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aashiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

FB scene was touchng..he remembr it seeing zoya..

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-Shormi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

hey ankita i'hv been reading ur FF 4 quite a sumtym now bt dis is da 1st tym i'm commenting😳
da way u hv written it is so overwhelmingly hrttouching❤️...& i'm so proud 2 b ur reader coz u describe each & every scene wid so much perfection dat i cn feel its happening vividly infront of my eyes👏
4rm 2day i'm officially in luv wid aahana...such a cutie she is
AsYa kitchen & bathroom interactions were fab😉

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: akaswan
RES 😃

Awww thank you for this udapte

My baby Aahana is so cute

I feel really bad for Asad i hope that he will realise soon that Zoya is there for him and Aahana

And Zoya is has feeling for Asad

Continue soon please

And awesome udapte

It has been years of feeling insecure and scared of being too close to anyone, it'll take something big enough to jerk out of those thoughts too 😊 But it'll happen sometime.

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-Anku-

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
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unres

it was cute part n it was for aahana lovers... Thanks for making it aahanalicious update...loved how aahana was playing with zoya in the mrng with her legs...aanu's bathing part was really very cute n she got her first tooth also...mr knhan trying to cook n messed kitchin...
Loved how zoya tended asad's burnt hand n asad's taunts afterwards...
Aww it was sad to hear abt asad n ayesha in that memory kane os asad... He wanted his n her life to be completed but dont worry now zoya will fill both of them with colours n which she is doing her unknowingly...
Asad n zoya r now coming closer as we saw how zoya was staring at asad when their fall down...
Update soon n thanks for the pm.

Thanks so much for liking <3 I am glad Aahana lovers enjoyed it, hopefully you guys will even enjoy the Aahana less parts if there are any, which is unlikely 😆

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-Anku-

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: Amulya9
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yippee I'm third 😊
such a cuteee update...I really love aahana...aanu's bathing part was soo cute..u narrated it so well...I could imagine my KaBhi...asad's flashback made me sad..BT that's k our Zoya is there 2 complete him n make his life even more colorful

YES she will complete his life in every way, just if she and then him both realize that soon 😛

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-Anku-

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...
Such a cute update
I just love Aahana
She is so adorable

Thanks so much 😊

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-Anku-

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: treasure11
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE
THEY LOOKED LIKE A CUTEE HAPPY FAMILY
THE FALL AND THE MITWA MOMENT WAS LOVELY 😳
AND THEN AAHANA'S BATH WAS SOO FUN
THAT TOOK US TO ASAD'S AND AYESHA'S LIFE IN FLASHBACK..SO SHE WAS AN ORPHAN TOO ..
MY THOUGHTS TOOK ME SOME OTHER WAY WHEN AAHANA SAID MUMMM...MUMM...😆
SHE HAS REALLY FOUND A FRIEND IN ZOYA
DILSHAD AND NAJMA ...ARE THEY COMMING BAKC TONIGHT😆

Mum mum was for food 😆

And yes Ayesha was an orphan too and since Zoya also has a painful past that is also a reason Asad will connect to her more, because he can relate to himself and even Aahana there. 😳

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Thanks so much for liking <3 I am glad Aahana lovers enjoyed it, hopefully you guys will even enjoy the Aahana less parts if there are any, which is unlikely 😆

no i will then also like it if there is less Aahana but when Aahana is there its lovely to see asya around Aahana taking care of here 😳😆

when r u updating next ankie😃

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-Anku-

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: fanraya
Wow amazing heart warming update, Beautiful piece of writing, you are really an amazing writer,🤗 loved Zoe and Asad's encounter, Ahana's bathing, so lovely, I am in love with your story, even after a long update I feel like reading more, superb. Please update soon.. Eagerly waiting..

Thank you so much 🤗 I love writing it a lot too, only if I got more time.