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Posted: 11 years ago
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A/N: Hi folks! This idea came to me after watching an embarrassing home video!🤣

I wrote this in like 2 minutes..

Here goes nothing!

"Oh GOD!" she panted.

He grunted in response to her noises; letting her know that he knew how she felt but never letting the connection break or stop their movements.

"A-asad! Please, I can't take it anymore! Please!" she begged, her body shining with a thin layer of sweat.

"Hold on for a second, babe," Asad sped up his movements to get them to the peak quicker. His quicker actions caused Zoya to groan and let out embarrassingly loud noises.

"Almost there, Zoya! Hold on!" Asad grunted and pulled himself up.

They had finally reached the climax. Asad looked at Zoya and smiled.

"See, it wasn't that bad now was it?"

Zoya snorted but it came out funny due to her breathlessness.

"Say it for yourself, Mr. Six-packs. I am dead beat. Gah! I am so sweaty. Now, help me out of these bounds."

Asad chuckled and helped her untie the rope around her waist; the one he had tied to make sure they did not get separated.

"It's a good thing I love you, Asad. But I am never going on a mountain hike with you again."


A/N: 🤣

Yeah, that's all I have to say!

Let me know what you thought of it - honest replies please!😆

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KulfiBai thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pure genius is all I have to say 🤣
WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣

You should have had added Long Pause Breaks for the GREATER TRUTHS before their Revelation 🤣
aashiqua thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what al had ma dirty mind imagind? And d end...good one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great work, Sherlock🤣
i was soo looking forward for something else, then i saw the word "rope"--ohkay...they must have "done" that in a more exciting way. Just then..BAAAM!🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i almost thought sonething exciting readibg the word 'rope' but then 'mountain hike' just made me crash down to earth.
good one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice...way to lead on...then boom...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So good! But I agree with Ankie! A little panting and pause before the "That wasn't so bad" would have made it more gutter and confusing 😆

Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ROPE

Thnkng sumthng else till da ROPE wrd comes...lolZzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intihaa hogai double meaning ki. 😆👍🏼

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