#4|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 18 to Chp 22) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: elenaa

Res!

unres...u know i had actually planned to unres this after diwali but i managed to get some alone time as i was dying to read this update as i was stuck at BUT of the last update😉

first of all...

new thread!!!party time!!!!!🥳🥳wooohooo!!!!!!!!im so happyyy!!!!😃

and you mentioned my name...thank you so much...you are such a sweetheart! im flattered!😳
*hugs you very tightly*

and its because of your brilliant stories that we have got yet another thread of our very own CUPID STRIKES😃

okay so now about the update...here are my comments...

ALL ABOUT FEAR...the title was very apt as usual👏

Zoya took a deep breath and said "But I can't forgive you for breaking my trust in you. I can't forgive you for making me feel that if I come close to you I'll only be shattered."

yipeee...i guessed it rite that she wud say something like that...poor zoe😭

"No person is a born criminal and no crime is such that can't be forgiven. The crime should be punished and not the criminal. You just did a wrong thing and now you want to fix it so you deserve a chance. I forgive you for your crime but we can't be together as one because my brain won't let me agree to it. Over the years I have managed to overpower my heart to a huge extent" said Zoya in one go and walked away from where they stood back into the casino.

im just in awe of these lines because wat she said is absolutely true!

she may hav managed to overpower her heart till now but not anymore because here we are talking about THE ASAD AHMED KHAN⭐️

He couldn't take tears in her eyes and if he tried to come close to her he would be the reason for them.

what an irony this is😭

Rashid pulled Asad into a hug and between his sobs said "I am craving to hear abbu' from you."

aww...these lines melted my heart...finally asad got back his abbu...this was the highlight of the update for me😃

"Fear" said Rashid making Asad look at him and then he continued "Fear of an unknown thing is what you need to drive away from your and her heart."

well said i mean well written👏😆

"That was not your last case. You and Zoya are going to India to sort stuff out" spoke Rashid winking at his son.

Asad understood what stuff his dad meant to sort out.

thank youu so much rashid...he is just so amazingg😊

"Zoya won't go with this guy" shouted Ayaan jumping in between the conversation.

i really wud like to name ayaan as the buzzing bee...always intruding but since he is her best friend this was expected😉

Ayaan smiled and said "That is because I know you better than you know yourself so just a little protective of you."

"Little! That is an understatement" spoke Zoya laughing and hugging her best friend.

totally agreed wid zoya🤣

Zoya was standing on the bed and quivering with fear and on seeing Asad jumped into his arms.

Asad was lost in the moment while Zoya was just looking at the cockroach.


Arjun tried to control his laughter and said "How can someone and especially Zoya be afraid of a tiny little cockroach?"

"You don't even think that an officer like me could be afraid to shoot a gun" shot back Riya shutting Arjun up.

😆 this was damn cute n funny!

Asad nodded but finally understood what his father had meant. He needed to throw his and Zoya's fear out that he will hurt her again.

i was wondering tat why the whole cockroach part was der but then i got it tat it was for asad to realise the gravity of wat rashid had told him😛

After reciting her story, Riya asked "What about Asad and your story?"

"We are just good friends" replied Zoya curtly.

phewww atleast she said good friends😆

the whole convo of asya in zoya's room at night was just FABULOUS...and the song was just like a cherry on top...wow moment of the update❤️

"Well we are not technically colleagues as you are still not back on the team. Friend is a word that defines two people who trust each other and can count on each other. Lovers was a never a word that defined us. And lastly I don't think we are strangers" replied Zoya not looking in Asad's eyes.

Arjun nudged him to ask as to where Asad was lost but he just shook his head as he himself did not know exactly how much he was lost in Zoya's love.

wow!again these lines were superb!👏

asad helped zoya drink water and even fed her...some asyalicious moments in this update as well...yipeee

riya got the letter A on zoya's hands...again happy dance⭐️

Zoya decided to go by majority which was Asad's choice and went inside the changing room to get back to her normal clothes. If things would have been normal then she would have blushed when Asad would have complimented her but her nights as well as days were full of loneliness. A tear escaped her eyes as she thought of this.

😭😭 hopefully asad sorts out everything soon by removing the FEAR!


awesome update as usual Mahi...i m just so glad tat i came across thiss ff and met you...🤗❤️

love you!lots of hugs🤗


You deserved the shoutout

You are a brilliant reader

I love you and this comment of yours

I am glad you loved the cockroach part

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

loved it...so painful ..but love is still in d air

pari


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aashiqua

with rashid too on his side... Anywy congo 4 nw thread


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Applef

so finally rashid also forgive asad already...


the whole smf team are so adorable..

they tease each other, love each other...😛

now, there are another 2 cupids involved in patching up our love birds..😉

hope they succeed...

they are really trying to get them closer...

love the cockroach part so much...😆

update soon..


I am so glad you enjoyed it



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KReyAS

congrs fr nw thread

lovely updt
i love ariya and asya scenes


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manognasai

Nice update...
Zoya cudnt forgive him and give him a chance as she is afraid that he will leave her again!😭
Now Rashid also forgiven Asad😃 and helping him to get back Zoya!
Hope AsYa re-unite soon...
waiting for next part!update soon...


They will re-unite soon like in the show

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm update.
Luvd it.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...1234

loved it..great n awesum update

continue soon n pm me


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