AsYa Drabble ~ Kisses - Page 10

Originally posted by: Komal_gill

very well done monica👏 par kya fayda serial mein toh hua nahin😭 I really wish that if u were the story writer of qubool hai then we would have so many asya moments😉

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Sooo beautiful...

Hug worthy...🤗

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

What chappals and tomatoes...that was a great piece of writing Monica

Originally posted by: me2you

No tomatoes, no chappals, no eggs, no pillows, no shoes and no bullets for you...

Lekin what for you?

A chocolate cake, flowers, balloons, food, drinks, ice cream, lots of sweets (gulab jamuns and jalebis, back off those are for me) and super duper big hug 🤗 Only for you!!!

Oy! I like gulab jamun and jablebis too 😭 😆 But I shall return your hug! 🤗

The last two paragraphs were just... 😳

Especially these ones:

He wrapped his arms around her waist

He lightly trailed her neck, her ear lobe with soft kisses

sweet kiss on her soft skin

kissing her cheek again and again

Kabhi kabhi meri dreams mein bhi aisa kuch ho jata hain...

I know exactly how you feel yaar! Yeh to mere dreams se hi aaya hai 😆

Okay, that was too much information...

🤣 Not at all! Just enough! 😆😉

Signing off now 😊

Chikni!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Omg this is beautifully written and so perfect
Love every bits of it

Originally posted by: teddyyy

Hiii, omg I loved it! I'm gonna be the nerdy IB student I am and use the term kinesthetic imagery- it was beautifully portrayed. I visualized each and every friggin move of theirs man! And whatever Zoya felt I swear my heart was fluttering too! She intensity yet adorable little kisses were awesome sauce! I truly enjoyed reading it, and I wish something like this had happened too! But at the same time I guess the simplicity of Zoya's kiss appealed to me too (: BUT HEY LOVING THE ROMANCE you showed! <333 my favorite part was the hide and seek awwws and Asad's signature half smile made me smile too :'D

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

Ohmygosh. 😲 That was so CUTE!

This is seriously one of my fave works of yours now! 😃 I LOVE IT!

Keep up the great work! ❤️

-Fari 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

I have told you earlier..I am telling you again! You need to come to India and start working for 4lions!!

p.s- I saw this diwali episode just yesterday and the Asad's pony ruined it for me! I can't believe I skipped an AsYa song sequence ...I am blaming the pony for it!!😡

Originally posted by: mochhug

AWW thanks 😳 😳 😳

And I know how you feel I watched it to see something positive after avoiding the show for two weeks. But yeah, the pony really ruined it. Plus her saree was fugly. I'm sorry. I did not like it. And the steps weren't amazing. It could have been so much better.