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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hellooo,

You know what, you've made me fall in love with this song. I had never heard it before but now that I did, I'm in love with it.
You know I was really lost reading the introduction. I know how it feels when you re-visit the place that has been a witness to some of the most important moments of your life. & here in AsYa's situation, this house was a sole witness of their blossoming love & relationship. I was touched by Asad's gesture of getting the house fixed & ready to live in.
I know anyone would fall in love with the person who took so much care as in getting all the required things & getting them arranged as earlier with no changes. Asad deserves lots of hugs & kisses for this. Their thank you was heart touching. Both had their reasons for it & it was so good to see them finally stepping in their new old home, ready to step into the future together, once again.
Hmm.. so Zoe facing the shy phase now after being so close to him earlier. but I sort of understand but may be I'm wrong. I think earlier she was so bold, confident about her appearance around him as it all was falling in place. she had fallen in love with him, loved his shower of affection on her & enjoyed being close to him but gap of years has just made her insecure. she loves him the same or maybe even more than that, she wants to be near him as well but her inner conflict is causing trouble. she just needs a push to be back to herself & that's exactly what Asad did. I must say he really has been a true gentleman & a loving husband towards her, otherwise no one would care so much about the feelings of the other.
It is extremely sweet of Asad to take her out for her pre b'day celebrations. See now she wants to eat him up. Oh it must have been a heavenly feeling, just standing, staring out at the sea with your love & the warmth of your love.
Now this last part just touched my heart. This is personal favorite. Despite facing all the bad phases in life, the will to rectify the wrong & claim her again, never died from his heart. I seriously was in tears seeing the amount of love Asad holds for Zoe. who would carry the wedding rings around when there was not a slight chance of reconciliation? but he did, his heart made him do so & destiny has really been kind enough to grant him the perfect moment to slip it back into the fingers of the owner of the ring.
Just tooo good. Yaar I seriously can't tell you how happy I was after I read these parts, that too two together. Double Dhamaal plus they were happy ones, all the more good.
Okay I know I'll be taking a lot of your time once you settle to read these. So yeah, see you on page 70, hope that's soon. i'm gonna start spamming the page now. I didn't earlier cox my own spots were res.
Lots of love..



I just love this song..n its words...Love it..n m glad u liked it too...makes me happy...

now for the home...what should I say..it was such a joy to see them in their house...the old memories..inviting the present..giving them so much back...n how they accepted it all...Asad..was thanking her for the house..by bringing it back to its old state...n Zoya gave him the house back...the gr8st gift...for him...so they both brought somethin back for each other...

Zoya's shy phase was new..n a fun thing to explore..for a girl so bold..this was interesting..but not unlikely...cos the situation was new..event htough everything else was the same...the time apart...n now starting again..was so new..but they fill in for each other all the time...instinctively..n so Asad just pulled her out of her doubts...without even trying..making her see herself..n accept herself...n become herself...it was a sweet moment...they fill in for each other..😃

n lastly...the whole pre-b'day part...I guess...it just shows how strong n real their love is..that it was not dependent on the tangible gifts...n the value for the meaning behind the gift was what mattered most...Asad had kept a part of her with him..through those rings..a hope..that someday..they would be togehter again...n here they were..his silent prayer answered...so it was such a sweet moment..


n once again..thank u for ur fabulous comments..sorry I was late..but truly..I just love readin ur comments..I cant say enouch of that..n m so so happy that u enjoyed both the updates..n ya..they were happy ones...n gal..do wat u can...spamming is more than welcome...I'll cya soon with my response to ur next comments...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u so very much😃


Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes

Loved it...great updates👏



Thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome loved it

thanx for pm
do pm me for next part


Thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: Mayeesha2217

OMG this was sooo cute..Zoya being all shy and Asad getting her out of it that way😳😳And the re-exchange of wedding bands..that was simply amazing😊Superb updates hun👏please please please update soon and PM me😊


Thank u so very much😃...n m glad u found some parts frm the update that u really liked...m a happy happy gal😊




Originally posted by: jawria123

OMG double updates 😲 and both are just amazing
Asya live together and their kiss 😳
Asad take zoya for dinner and gave gift. Wow.
Awesome updates. Loved them
Continue soon


Aww..such a sweet comment...m glad u enjoyed readin the update...Thank u so very much😃


Originally posted by: jasminerose

Both the parts were amazing.

It was fun to read the conversation between Asya and their neighbours.
Aww Zoya was all shy after so many years but covering herself with so many layers of clothing is so funny. Asad always finds a way to trick her lioness.
Enjoyed reading it.



m glad u enjoyed the neighbour conversation...I was kinda iffy with that..but I guess it was gud..Thank u so very much😃..n m glad it was a good read 4u




Originally posted by: rjhr

woho... dbl treat... yippee...

loved it...
w8ng more eagerly 4 nxt...


Thank u so very much😃m glad u enjoyed it..


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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan

wow amazing update 👍🏼

thanks for the PM :)


Thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: akaswan

Thank you very much for these amazing double udapte 🤗they are just awesome continue soon please 😃


Thank u so very much😃m glad u liked it..😊


Originally posted by: nnn

i soo loved this !!👍🏼

and i ssoo enjoyed reading both updates, especially the bonus one

the next update is going to be the best one😳😳😳im damn surre☺️

thanks for the pm

continue soon please


Thank u so very much😃..I knw I felt that ch 23 was better than 22 also..but still m glad u read them both n enjoyed it...



Originally posted by: ap3h7u

AMAZING...I don't have words to describe how beautifully u've written🤗...n u're too good with romance😳😳...I could feel the intensity of each of their emotions...though my exams are knocking at the door,I'm gonna spam...whatever little I can manage to😊😊...update soon😃...

P.S.-loved both the updates but my FAV is the bonus one😳😳


Aww...thats so sweet of u...takin the time out to read my updates..makes me so so so very happy..n hey thanks for ur compliment..I got a long way to go...but ur words encourage me...n hey chill..no worries..bout spamming...m just glad u enjoyed the updates..Thank u so very much😃


Originally posted by: aish-au

love u so much for the double update.
i was sad that 1st part ended, but wen scrolled down OMG u can't believe happy i was.
this was sweet, hot at same time
update soon


Thank u thank u ...m glad the bonus was worth ur time...n m glad it made u happy..Thank u so very much😃



Originally posted by: sonia555

Nice update plz continue soon 😊


Thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Excellent updates ... Loved the way asad made zoya loosen up around him again. Brilliantly written.


Thanks for the pm n please update soon n pm me for the next part too.

Thank u so very much😃..m glad u enjoyed the updates...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Honey what's with Westlife. I Loved Back Street Boys.
But Uptown Girl was also among my favorites.
How many more pages to you need to update.
UPDATE SOOON!
UPDATE NOW!
ORELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

read chp 21,22 and 23 in a row

they were brilliant

I love the bond that AsYa share


Thank u so very much😃 m glad u liked it...n thank u for commenting..😃



Originally posted by: aman93

loved both the chptrs...


Thank u so very much😃



Thank u so very much😃


Originally posted by: Ramlath

Loved it...great updates👏 tnks fr pm...😃


Thank u so very much😃...m glad u liked it..😊


Originally posted by: mishtypiya

Read all d parts.awesome
beautifully written
continue soon n pm me



Thank u thank u thank ...so so ...so very much😃


Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

awesome aw esome awesome
both parts r just superb 🤗
loved asya ❤️
thanks 4 pm 😊



Thank u so very much😃




Thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: princess101

OMG TWO UPDATES I LOVED BOTH OF THEM SOOO MUCH ESPECIALLY THE SECOND ONE BECAUSE OF ASYA IN THE HOUSE THANX FOR THE PM AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON😃



Heya...Thank u so very much😃..for ur lovely comment...m glad u enjoyed the 2 updates...esp the 2nd one..



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Honey what's with Westlife. I Loved Back Street Boys.

But Uptown Girl was also among my favorites.
How many more pages to you need to update.
UPDATE SOOON!
UPDATE NOW!
OR
ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Updating...as soon as I block the response posts...I hav ethis strange compulsion to respon to comments before posting the update..so ya..in the next 15 minutes..so wait up...
n as for westlife..I cant help it...I didnt mind backstreet boys..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

i always like possessive AAK... he look cute 😳😳


Originally posted by: Linsie

Awww 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️...







Originally posted by: Linsie

My first step in my new life

Welcomes me home, my soul rejoices

My friends are here, my love is here

This is the place I hold so dear.

You took my hand and brought me back

Back to those the days I could never forget

It was the best gift you gave to me

Thank you so very much, for making me this happy!! 👏 👏





Originally posted by: Linsie

Zoya is in shock.. went riley admit... that he have crush on zoya...

and lana laughing away...


Originally posted by: Linsie

Dilsahd is very happy... they got second chance... to make things right...
finally they found each other...👏


Originally posted by: Linsie

Meet their old noisy but good neighbor .. 😆

asad find any opportunity to hold zoya..😳

Lana is happy to see them.. and embarrassed little ... 😳

asad clearly can remember the dates... and how long they been together😃




HEY GAL ONCE AGAIN..OMG...I WANNA SAY THANK U SO MANY TIMES...TO U..COS UR AWESOME...UR COMMENTS..UR SUPPORT..EVERYTHING..JSUT MAKES MY DAY...A VERY HAPPY DAY...I MEAN I HAVE SO MANY OF UR COMMENTS..I CANT GET THROUGH ALL OF THEM...BUT I DO READ THEM ALL..N I LOVE IT...THANK U ONCE AGAIN...U ROCK👏

N HEY M GLAD U ENJOYED THE 2 UPDATES..N ASAD N EVERYTHIGN ELSE😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Uptown girl
She's my uptown girl
You know I'm in love
With an uptown girl
My uptown girl
Don't you know I'm in love
With an uptown girl
She's my uptown girl
Don't you know I'm in love
With an uptown girl
She's uptown girl
My uptown girl
Don't you know I'm in love
With an uptown girl
She's an uptown girl
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: REDnBLACK

Superb luvd dyd part plus da bonus


Thank u so very much😃


Originally posted by: lover1998

OMG THAT WAS SO CUTEEE. I loved it when they put their rings back on. and woww Asad is such a trickster. ROFL I died when i read the Riley part. Thanks for telling us more about their life before the split. Great update.


Thank u so very much😃..M GLAD ..u enjoyed the ring part...it was a special moment wasnt it..n Asad..he is sneaky I tell ya...n ya Rileys part was funny..😆...gal thank u for ur awesome comment..i loved readin it..😃

Originally posted by: Applef

wow!!


2 back to back updates...🥳

love both...

happy to see asya together like once they were...

asad try to get back his old zoya..😳

update soon..



Thank u so very much😃..m glad u enjoyed the 2 update surprise...n the story..n their togethernes...thank u 😊



Thank u so very much😃

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Awesome Updates
Loved it
Thanx for pm
Do pm me for next part



Thank u so very much😃



Originally posted by: anopama

omg awesome aweome updates
loved it I really cant think of words to say
how I feel I mean the rings with him for 5 yrs
and the way he break through her barrier
he love his lioness more than his coy bride
too funny would love to see him walking around
in boxers...haha
continue soon



Thank u thank u thank thank u..so so so.. so very much😃..loved readin ur comment...n m glad u liked it...esp Asad's ways...he was a sweetheart in these updates...😊


Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Double Dhamaka for us... Thank u Thank u Thank u soo much... Finaly the bold Zoya is bck n loved d jealous husband in Asad n his tricks to bring bck Zoya... So Zoya's Birthday is gonna b a blast this time with Asad being around... N Asad carrying the rings was beautiful...
Thank u again for this lovely update... N update nxt parts soon...


LOVE
~JAZ~


Thank u so very much😃 loved ur comments...n m glad u enjoyed so many parts of the double updates..the bold Zoya is back...the jealous ASad...their lovey parts n all..thank u 😊


Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

First of all , a big thank you for the double update.. 🤗

I loved to see that Asad had preserved their rings and gave it to her now.. 😊 ...
Good to see the way Asad is making Zoya at ease as they were before..

Not sure how old are you .. but after reading your recent OS and now how you are portraying Asad and Zoya to catch up with their old times, you seem to be a thinker and the message you try to convey definately reaches out to us.. and a big thanks to us for making us look at things in a different angel as well...

God bless you and Wish you all the happiness and joy !! Take Care !!

Waiting for your next update.. 😊


Thank u so very much😃for ur lovely comment...m glad u liked the 2 updates...Asad and Zoya..and their journey back to each other..

As for my age...m in my mid 20's...n m so flattered at ur compliment...I cant tell ya...thank u very much..for ur lovely words..made me happy...umm n ya I like to think bout the reasons behind the charactes actions..I just want them to be believable..n relatable..n m glad it comes across that way..n my words make sense...n thank u for appreciating my efforts...I try to bring bout a new perspective...n m happy to see its apprecaited..

Thank u once again..😃

x

Thank u so very much😃



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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Chap 22 : I loved how they enjoyed the very first moment in their house...their neighbour recognised them...so sweet!!!! Poor asad...one more guy whom he want to beat black n blue for eyeing his zoya...but i loved his possessiveness...God save Riley!!!! I hope the party will be fun... N asad sorted out with the spot too...so humble...i liked it!!!



Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Chap 23: awww...how good asad made the house as it was before...all set n cleaned!!!! Zoya's shyness was fun to read...so many clothes,,,,,😆😉 but asad is one step ahead for sure...heheheee...😳 He made her do what he wanted!!! Good to see bold zoya back... N now the last few sentences were so touchy...full of love...they made each other wear the wedding ring again...awww...how sweet😃




Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Both the updates were fabulous...story growing up in a perfect way...all the angst has been replaced with joy n romance!!!! Want to read more asap...continue soon


Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

See i occupied 4 posts...hahahaaa ...my contribution towards making u update soon...😉




GAL i Just want to thank u for all u r wonderful comments...I just get so so so happy reading it..I cant tell ya...makes me truly happy to read that there were so many parts of the updates that u enjoyed..the array of emotions that Asad and Zoya go through..their journey..their love..everything...m just glad to bring to u soemthin that is worth ur time...m glad u like their banter..n their crazy ways..n everything else...All I can say is Thank u so very much😃...keep readin n commentin...it just makes my day..😃


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