FF Turnaround-2. CH 30 Updated PG125 (14th Dec) COMPLETED* - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago



Thank u so very much😃


Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wow a superb update...fabulous...amazing...mindblowing...

luv the way hw possesive is he for her...
its beautifully written...one of my favourite ff...totally addicted to tis ff...
he told everything to his mother n she is so happy asad n zoya are married...
asya are too cute n adroable...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...


Thank u thank u thank thank u...so so so so very much😃 for such n awesome comment...m glad u enjoyed the updates...n my story n my writing..n the characters n their ways...m very very happy readin so...😃thank u


Originally posted by: rajnid68

Awesomeness..

Asad and ammi happy..
Thanks for the pm


Thank u so very much😃


Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Love this Asad and Zoya of yours!!! Great story, my dear! Cheeky Asad, blushy Zoya, who would have guessed? Am looking forward for more updates!!

FaRz


Thank u so very much😃..loved readin ur comment..n m happy to read that u like my characters traits..n their ways...n my story...thank u



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Originally posted by: laks_vish

Awesome updates And just loooved the way Asad brought lioness Zoya back...you did an amazing job dear...



Thank u so very much😃


Originally posted by: Ramlath

pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...update soon...

pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...update soon...
pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...update soon...
pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...pls...update soon...



Will so soon😃

Originally posted by: kals82

wow...two updates in a row for us... and beautifull... i loved the way asad pulled zoya back to herself... waiting for something hot to happen next



Thank u so very much😃..m glad u liked the 2 updates...n hot is on its way😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hi Aashna,

I had a crazy weekend. Been busy and although I had internet on my phone so I did read the update, I wanted to get home and post this comment.
So if you don't already know, Asad is my love. Just like some favor Zoya or Aayaan, It has been always Asad for me. I was a known spammer of forum - 32 discussion pages where I spammed with Asad's pics, where I wrote raunchy one shots, where I claimed Asad to be mine and did explicit things to him.
I also launched a petition where he should just dump Zoya for me instead.
If ever KSG read those one shots, he could have got a Virtual restraining order on me.
Well coming to your update.
This update for me was ASAD.
Asad was majestic, loyal, possessive and perfect.
Right from being possessive in Riley's presence to letting Zoya know, he is her husband and will be sharing her bed.
I loved Chapter 23 more than Chapter 22.
Loved how he got everything organized before the move, wish my husband did that sometimes.
Loved how he gave her the time to ease up. Loved how he undressed her, well Almost and the best was the rings.
Awesome and so dreamy romantic...
Fantastic update. Love your writing. Waiting for the next make out session or is there a twist. Anything girl, it is just cherry on the top.😉
Cheers👏
Juliet



Hello hello..Miss Juliet...u busy bee..😆


N boy...u n ur love for this dude...😲 wat can I say..watever floats ur boat..my friend...I bet it would have been an interesting situation..would have loved to read those discussions...honestly..

n as for the updates...yup it was Asad in all his glory...emoting all of his emotions..n yup..I agree with ur too..23 was better than 22..thats was the reason y I posted 2 updates..cos I wasn't convinced with Ch22..

n M gald u liked the Asadness..in the updates...from his OCD...to his..LOVE LOVE LOVE...😉

n hey thanks for the compliment..that u like my writing..😳

as for the next update..u already know by now...😆

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

This is for the second update. Thank you!



Thank u 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

FInally i managed to comment here! Ive been so busy these 2 days and checking out more than 200 unread pms is a serious pain in the ass 😵


You are so amazing you gave us 2 updates? saath saath :O 🤗

Ok first of all thank you so much for mentioning me! I'm glad my spams could make you laugh! 😆

Haha do i smell something burning? Yes yes yes I do! Jealous asad is so cute i could very well imagine him standing in the background giving murderous glares to Riley


and when riley hugged her I'm sure asad was thinking something like this maybe -

You know what? When Lana talked about dance numbers that had my brain working over time! So do you know what I'm hinting at?

Please pretty please mommy? *puppy dog face*

I absolutely loved the way Asad brought back the old zoya! And haha i cant believe the number of clothes she was wearing. bechara nikalte nikalte thak gaya 🤣

And you always do this leave me high and dry like that, I mean leave zoya high and dry like that! *sadie pout*

Now listen very carefully, it's zoya's birthday and whats better than some birthday sex? *sings jeremiah's birthday sex in the background* (Don't think I'm joking I'm being serious😆)

Now I'll go and take this thread to page 70 😎




Kya baat hai,,,kya comment tha boss..tum to chaa gaye...maze aa gaye read karke...as for ur request...n ur puppy face..I tried to give u a dance part...but cant promise a full on bollywood dhamaaal..will try but no promises..

Ab u n ur..."HIGH N DRY"😆..the gratification is on tis way so thoda aur sabr karlo..Sadie ji...ur wishes will be fulfilled soon😉






OOOhhh😛



Originally posted by: --starstruck--

I got a pocket, got a pocketful of sunshine
I got a love and I know that it's all mine


Love it...did u just watch Easy A or wat???😆


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Hey are you planning of any banner for this FF??



Umm never thought bout it...y??😲


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

In your PM you told me you have a collection of classics but you've never read them! Haaye that's the same situation with me 🤣


Yieee...same pinch...😆🤣..slacker buddies...😆



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Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Do you think its about time i change my signature? 😆



Umm I'd say so...ur a creative gal..u can come up with something intersting I bet😉


So wats keepin u away??? lets get the party started...suckers...😆


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Zoya-'Is the camera still on??'. Yes came the reply. 'Hey just for fun can I try the script??? I just wanna give it a shot...seems like fun', she looked at them,her eyes dancing with excitement.

God bless her enthusiasm



O ya...wat would be the case otherwise..😲...no story..😆



YUP YUP YUP..lage raho..Sadie..behan😆

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

row row row your boat gently down a stream,

merrily merrily merrily merrily life is but a dream 🤣

sorry i watched insidious and this rhyme is stuck in my head



LOL...u n ur row row row ur boat...at least u didnt say gently downt he waterfall😉



Yes Listen to Sadie..😛




HMMM😲...good 1😉


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

hahha ^^ sorry for that i just love The simpsons 😆


I thought so😉

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

I made this how is it --


Me likes...NICE..very...dreamy....nice layering..I must say..😊



OYE HOye...ab to karni hi padegi..update..idli ki kasam jo de di hai..😛



OH YA..BABAAY..😉


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Ankie spammed my SS by singing Agar tum kaho on it! I'll sing songs too 🤣


Neat idea...do it up gal...👏😃

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

I don't wanna lose you now, I'm looking right at the other half of me


😲


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

The vacancy that set in my heart, is a space that now you hold


NICE...👏



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😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
LISTENING TO
Westlife : Written in the stars!
Beautiful!!!! Serene!!!!
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RES.. for responses..

Originally posted by: Ramlath

PLEASE PLEASE update soon dear...😭


Coming up 😃


Originally posted by: vinita459

Oh my god, I read the update and thought of replying after sometimes, and then i totally forgot about it. I just saw your note and remembered. I am so sorry for replying so late, will not happen again. 😒

The update was really good and you gave us double dhamaka, which was a good surprise.

I am really happy to see AsYa together and happy. It was so nice to see them finally move in together. They exchanged ring again. Why Zoya was uncomfortable with her intimacy with Asad? When are they going to make their relationship public?

Really looking forward to the next update, and once again sorry for replying so late.

Love,

Vinita


Hey there all gud...no biggie..hota hai..😉...m just happy to know that u read it ..n liked it n left ur precious comment by the end of it...addign on to my happy...that just does it all...n as for Zoya uncomfortable with Asad..I guess...coz its just..umm...I guess..she just needs to reaquiant herself..n stop herself from overthiking..time has just made her a lil insecure...😕..n umm making hteir relationship public..that'll be soon too...

Thank u so very much for ur lovely comment..n i wish to read more..of ur comments..😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
Warned you I could Spam!!!!
SPAM! SPAM! SPAM!
UPDATE
UPDATE
UPDATE
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Posted: 11 years ago
OK leaving in peace for sometime. Will be back to read your update.
Love
Juliet.

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