AsYa Drabble ~ Kisses - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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What chappals and tomatoes...that was a great piece of writing Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago
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No tomatoes, no chappals, no eggs, no pillows, no shoes and no bullets for you...

Lekin what for you?

A chocolate cake, flowers, balloons, food, drinks, ice cream, lots of sweets (gulab jamuns and jalebis, back off those are for me) and super duper big hug 🤗 Only for you!!!

The last two paragraphs were just... 😳
Especially these ones:
He wrapped his arms around her waist
He lightly trailed her neck, her ear lobe with soft kisses
sweet kiss on her soft skin
kissing her cheek again and again

Kabhi kabhi meri dreams mein bhi aisa kuch ho jata hain...

Okay, that was too much information...

Signing off now 😊

Chikni!!! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg this is beautifully written and so perfect
Love every bits of it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hiii, omg I loved it! I'm gonna be the nerdy IB student I am and use the term kinesthetic imagery- it was beautifully portrayed. I visualized each and every friggin move of theirs man! And whatever Zoya felt I swear my heart was fluttering too! She intensity yet adorable little kisses were awesome sauce! I truly enjoyed reading it, and I wish something like this had happened too! But at the same time I guess the simplicity of Zoya's kiss appealed to me too (: BUT HEY LOVING THE ROMANCE you showed! <333 my favorite part was the hide and seek awwws and Asad's signature half smile made me smile too :'D
Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Ohmygosh. 😲 That was so CUTE!
This is seriously one of my fave works of yours now! 😃 I LOVE IT!
Keep up the great work! ❤️
-Fari 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Ummm Monica? Did you want to give me a heart attack?? This is so so so beautiful!!! Haaayyeee you totally sent me to AsYa dreamland ( where i stay 99% of the time, i think 😆 ) The way you describe their feelings and reactions, its just amazing! You sure have a way with words! Loved this drabble to bits! And stop asking people to throw shoes, you won't be getting any 😆


Hahaha sorry hun 😳

Thank you!!! I'm so happy you liked it 😳 And thank you for the lovely compliment

🤣 You know me yaar, so insecure about my writing. I never think it's all that good, and then all your guys comments make me so proud of ti 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Maheerah

For this drabble you don't deserve ALDO kay shoes but some great big hugs and kisses!

🤗🤗🤗


Thanks babes! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

This is just awesome. So beautiful.


Thanks Raj 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-

This was so sweet and hot and cute! Romance issey kehte hain!

I wish this had happened in place of that song sequence.
Absolutely loved it! ❤️


Thanks hun! Me too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Hey Moni.. Sorry for the late comments!


Fantastic Drabble! I so wish this could happen in the show!

Loved it! ❤️


Aww no worries Mrina 😳 Thank you!!! 😃🤗

And mee tooo

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