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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Awesome udapte continue soon please😃

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Dude I was waiting for your comment. You weren't around last few updates I was wondering where you disappeared.

Well not just high school sweetheart, they grew up together 😆 Gave too much away 😆
Asad and Aahana are my sweethearts 😳
Asad Zoya and Aahana will bond some more and so will the family, the mood is sullen for all of us, so the next few updates intend to be mostly towards a higher note.

So glad you commented 🤗

Sorry for being late but with all this happening on forum, me in stress of Oh-God-my-exams-are-coming, I forgot to comment... lol

Oh, ya but as you said you have something is mind that close to what I thought but not what I thought...😃 lol Haha, You did gave away a lil bit more than I though you will but I am now more curious about their married life, as I am sure are many others...😳

Oh, they are, aren't they...?? I am just in love with them...

Ahh, sullen doesn't cover it, it doesn't...But Yeee, I am happy and excited for the next update...!!!

Haha, you start with "Dude" and end it with being so formal...😆 So formal it is...The pleasure is all mine, Miss Ankita...!!! 🤗 LOL

Edited by A.Hajnal - 11 years ago

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Sorry for being late but with all this happening on forum, me in stress of Oh-God-my-exams-are-coming, I forgot to comment... lol

Oh, ya but as you said you have something is mind that close to what I thought but not what I thought...😃 lol Haha, You did gave away a lil bit more than I though you will but I am now more curious about their married life, as I am sure are many others...😳

Oh, they are, aren't they...?? I am just in love with them...

Ahh, sullen doesn't cover it, it doesn't...But Yeee, I am happy and excited for the next update...!!!

Haha, you start with "Dude" and end it with being so formal...😆 So formal it is...The pleasure is all mine, Miss Ankita...!!! 🤗 LOL

LOL I won't be formal then, just keep commenting, its always good to get a response 😆

LOL definitely you had to be close to what Asad and Ayesha really shared because you had a huge list of options. 😆

Yeah of course sullen doesn't even begin to cover it, but for now its better if I underplay how bad it all is. We're only left with the imaginary world we have

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blessing-beauty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

YAYAYAY Update 🥳Shall readd after eggjams 🤓

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Radhika

@chainreaction.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#305

WOAAAH update ;O hum reserve karte hai

OKAY i shall comment here for part 7 and 8 lol sorryyy i got delayed, i barely ever come to IF :| i loved when Zoya said aap apne akdu abu ko jaanti ho na 🤣 awww the scene with them both playing in the water was so so adorable i couldn't stop smiling! Zoya is so caring and so motherly. I wonder what happened in the past which was similar to this that made Asad so worried. And what did he mean by kahi aap...so intrigued about Asad's past. You know even though i don't watch qh anymore (duh) i love reading your FF cos it gives me old QH feels ajdakslj, i can picture Asad, Zoya and Aahana so vividly and love how Asad always has a huge outburst and then realises he's wrong and goes to apologise like in QH lmao.

Felt so bad for Asad when he was talking about losing people ;( my poor baby, what has made him like this? I also love how Aahana has warmed up so much to Zoya and wanted to be in her arms even though she takes time to get used to people. OMG OMG OMG OMG W*FFF i so did not see that coming 😲 WOAHHH she was kidnapped :| IT ALL MAKES SENSE, why Asad is so overprotective of her. omg can't even imagine what they all must have gone through woah that was such a shocker.

OKAY now part 8..i can't get over how cute the little AsYa moments are. How Asad asks her if she's just here to sit in his room and she gets so nervous hahaha it's adorable! and waaah, Zoya asking him if she can talk lmao when its usually the other way round 🤣 I LOVE Zoya's little gestures like just putting her hand on his shoulder to comfort him..it's these little things that made me fall in love with them and i love how you describe it so well. I can feel my heart breaking for Asad, he's been through so much and when he was sobbing i wanted to go and hug him :( Love how he's opening up to Zoya slowly.

I LOVE AAHANA AND ASAD..how Aahana needs her abu when she's crying is so adorable and the way she says BU askdjalskdj..i can picture that in my head so well sighhh really wanna see KSG play a dad in a show. The introduction line Zoya said made me laugh so much 🤣 IT IS SO LIKE asad to ask such a dumb question and Zoya to reply like that omg you're making me really nostalgic and remember old qh moments. that last scene made me laugh so much LMAO AND WELCOMEEE AYAAAN.

Anku Manku, you're such an amazing writer :| i can't even asklasjdasjdas the way you show AsYa, their emotions, dialogues is so freaking perfect

Edited by kajen_hamesha - 11 years ago

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bulou2013

@bulou2013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Awesome update...luvd deir asya convo ad 2wards da last part asad finally lettin go ad trustin zoya but I hope dat zoya ad princess bond while being alone...

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kanika

@kank_dah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#307

wow.the issues between zoya nd asad solved.asad trying to trust zoya, nd zoya having some feelings I assume.amazing update

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#308

Nice update :) Glad to see that Asad trusts Zoya with Aahana.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

LOL I won't be formal then, just keep commenting, its always good to get a response 😆

LOL definitely you had to be close to what Asad and Ayesha really shared because you had a huge list of options. 😆

Yeah of course sullen doesn't even begin to cover it, but for now its better if I underplay how bad it all is. We're only left with the imaginary world we have

Haha...much better...!!! 😆 I will, I will...🤗

See, That shows how much I think about your fic and Asad...😳 (Other than the fact that I have habit of thinking all the wild and logical scenarios possible...🤣 LOL)

I know...I agree...Ahh, but you guys, our writers can do wonders for us with the ability of yo to write and show us how you imagine Asya...!!!