{|AsYa/KaBhi SS| ~Serendipity~} (Part3-Pg33+Note-Pg47) :) - Page 31

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

i dint knw about ds one.. Oh, well, now you know! 😆
will luv to read all prts.. Thank you. It always feels good to gain new readers. 😳
thnx for d pm..😊😊 You're welcome! <3

Originally posted by: -ShwSha-

So I kinda forgot what happened. (AHEM Because of such FREQUENT updates AHEM) Naw, jk. So I'm just gonna reread it and post my live reactions: First two sentences: 😕😆

Lol. Yay! Long comment from Shwetz! 🥳

I smiled at free cookie. I want a free cookie. Me too. Hehe.

Smooth vanilla ice-cream. Damn girl you need to calm yoself with the sweets. I WANT ICE CREAM NOW. But aww, I loved that last line "When Asad met Zoya" I know. I have a problem with the sugar. 😆 Really? I'm glad I put that ending, then. I just came up with it randomly, lol. My chapters always end weirdly. 😕😆

They bumped into each other and fell into le grass. Can I cue the Bolly music. Pleej. That was so cheesy, bleh. 🤢😆

I love how you bold the serendipity components. Sho cute my Fari, <-- 😳😳

Dimples. I LOLed, how cute Aw, stop. I'm becoming Tamatar. 😳😳

Gray, see I wish I did that. But I'm just so accustomed to the Brit version. Idk I find it fancier, my teachers used to mark me off for that. But in this context, I also would prefer "gray" as opposed to "grey." IDEK why I mentioned that. Oh, wow. I never know whether to use the "e" or the "a", but I just do "a". I didn't know which one was considered correct in the US, tbh. 😆 BTW, I don't think my teachers care. 😆 But then again, there's your writing compared to mine, so yeah. 😆

AWWW HE WATCHED HER TALK TO HER PARENTS. MY FEELS. <- I'm so glad that I gave you feels. :')

OMG WHAT SHE'S IN THE HOSPITAL. OH YEAH I REMEMBER NOW. FARI YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO MY FEELS. FIX HER NOW. Relax, she'll be FINEEE. ;)

Part 2

Awwie, they met several times after that! This SS just proved that I do need fluff sometimes and ugh this is so cute I love it. Really? :O I'm glad this is okay for you, because I can't write anything but fluff. 😆 I can never, ever, write about emotions or serious stuff like that. 🤢

Aw le kiss! LE KISS! <- 😳

OMG FARI WAKE THE GODDAMN ZOYA UP. NOW. CALM DOWN. 😳

Part 3

Insomniac. I feel. Same. :|

Indian Aunty, spanish soap opera, that's a first. I know, I don't even know what I was thinking. 😆

"Orb" Tally - I I <-- 😳

KJDAFKSDJFKAHDF SHE'S AWAKE! She better not "lose her memory" else I swear Fari I will... I will write something in which Asad gets married to Tanveer and Zoya gets married to Najma's husband's brother. And I'll call the character who causes this "Fari" just you know by chance. Mmmhmmn Yikes. You scary. 😕 Now I know to never upset you Shweta. 😆 Seriously though, why does everyone think Zoya will lose her memory? Am I really that cliched? 😕

Ok overall, I love your cutesy whimsical writing style. It was cute and beautiful and just what I needed and you Fari are going to grow into a beautiful mature writer someday <3 Thank you, a billion times THANK YOU, Shwetzy. <3<3 It especially means a lot, coming from my favorite online writer (YOU!). You inspire me so much. :') Thank you so much. 😳😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: lDirectionerl

You just did not STOP there, Fari 😡 Oh yes I did. Mmmhmmm. 😎 😈

And if she looses her memory then I'm going to come all the way there (wherever you live) and give you a piece of my mind 😈 WHY DOES EVERYONE THINK THAT SHE'S GOING TO LOSE HER MEMORY?! Sorry 'bout that. I'm just a litttlllee frustrated. 😆😆

And UPDATE soon or else I'll die here 😆 I will. One month soon enough? 😆

Love you, Yamini. 🤗 And I know you love me too. Teehee. 😳 😉 😆😆

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice update..😊

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Hi Fari ,, Hello! :)

I read this SS finally as I found it shortest right now 😆 but as soon as part 3 ended I feel like reading more ! Actually, I have two that are shorter, but I kind-of gave up on them. 😆 I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. 😳

Its amazing and beautifully written ,, Thank youuu so much. <3

The best scene was the rain one and the way she watched lion king with him <-- 😳

AsYa are the cutest here ,, Thanks. I try. 😆

Hope she is fine now as she is awake ,, Yup, she'll be fine. (:

Update sooon as I am eagerly waiting to see what happens next 😉 I will! One month soon enough? 😆

Originally posted by: jawria123

Finally you updated Yeah. 😆

so beautiful and amazing update Thanks so much. 😳

Loved it so much. And that makes me so happy. :D

continue soon. I will. (:

And please update your all stories soon Hm, we'll see. 😆

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

OHHH YAYYY for cupcakes...u finally updated Fari🥳...i was starting to wonder you had stopped writing...but definitely glad u see you beautiful words...😃 Reyaaa! 🤗 Don't worry, I didn't stop! 😆 Thanks! <3

Really loved this chapter...full of emotions...joy, love, sorrow, guilt..all expressed beautifully..

Particularly love the flashback scene when Zoe visits...the affection and pure love Asad has for Zoe shone thru..brought a smile to my face.. That is just so sweet of you. 🤗 I love your purple comments, they're beautifully written, and I JUST LOVE 'EM! AND YOU! 😃 ❤️ I feel so happy that it's all coming from such a talented writer and dear friend like yourself! 😳

And the last accident scene left equally saddened...the guilt consuming Asad is literally eating him...and leaving him in pain that is felt every second..truly felt for him.. Yeah. You describe it so well. <3

But...SHE'S AWAKE..omgg..all i can think is please let her memory be intact...i don't know why i just seem to have a bad feeling that the worse is yet to come.. EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE. She won't lose her memory, don't worry! 😆

Great work Fari🤗 Thank you, Reya! 🤗 🤗

Love

Reya <3 Love, Fari! 😆 <3

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

Lovely story
Update soon pls

Pari

Originally posted by: cutiesanya

Needed to rewind my memory to
Comprehend it. It was really very
Emotional

Originally posted by: Sarah_Asya_Arhi

Love LOve LOve!