FF Breaking The Waves - Thread 4 - Chapter Nineteen To Twenty Four

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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i promised i would read them on weekend... buh weekend was nothing less than a havoc... so just @ the end of mae weekend i tried to pull out mae time... n now am giving a reading to upates.. n commenting side by side...

Chapter 19:

i so wanted to read after shocks of the accident😆😆😆
like i said.. zoyaa gonna give her tough time,, n yet she did...
all love would go into trash in the name of sympathy...

just loved the update...

this line was like a punch fah em...

'You stole my first kiss and you were guilty after that but now after my accident when I was about to die you realized that you are not guilty anymore. Are you even sure about what you want in your life ?'

epic!!

n that dialogue,, made me ROFL...

'That's true. I don't love you. It was just attraction, maybe.' She repeated his words.

'You do !

'I don't !' She said with same confidence.

'You do !'

'But you don't.'

'I do.'

'Then I don't.'

And thanx God the Guts' Man is Back.. he would marry her without asking her... he's just informing... Yeyy!

and so zoya's dream come true.. Asad bragging her fah marriage n she saying No...
n he has challenged her...

SHe cannot stop herself from confessing again for even a month...

n ghafi is late... he's no more loved by zoe.. she does.. buh his ignorance... 😲😲 buh still he's doing a wonderful job... making her married,,, n that too ASad...

ths is gonna be amazing...

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Chapter 20:

So she said she's IN.. she must have gotten something in her mind... like irritating Asad to the death...

hhaaahaaa

he firstly left so that he woudn't have to face her,,, he let her alone with ghafi n dillu so that they can ask her fah wedding,,,n shes left with no option buh to marry her...

n then came back late in night so that all the storms are on silent now... hes sucha wise guy...😆😆

n he knows how to tame his lioness... K...No Prob... don't tell me what happened.. i would ask mom in the morning... n then,,, If you woukd say No... then it wouldn't be shockin it would be kinda enchanting...as you gave me a chance to think over again...😆😆 he's so cute

n @ the end of dialogue she reminded herself that she was in a total social boycott to Asad...😆

now he has to handle this clumsy cute grl fah his whole life...

nice update... n i gave a 100th like on yo update... congretx,,, n on the previous 1 i gave 101th like...

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Chapter 21:

Balcony: its like heaven in the middle of world... like its the place where ASYA has passed through their all kinds of relationships... firstly a lil awkwardness in very beginning.. then some comfortance...then a lil opening up... then cool cool friendship...some closeness...they couldn't figure out,,..n then showing repentance over kiss...they have traveled through alot...n now last bachelor night... afta that they would be married...

Asad: he is really a good friend.. hows it possible that zoe needs something n he would refrain from helping her...buh look fah 1 minute he cannot imagine her from getting married to sm1 else..

just punish him
'You are right but punishing him is like punishing myself.'

how much both lov each other... thas cool!!

and they got married...zoya is stern in giving him a tough time... n he knows her better...he knew she woud be slept..
N why i should sleep on couch?? 😆😆😆 n shes punishing both...he suggested fah himself... n she is giving to him...

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Chapter 22:

m loving the way he pushed her to say good morning...she feels to be dreaming...

Oh... n how wonderful s the feeling that their relationship twisted n twirled briskly... friends...best friends... feelings from side 1...feelings from side 2...a final encounter... confession from side 1...concealment from side 2...Climax...side 2 thinking to confess now...side 1 is now trying her fate on being dark horse...side 2 confessed, took her away... n side 1 thinks shes still dreamin...

Tom n jerry show is ON... n dillu is the new referee in house.. she waas from beginning buh now these encounters gonna increase...

bringing on the fight... taking it to apex... n then reverting back... starting again with the scratch.. tehy were so cute in that Osama fight...

hes trying his all to make her admit...

n shes trying to resist him...buh i wonder how long she can...as a part of hers don't want to...

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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so finally now mae pace matches with yo ff

commenting on most recent chapter...

Chapter 23

am dancing with joy...

2 kisses in an update... loved them...

n Rashid is again so here is no good news... hes again here to spoil hs life... thanxGod zoya already stepped back... if she had done this after rashids comeback.. then it could have been entitled to the sympathy n their friendship...

n all the special confession thing has gotten into a dang... Tension!!!

update soon...n please don't endup it that soon... itsa request,, like your previous ff also got end after wedding... so i need a prolong post-wedding era..please

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Posted: 11 years ago

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So now we r finally movin towards the confession from Zoe. her childlike demands & pouts melt my heart. Asad really loves her a lot & can do anything for her. Aww there moment got disturbed twice.

I hope Rashid isn't here to spoil the day for him.

Common Zoe, calm him down & don't let him get back in his angry young mode,

Love..