#3|| AsYa SS: With All My Life (Chp 9 + Epilogue)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CONGO FOR NEW THREAD BABY! 🥳

I know this is the last thread for this story!

I will really miss this story! 😒

I know I'm Special! 😉 I love you more! ❤️

~x~



Big hug to you my baby! 🤗 Lot more waiting for you! 😉

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello... I'm here with my comments for Chapter 9:

Brilliant Chapter Mahi! 👏

Everyone helping Zoya to sneak into the dungeons! OMG! Rashid suggested to sentence Asad to death? 😲 Not Ghafoor? 😲 W*F! 😡

I guess Matthew is genuinely sorry for his doing!

BUT - I STILL HATE HIM! 😡 @##$$%&^%~*&^^&%$@#! 😡


This is from ME to Matthew! 😡

Okay.. Going back to chapter...

Loved the AsYa Scene! *teary eyed*
Awww.. Asad Rashid Scene! 😭 Why is Rashid being like this?

Yay! Lupin to the rescue! 😳 And Zoya managed to convince Ghafoor to let her speak at the execution ground! 😃

Wooohooo! WAY TO GO ZOYA! 🤗 Brilliantly spoken! 👍🏼

Rashid "Your majesty, I shall take Asad away from this kingdom itself."

Ghafoor "I request you not to take my future son-in-law away that is if you accept Zoya as your daughter-in-law."


Did I read it right? 😲 OMG! Yay! 🥳

Zoya "I promised you that I won't forget my duty towards the kingdom and its people. I brought justice to you and the other people as well. I just followed the rules that were written for the people of this kingdom."

Awww.. She is so much in love still she is a true queen!


to...



Yay! 🥳

As soon as Rashid walks out, Asad places his lips in Zoya's.

Asad "I missed doing this."

Zoya "I can't believe it's our wedding in 10 days."

Asad "So can't I. I never thought that this day would ever come."

Zoya "You didn't want to marry me?"

Asad "At times, I feel that you have become really wise and strong from the day I met you. But at times you act in the same stupid and clumsy way. Of course I wanted to marry you silly but didn't think that this could ever happen."

Zoya "I haven't slipped in a long time."

Zoya moves forward to hit Asad playfully but instead slips falling on the bed along with Asad. They both look at each other and start laughing.


Awesomeness, Flawlessness, Brilliance and Beyond Perfection! 👏

BRILLIANT UPDATE! ❤️ LOVED IT TO BITS!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

P.S.: No KSG KISS GIF! 😛 🤣
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Consolidating ALL my comments here!

So, In the Next 2 pages are all the comments I have made by far on your 'With All My Life' chapters on Thread #1 and 2! 😉

*ENJOY READING*

🤗

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Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For the New Story:

Wooohooo!!!! 🥳


Yayy mee first!!!! I'm so loving the storyline... ❤️

The name of the FF is WOW!

And I will support you "With All My Life!" 🤗 ❤️

A *BIG HUG* for you my Baby Sis! 🤗



P.S.: Scroll Down for comments on the Prologue! 😃
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Prologue & CS:




Okay!!!! Enough Dancing!!! Coming to the Prologue... 😆

~~~

Zoya in trouble... In the beginning itself?

Yayyy... Asad and Najma rescued her!

Hawww.. Pehli mulaaqaat par hi *SLAP* And Asad hugged her... Awww... He seems alot more understanding and soft natured than that in the show!


OMG!!! Bechari Zoya ko to full shock mil raha hai! Poor girl getting to know too much in a day! 😆 Poor soul! 😳

Awww... She is already a bit scared of Asad...

Koi nahi... Now that he is your BODYGUARD! He will take good care of you! ☺️

Awesome CS! 👍🏼

Best Lines:

Zoya "I guess I can trust him then."

Asad "I will protect you with all my life."


I'm sooo loving this Mahi!!!! ❤️

Continue soon!!! 😳

Pretty please.. 😳 *batting my eyelashes*

Love you loads my baby girl! 🤗 You're the BEST!

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1:


I'm totally in love with this story!

The Best dialogues:

Ayaan "Asad is a top bodyguard. He would lay his life down to protect you."

Zoya "His Life?"

Ayaan "That's just a part of job description."


Zoya (But scratch the surface and he's just arrogant. It is a handsome surface though...)

Asad "Don't stare at me."

Zoya "Sorry..."


Asad "You don't ever need to be scared while I am your bodyguard."

Zoya "Thanks!"


Asad "Take my arm."

Zoya "Why?"

Asad "Because I don't want my career blemished because of your clumsiness."

Zoya puts her hand in Asad's arm as she had no way out of this argument.


Asad "It may be an attacker dressed as a delivery guy."

Zoya "I hadn't thought of that..."

Zoya (He's squeezing me so tight. I think he's going to crush me!)

Asad "I think he's gone."

Asad let go of Zoya who immediately started coughing.

Asad "Don't be a baby! I didn't squeeze you that hard!"

Zoya "It did hurt."

Asad "I'll be careful the next time."

Zoya (Next time? Is there going to be a next time too?)


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I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! I wanna know what happens next? 😳

Love the whole update! ❤️

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

*hi five*

And now... listening to "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Note ~ Character Change:


Okayyy!!!! Nikhat it is... 😃 Not that i hate Najma... 🤔

But I kinda have started diliking her ever since this Imran fiasco!

And about Point #2... It's nice to read Zoya's POV coz this story is about Zoya! 😳 And Asad's POV can be included later on as and when you plan to... 😊 Coz you know I will wait!

Love you loads baby!

- Mina di
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Chapter 2:

This was a BRILLIANT piece of work! ❤️



This was sheer Flawlessness.. Mathew.. Ahaan.. Asad is jealous of Mathew! 😆 Poor thing! And about the girls and the fan mails.. HAHAHA!!! 🤣 No issues Asad.. It's normal! 😆 😉

NOW... They are room mates! And I'm loving it! 😉 ❤️

Sleeping on the same bed, sharing work throughout the day and OMG.. Asad hugged Zoya in his sleep! 😆 Oh I can so very well imagine Zoya's reaction! 😆

I totally remembered this scene of DMG.. 🤣



I'm totally in love with this story!

Asad is opening up to Zoya.. I'm sure they would be friends soon! 😳 And the CLIMAX was the BEST! 👏

Later that night both Asad and Zoya settled on the bed after dinner.

Asad "The food was yummy."

Zoya "Here you go."

Zoya hands Asad a handkerchief.

Asad "I love it. You did my name on it. This is very sweet of you."

Zoya (He actually appreciated me. But why do I feel so happy to hear it?)

Zoya (Maybe because it is unexpected from him to be so...)

Asad "Good night, Zoya."

Zoya "Good night!"

Zoya (so... not weird... that suits the situation best.)

Asad "I'll try maintaining a distance."

Zoya (Try... What does he mean?)

Asad "You are so huggable you see."

Zoya (Wow! Now I am like a teddy bear to him. I guess I should just sleep plus he seems not the kind who do something wrong. I trust him on that.)


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CLIFF HANGER???? 😡 Nahiii!!!!


I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! I wanna know what happens next? 😳

Love the whole update! ❤️

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️



Continue soon! 😳

*hi five*

And now... listening to "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3:



This was a BRILLIANT piece of work! ❤️

He smelt something in the kitchen and he rushed there to see Zoya humming and cooking. He immediately went and hugged her.

Zoya (Not again... looks like he can't live without hugging me...)

Zoya "Hey! What do you think you are doing?"

Asad moved back after hearing this.

Asad "What do you think you are doing?"

Zoya (He hugs me and asks me what I am doing.)

Zoya "Your sense of humour is incredible."

Asad "Don't change the topic. Why did you get off the bed before me telling you too?"

Zoya "I am not your slave. I didn't want to miss college because of you."

Asad "College isn't until 9:00 and it's just 6:30 now."

Zoya "Yes... but I travel by bus which picks up from the market sharp at 7:30."

Asad "But you could have woken me up too."

Zoya "Didn't have the heart too! You looked really adorable while you were asleep."

Zoya (Omg! He's blushing!)

Asad "What do you mean by looked'? Am I not adorable now?"

Zoya (Why is he moving so close to me? And why do I see a dreamy look on his face)

Zoya (And why the heck is my heart beating so fast?)


This was sheer Flawlessness.. Asad it full on being a perfect romantic hero here! Ahaan.. Zoya hold onto your heart.. It might get stolen soon! 😉

Zoya "Umm... This is Asad... He's my friend and he just transferred here."

Asad "We're not friends. I'm her boyfriend."

Zoya "What?"

Asad "Don't shout at me... Sweetie"

Zoya (Sweetie?)

Zoya "Hey! Why is your arm over my shoulder?"

Zoya (He's bending to whisper in my ear.)

Asad "Just play along."

Nuzzhat "What are you guys whispering about?"'

Asad "My poor Zoya gets easily embarrassed."

Zoya (I'm not embarrassed! I'm mad!)


BOYFRIEND!!! AHAAN!



I'm really loving this twist! ❤️ They have to pretend to be in a relationship! 😳 And I'm sure they will fall for each other soon! 😉




Zoya "After all I am not sexy to hang out with a handsome guy like you."

Asad "But you definitely are beautiful."

Zoya (Why is my heart fluttering on hearing this?)

Asad "Besides it's a good cover for me being with you all the time."

Zoya "I didn't think of that."

Asad "That's what makes me a professional."

Zoya (He could hug me and no one would think it was weird.)

Zoya (I don't think I'll get used to it though! My heart jumps every time he does it.)

Asad "To make it worse, you have to act like my girlfriend now."

Zoya "How do I do that?"

Asad "You haven't dated much, have you?"

Zoya "Not at all..."

Asad "Shall we practice being boyfriend and girlfriend now?"

Zoya "Practise? Oh!"

Zoya (Why is his face so close to mine?)

Zoya (His arm on my shoulder?)

Asad "You blush so easily."

Zoya "You surprised me!"


Hahahaha... 🤣 Asad is chance marofy-ing! 😉

The fight was awesome! 👏 And Asad comforting Zoya! Awww.. I'm loving the progress in their relationship! ❤️

Asad "It's ok to cry sometimes."

Zoya (Usually he'd be telling me not to be silly.)

Zoya "I don't feel that upset."

Asad "You really are a brave girl."

Zoya "What are you?"

Zoya (Asad is now stroking my hair!)

Zoya "You'll get my hair messed up..."

Asad "You really still care about that right now?"

Zoya "Asad!"

Asad "Enough talk for tonight. It's time for bed!"

Asad "Plus I really want to hug and comfort you. You feel nice to hug."

Zoya "What?"

Asad "Look in the mirror, you've gone bright red!"

Zoya "That's your fault! Don't make fun of me!"

Asad "You're cute."

Zoya (Asad... Why are you being so nice?)

Zoya (I don't think my heart can take it.)

Zoya "Oh! You mean just like a teddy bear like you called me yesterday."

Asad "Better than a real girl because you never kick me."

Zoya (But I am a real girl with real girl feelings...)


Asad is busy flirting! 😉 And OMG!!! the Morning After??? ☺️

Zoya "Is it morning already?"

Zoya (I would have liked to sleep a little longer...)

Zoya "It's so warm and cozy in bed... Wait!"

Zoya (Asad is hugging me again!)

Zoya "Asad..."

Zoya (He looks so peaceful. But he shouldn't be hugging me! He says we are class apart.)

Asad opens his eyes but is still in a half asleep state. He moves closer to Zoya who turns her head to face Asad.

Asad "Ummm..."

Zoya "Stop moving! Wait... Oh!"

Zoya (Asad is so close! Close enough to kiss!)

Zoya pulls back suddenly and both of them turn red.




Could I have that KISS please? 😳

Okay.. Night Club.. And the meeting with the lady! 😆 I'm sure Zoya already trusts Asad. the lady need not give explanations! 😳

OMG!! The fight again!!! Thanks god nothing happened to either of them! 😊

Zoya "Asad"

Asad "You're crying! Why?"

Zoya "I thought you would get hurt. I'm just so relieved!"

Asad "Just calm down!"

Zoya (Asad is stroking my cheek.)

Asad "I'm okay. You can see that, right?"

Zoya "You should be more careful."

Asad "You cry when I'm in danger but not when you're in one."

Zoya "I hate seeing people being in trouble because of me."

Asad "You put other's first always. Just like a true princess."


Totally loved this ^^ convo between Asad and Zoya! 😳

I'm totally in love with this story!


Now I have to wait to read further!!!

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! I wanna know what happens next? 😳

Love the whole update! ❤️

Continue soon! 😳





Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️




*hi five*

And now... listening to "Asmaani Rang Ho!" [For a change] 😉

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