FF Turnaround-2. CH 30 Updated PG125 (14th Dec) COMPLETED* - Page 22

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

@bold - my thoughts exactly I love torturing people who aint good with me 🤣 (scratch that i dont wanna scare you off 😆😆)

Originally posted by: cherryfrasier

i just hope you update soon. love it

Originally posted by: Applef

this is really awesome..

they are not divorced...

asad's reaction was really reasonable..

zoya's past about the divorce paper was so heart wrenching..💔

poor my little girl..

she was hoping him to come back to her...

and she tried to kill herself???😲

and the rest was so beautiful..

so they are gonna start afresh..

I'm so excited..

update soon..

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Wowww... Superb part dear... Loving the way you r moving the story n day by day i m loving it more... So they r nt divorced... N good that Asad knws how Zoya felt after he was gone... I dont knw what to say more... Bas I m in love with this story... U r a fantastic writer...
Thanx 4 d pm n do continue soon...


LOVE
~JAZ~

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 19...

ever since the passport info reveal... asad been deadly quiet...
Zoya knows... she needs to give explanation...

He comes asad outburst ... 😡

poor zoya... she did try to commit suicide ... so it never happen ,
she did not file for divorce.. 😭 😭

Asad to change things... to better...

Little bit sad update...

Originally posted by: jawria123

aww that was amazing. loved it

you expressed their emotions brilliantly.

sorry for being late😳. I was busy because of exams

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

update

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hello Aashna,

How are you doing? Okay now lets get to the point this spot was reserved for.

CONGRATULATIONS! 🥳😊

a VERY HEARTY Congratulations from my side on completing thread 1 of your story. 👏

Well you & this beautiful plot deserve much much more. I hope you know this story is one of my favorites. I know you do, by the size of my comments, you would have made that up by now, haven't you? if you've not, let me know, i'll increase the content of crap in my replies 😆.

well to be honest Aashna, this story has really glued me to itself. the initial chapters that I read together had me wanting for more & this continues with every chapter. Your capability as a brilliant writer is undoubted. You are just too good at words, one can easily visualize the scene, at least I can. So yeah here's a thumbs up for all the hard work you've put in to make this story worth all our love & interest.👍🏼 I hope you continue this story like forever.. 😊

Now coming to the words you had posted:

A long day ended with a silent thought...
A long thought ended with a silent hearts distraught.
This heart lost its vision, by looking too closely..
An emotion took over, the feeling of being lonely.
I have written so many words,
Married so many thoughts
But still it feels like a wait..
To write what my heart really wants.
I want to write music..
Sing the unsung song..
I want to dance like crazy..
Feel like myself, sure and strong.
(I want to write words with magic..
That transform into reality..
I want to draw my hearts desire..
Befriend my self made destiny.) Favorite no# 2
I am ready to walk, willing to fight...
Just to see my true self come back in sight.
(I accept that I am lost, but not that I have lost...) Fav.# 1
I agree that I am distracted, But not that disconnected.
Just want to fall in love again..
To the first step that will...
Take me back to those realities..
Where I will come back to me...

-Aashna
FIND YOURSELF;
ITS WORTH IT.

Now this is worth a huge applause 👏 & appreciation ⭐️. just too beautiful. what were you thinking when you wrote this? the way you described how a thought or particular thing in life takes over the whole emotions & one is lost. the heart's desire to get back to it's old good state. it's will to stand strong and take an initiative towards the step that will lead back to it's freedom. I know I am not able to convey my thoughts well enough like you have but believe me it really had touched my heart.

okay i'll give you a break from my bakbak & be back with comment on 17th part.

Till then Lots of Love ❤️

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Aashna,

So so sorry for being late. I know I should have unres this spot much earlier but you know I am a big lazy bum, so every time I read this part & re-read & then went away in my lala land, forgetting to post a reply.

Well here it is for chap 17 A:

Now coming again to the lyrics, they were just enough to let me know the summary of the whole part. it was just beautiful.

I knew Asad would be ashamed & guilty once his anger subsided & it did. but I really don't appreciate the way he hurts himself, it's so painful to see him hurting.💔

Zoe's reaction on seeing the blood trail was so normal. I mean of course she would panic thinking of him getting hurt. Her hug, tears & kisses all showed, how much ever they fight & accuse each other, their love will never reduce nor will it go away. I liked her dominating tone with Asad. he actually needs someone to rule him & set him straight.

Ayaan & Asad's convo was very needed, cause I was thinking why wouldn't Ayaan feel regret. I did, I felt in a way it was due to his inquisitiveness that Asad found the divorce papers again & had to go through all the trauma. all happened for the best but still. now I don't have any complains. his words explained what I wanted to hear from him. it was very natural of him to feel being left out on he details about his Bhaijaan's life. the way he explained his point & asked him to make it up with Zoe & consider the second chance was just too good. keep it up Ayaan.👍🏼

Zoe is too much at times. she really loves testing asad's patience. I mean she did feel bad after reading his sorry but then decides not to answer it back. waisey he deserves it in a way.

Asad- Dilshaad convo. I really loved it. so so good. I appreciate the way Dilshaad made him understand & ponder over why Zoe must have taken such a decision. To take care of her & love her like before as she deserves nothing less.

Asad's thoughts were exactly what Zoe thought of it to be. he considers his mother to be his guide. he wouldn't be able to tolerate that she was the reason of his misery when all he ever expected from her was happiness.

I am so glad for Asad having accepted his feelings for Zoe, clear & loud. 😃

Okay coming to my favorite part. I was just so lost after reading this. I so love this naughty Asad. he really must have been a treat to watch & behold when they were together. oh how I wish for them to get back together . his making up took my heart away. he really is not a less nautanki then what Zoe is. The kiss... gosh... just too good to be real. I so loved the way he asked her with a challenging tone for forgiveness. 😛

Chap 17 B:

Now there was a reason why I took long for this chap's response. it was because I was confused about whom to support. I read how Asad did his level best to make it upto Zoe & gain her forgiveness. trying to do everything she loved, from pampering her to making her feel loved. but then there was Zoe, who wasn't melting with anything. she did enjoy the shower of love on her but then her out burst. it made me so confused & somewhat heart broken. I couldn't make out who was right & who wasn't. then later I managed to understand that both of them are very much right at their places..

So lets start with the part. It was so sweet & adorable of Asad to have arranged breakfast for Zoe, then kissed her hard in front of his family. this guy seems to forget everything in front of her. I loved Zoe's response. she was flustered yet her cheapo comment made me roll.

Okay I really never thought Asad would do this. I knew that this shoot thing was arranged by Asad but I never thought he would recreate the whole thing that once occurred between them. So Zoe doesn't like how he got the details about their moment in front of everyone, hun?? the moment was just too intense. Their love seems to over take every other emotion when they come in close contact & rest goes into oblivion.

I knew no body would be in the washroom, of course Asad wouldn't wan't anyone to watch their private moment. but I agree with Ayaan, doing all this to get her forgiveness? Both are crazy.

It was extremely sweet of Asad to get everything ready & set for Zoe to use as per her likes before she woke up. I guess roaming around in shorts was a bit too torturing. u know you've no choice to be together, watch him & yet not have him 😉.

okay but then Zoe's outburst just ruined the whole thing.

Asad's realization was good but yet painful. he thought she wasn't his & not somebody whom he loved. but it's good he left it all to Allah, I hope it gets better with time.

Okay lots of love...🤗

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Aashna,

I really can't thank you enough for bringing them together once again. I seriously couldn't help jumping & clapping after I read the update, like really. it just made me so so happy. 😃

I'll be replying in detail with my bakbaak by tomorrow, for now lots of love & hugs for this. 🤗🤗