the difficulty of managing two FFs and college at the same time!


Let me tell you a secret.. 😳




I hope you heard me! 😃


P.S.: Waiting for the New Stories! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
New Thread #2:



CONGO FOR NEW THREAD! 🥳
Wish you many more threads to come! 🤗

Wooohooo!!! PARTY TIME!!!! 🥳

I know I'm Special! 😉 I love you more! ❤️

Bodyguard Asad Ahmed Khan reporting on duty Madam! 😉



This was the first thing that came into my mind! 😆 But seriously.. This story is really MY FAVOURITE! ❤️ I love it to bits!

~x~



Big hug to you my baby! 🤗 Lot more waiting for you! 😉

minakrish thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Chapter 5:



Awesome Chapter! 👏

MY FAVORITE ONE TILL DATE!!!! 😳 After all.. It's CONFESSION! ❤️

Asad is so protective of her! 😳 Yayy! They reached Dublin! 😃 and Granny is here! 😳

Asad's Mom and Zoya's Mom's were best friends! and Nuzzhat's mom too! 😃 Awesome! 👏

Asad leaves the room and calls it a night as well.

Granny "You love him, don't you."

Zoya (Am I that obvious?)

Granny "He loves you too!"

Zoya (Things like this just bring up my hopes!)

Granny "He won't admit it that soon."

Zoya "That is cause he doesn't love me."

Granny "Just follow my advice. Let go of your feelings for a day. Treat him like a stranger for a day. He'll come around."

Zoya "No point trying."

Granny "I know you will give it a try."

Zoya "I'll go take a nap."


Awww.. Granny! *BIG HUG* to you! 🤗 You are the only one who understood that...


🤣

They left Granny's place! Off to the station and there goes... Fighting for the map and... MISHAP! 🤣 But Zoya.. I love you for that! 😉

Zoya "*sob* I was just trying to..."

Asad "I shouldn't have shouted so hard. I know I am stubborn and I..."

Zoya starts crying harder.

Asad "Please stop crying!"

Asad tries to stop Zoya from crying and when she doesn't he kisses away her tears startling her.

Zoya "I.."

Asad "Now that you have stopped crying, we need to walk towards the station. I don't think it's too far."

Asad takes the map and starts walking with Zoya following him lost in her own thoughts.

Zoya (Asad kissed me!)

Zoya (But he just kissed my tears away.)

Zoya (He could have wiped them off with his hands too.)

Zoya (Maybe I should give granny's advice actually a try.)


OBVIOUSLY YOU SHOULD TRY WHAT GRANNY SAID! 😳

Staying in the Station Master's house! 😃 I wonder what's next... 😉

Asad and Zoya enter the house along with the station master.

Station Master Wife "Its great to have a married couple with us. Just an hour back a couple came but they were not married so I drove them away."

Zoya (She'll drive us away too them.)

Station Master's Wife "So it is... Mr. and Mrs.?"

Asad "Asad Ahmed Khan!"

Zoya (Asad lied! Can't believe it.)


Kya baat hai Asad miyaan! Aap to bohot chaaloo insaan hain! 😆 😉

~x~

Station Master "Your love is so young and yet you both are so distant."

Zoya "We are just a bit shy."

Station Master's Wife "Let go of it then."

Station Master "Show us a kiss!"

Station Master's Wife "Yes! A kiss!"

Asad holds Zoya's face and pecks her lips.

Zoya (This was the best moment of my life."

Station Master's Wife "You people call this a kiss."

Station Master "Kiss her like a man!"

Asad cups Zoya's face and smacks his lips with hers and slowly deepens the kiss.

Zoya (Correction! This is the best moment of my life.)

After a moment Asad pulls away and Zoya is all red now.

Station Master "Now that's a real kiss."

Station Master's Wife "A husband should always kiss his wife before he sleeps."

Zoya (I would love kissing Asad every night.)

Asad "I guess we should call it a night then."

Station Master "Looks like you both can't wait to get some alone time now."

Station Master's Wife "Don't tease them too much. Zoya is already red."

Zoya (Everyone is looking at me now. I should learn to control myself.)


I have read this part 6 times! 😆 I guess that justifies how much I loved it! 😉 ❤️

RAZIAAA!!!! 😡 B.I.T.C.H. 😡

Glad the case is closed! 😉 Matthew is here and Asad is JEALOUS!!!! I'm Lovin' it! ❤️

And there comes, CONFESSION!

After some time as Zoya comes out from the washroom someone grabs her and takes her towards the fountain away from the wedding party.

Zoya "Leave me!"

The person lets go of Zoya's hands and Zoya sees the person's face.

Zoya "Asad!"

Asad "How dare you?"

Zoya (What have I done now?)

Asad "How could you dance with Matthew and that too so closely."

Zoya "I am answerable to you."

Asad "I am your bodyguard."

Zoya "You are no longer my bodyguard. The case is over."

Asad "But I want to look out for you."

Zoya "And why is that so?"

Asad "Because I have got used to it."

Zoya (He still won't admit.)

Zoya tries to move away but Asad grabs both her hands.

Asad "Where are you going?"

Zoya "You need not care about me."

Asad "But I want to."

Zoya "I can't take it anymore so you better stay away from me."

Asad "I can't do that."

Zoya "I'll die if you don't because I am hopelessly in love with you. It kills me when you mention about my status. I know I am poor and not worth you but it hurts to hear it from you."

Hearing this Asad kisses Zoya passionately.

Zoya (Why is Asad kissing me?)

Zoya just pushes Asad away from her.

Asad "Please don't push me away from your life because my life has become you. I remember the first day I saw you I didn't know who you were but I was so lost in your beauty to even help you pick up your stuff. When I learnt you were a princess and I your bodyguard, I realized that you deserve a prince but not me. That is what I meant by status all the time. I tried to be as rude as I could but I couldn't be at all because I fell for you. I hate it when you get close to Dave or Matthew. Nikhat told me that day that you love me and I should forget the fact that you are a princess but also warned me that tough times lie ahead. I can't put you in any danger because of me. The reason being that I love you."

Zoya "I can face everything as long as I have you."

Zoya moves closer to Asad's lips and captures them with hers. Asad responds back with equal love.

Zoya (I'll love you Asad with all my life!)


Awesomeness, Flawlessness, Brilliance and Beyond Perfection! 👏

BRILLIANT UPDATE! ❤️ LOVED IT TO BITS!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

Now I go...



Bye bye...

xoxo

Keep scrolling down! 😉
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
TEASER [First Time Ever]: 😆


*peeped in to check what's here*

OMG! Teasers? By Mahi? REALLY? And that to TWO Teasers? SPECIALLY FOR ME???



*dancing*



This BIRTHDAY is officially.. My BEST BIRTHDAY EVER! ❤️

Scroll down for comments on Teasers..

-----

My comments in blue in brackets (..)

Teaser #1

Asad "You can escape from everyone's eyes but not me."

(Who want's to escape from you? ☺️)


Zoya "I don't even want too."

(Exactly 😳)


Asad "Turn and look at me!"

Zoya turns around and meets Asad's eyes.

Asad "I heard you had a tough day today."

(Awww.. Look he is worried! 🤗)


Zoya "Yah! I have to learn ball dance in a week and it is just too much pressure."

Asad "Let me teach you then!"

Asad gently extends his hands to Zoya. Zoya stares back at him while Asad just smiles.

Asad "Princess, may I have this dance?"



(Chance maar rahe ho Asad miyan! Kya baat hai! 😉)


~x~


Teaser #2


Without thinking further, Zoya kisses the hell out of Asad who responds back with equal passion. Moments later they part to take a breath.

(Blushing ☺️)


Asad "Zoya, it is late and I don't think it is appropriate for me to be here."

(Really? 😉)


Zoya "But I want you to be here with me for the night."

(Obviously 😳)


Zoya pulls Asad into a real tight hug leaving no space between them.

Asad "Zoya!"

(Mr. Khan.. Itni jaldi kya hai jaane ki?😉)


Zoya and Asad get so involved that they stumble across the bedside and fall on the bed with Asad on top on Zoya. Asad tries to move away but Zoya doesn't let him.

Zoya "I want you to make love to me!"

(OH YES!!!! 🥳 THIS IS OFFICIALLY GONNA BE MY FAVOURITE PART! )

You all know...



P.S.: I love the Addition in CS! ❤️



P.P.S.: My Birthday was AWESOME! Thanks to my 2 Angels! 🤗

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Chapter 6:



Bodyguard Asad Ahmed Khan is back! He is appointed as her personal Bodyguard again! 😃 Wooohooo! 🥳



Awesome Chapter! 👏 I'm really enjoying this! 😃 Zoya is genuinely trying her best to get some privacy! 😆

~x~

Asad "I know that you are getting affected by this proximity and I would dare not want anyone else to dance like this with you, Zoya."

Zoya "And neither do I want someone else to touch me, Asad."

Asad "Just be with me in the moment then and without bothering about anything simply stay with me."

Zoya "I am ready. I will surely be a good student now."

Asad and Zoya move close to each other again and dance under the moonlight, neither of them showing any desire to stop.


I loved the dance in the palace gardens! ❤️ WOW! 👏

And then, Asad came do Zoya's room to spend time with her! 😳 Totally Adorable! 😳

Zoya "To be you are more than just ordinary and also more than extra-ordinary so never call yourself unfit for me. You are my prince charming and this is what that matters the most to me."

Asad and Zoya sit and talk for a long time wishing the night would never send.


Awesomeness, Flawlessness, Brilliance and Beyond Perfection! 👏 Beautiful Lines! ❤️

BRILLIANT UPDATE! ❤️ LOVED IT TO BITS!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

Now I go...



Bye bye...

xoxo

Mina di
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Chapter 7:

OMG Mahi! This was flawless! 👏

Awesome Chapter! 👏 I'm really enjoying this! 😃 The horse ride was simply brilliant! 👏

Archery Lessons! My favourite! ❤️

Ayaan romancing Humeira during duty hours! 🤣 Pitega bechara! 😆

Asad "It's time for your lesson. And I won't be lenient."
Zoya "I don't mind as I am in love with my teacher."
Asad "Fortunately for you, your teacher loves his student back."

Zoya is in full on flirting mode! 😉

Asad "Have you ever focused at something continuously?"
Zoya "Obviously! Your eyes!"
Zoya (Asad is blushing. And he looks so cute.)
Asad "Zoya, it's no time for romance. I don't want that you excel in everything else and fail at mine."

This was super duper cute! 😳

I can imagine Asad blushing! ☺️



Bilkul aise ^^^ ! 😉

OMG! Asad being all romantic eh?

Asad "That's it for today. You were fabulous."
Zoya "And my treat?"
Asad looks here and there and after noticing that nobody is around, he kisses Zoya on her lips.

Zoya (Asad sure knows how to make my heart skip a beat.)


Haaayeee.. Mar jaawan! ❤️

~x~

Yayyy! Dave and Nuzzhat came to meet Zoya! 😃

Dave "I know that you and Asad are in love and I can see it on your face."

Zoya "I am sorry. I should have..."
Dave "Zoya, it is not your fault at all. You had no wrong intentions and you have not hurt me at all."
Zoya just hugged Dave in response only to pull away after Asad coughed.
Dave "I see green!"
Asad wrapped his hands around Zoya's waist to show his possessiveness.
Asad "I admit I am jealous."
Dave "Zoya is only yours and for me she is just a best friend... like a sister."

That was really sweet! 😃

Zoya freed the birds from the cage! She is the best princess ever! ❤️

Welcoming Ball! 😲 I see some twist here! 🤔

Continue super soon! Me waiting! 😳

Love you heaps my Mahi baby! 🤗 ❤️


Bye bye..



xoxo
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Chapter 8:

Keeping my comments extremely simple this time! 😳 No gifs other than my KSG's flying kiss at the end! 😉 😆

Mahi, this was truly one of the most beautiful chapters of this story and my most favourite! ❤️

I'm really enjoying this fairytale! Bullseye ke liye ek kiss! 😳 Awesome deal! 😆 👍🏼

Why is Lupin being so rude and what's up with Matthew? 🤔 Poor ASad is sacked from the job of bodyguard!

Yayyy! Humeira and Ayaan supporting Asad and Zoya! 😃

Urrrggghhh!!! 😡 @#$%^**&^%$^&^@#@#$#@%$%$#&*^%$# 😡
I OFFICIALLY HATE MATTHEW NOW! 😡

Zoya in Asad's room! 😳 and they kiss... Asad come on! Just let go and love her! 😳 ❤️

Asad "Zoya, I will love you forever with all my life."

Zoya (Me too, Asad!)

Zoya "That is all I needed to hear."


Best dialogues! 👏 Zoya should have told about Matthew to Asad.. He would have punched him black and blue! 😡

Loved Zoya's conversation with Granny and Zoya's Mother's Letter was beautifully written! 👏

FINALLY THE BALL DANCE! 😳

Zoya is trul;y a unique princess and would be the most amazing queen ever! 😳 Her speech was brilliant! 👏

Dance sequence was just as I imagined it to be and the conversations of Asad and Zoya throughout the dance were truly amazing!

Asad "Did I tell you that you look mesmerizing today?"

Zoya "No, not before now."

Asad "That is because you haven't looked into my eyes yet."

Zoya made direct eye contact and found her losing herself to Asad.

Zoya "Your eyes speak volumes."

Asad "Really?"

Zoya "Don't look at me like that? You make my heart flutter."


This was super duper cute! 😳

Oh oh! Ghafoor is here! Now showdown time! 😃 Continue super soon! Me waiting! 😳

Love you heaps my Mahi baby! 🤗 ❤️


Bye bye..



xoxo
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Last Teaser:


Haaye mera dil..
Chura ke le gayi..
Churane waali..
Meri Mahima...


🤣 🤣 🤣

Sorry didn't rhyme.. 😆

Totally brilliant teaser!


Zoya will be by his side always and so will Asad. ❤️ that's true love! ❤️


Waiting for Asar to punch Matthew! 😡
He will get a *black eye* like this >


Waiting for the update Mahi! 😳

Love you loads ❤️


Aaja meri scooty mein baitth ja..

😆

Yours forever,

Mina di
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Phew! Finally done with posting all the previous comments! 😉

*FLYING KISS*


Love you heaps baby.. Going to Read Chapter 9... 😳



xoxo
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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