AsYa TS: One Year...Is It??? Last Part Page 16

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Hello beautiful people!

First of all happy birthday to our Qubool Hai...and AsYa!

It's been only eight months that I started watching Qubool hai...and now Qubool hai has completed one year! It is only one year...and I feel like I know AsYa, I know all the characters of Qubool hai for ages!

Here's wishing the whole cast and crew of Qubool hai many many happy returns of the day...and may Qubool hai keep ruling many hearts for years to come!

Here's an Three Shot on this special occasion! Hope you all enjoy!


Chapter 1 page 1

Chapter 2 page 7

Chapter 3 page 16

One year...isn't it? It has been one year since he last lived life...one year since he last felt human...one year since he last smiled...one year since he last went to gym and beat people, to maintain his six packs...one year since he last touched a person...one year since he last saw HER!

Yes! One year ago, Asad Ahmed Khan lost his sole reason of existence, his life, HIS ZOYA...whom he couldn't make HIS!!!

One silly misunderstanding...and his soul left his body...forever...vowing never to return back to him ever again!

Sitting in the balcony of his hotel room in Goa, Asad couldn't help but go back to the incident that happened one year ago...the nightmare he lived through everyday...the doom that descended upon his life and ruined everything...exactly one year ago!

One Year Back: Bhopal Mazaar: Morning

Several eyes turned in the direction of an SUV that just arrived at the mazaar. People stared as the man of every girl's dream, the most eligible bachelor of the town got down from the SUV dressed in Armani suit and glares perching on his nose. Everything about the guy screamed intelligence and grace. After all he was the ASAD AHMED KHAN!

Asad looked straight and made his way towards the mazaar, with a faint smile playing on his lips...revealing two small dimples on his cheeks.

Asad was in a happy mood that day. Why shouldn't he be? After all he was getting his Zoya back that day! After staying fully awake for the whole night, he had come to a decision. He had decided that he couldn't stay without his Zoya anymore. After getting endless flashbacks of Zoya pleading him to take her back to him, he had decided to go straight to SM, after dropping by the mazaar, on the same day. But he hadn't told her anything as he wanted to surprise her. After all he knew very well about how much his MsFarooqui loved surprises!!!

As Asad made way to the mazaar, his mind drifted to an event that took place in the same mazaar exactly one year ago. Exactly one year ago he was in the same mazaar...and God gifted him the sight of his most beautiful angel! It had been exactly one year ago that the hurricane' Zoya had entered his life!!

Earlier may be Asad cursed God for bringing Zoya to his life...but now he couldn't thank him enough! Because simply Zoya was his life now.

Asad may have turned away from her on that day, the first day he laid his eyes upon her...but today it was gonna be different. Today he was gonna claim her as HIS, today he was gonna hold her in his arms, forever.

Till death do us apart!

...murmured Asad as he entered the mazaar.

As Asad looked at the same spot he had spotted her one year ago...to say he was shocked would be an understatement! There she was, sitting in the same position, in the same color of a bridal wear, with same tears like pearl running down her face...looking as beautiful as ever! But this time, there was something else too. In addition to all these things, there was happiness on her face. Wide dimples dug into her face. It automatically brought smile upon Asad's face! As he made way towards her, his eyes landed upon Ayan coming and Asad made way towards his little brother! But before Asad could reach Ayan, there was their Dadi tugging Ayan and pointing Zoya's way with teasing smile. Asad saw Ayan smiling softly.

Dadi: Zoya aaj bahut khush lag rahi hai na?

Ayan[ smiling widely]: Jee Dadi, aaj who bahut khush hai!

Dadi: Kitni pyaari bachhi lag rahi hai nahin?

Ayan: Dadi woh bachhi hi hai! Ek bahut hi pyaari bachhi...Aapko ushke nakhron ke bare mein nai pata!

Ayan shook his head and moved in Zoya's direction...and Asad eyed him with happiness! Asad looked at Zoya proudly. Only she could do it...impress anybody in no time!

Before Asad could move forward, he heard Dadi and Shireen taking of something he couldn't believe in his ears

Dadi: Pata hai Shireen, mujhe toh aabhi poora yakeen hai ki Ayan Zoya se muhabatt karta hai! Dekha nahin kitni pyaar se uski baatein karr raha tha!

Shireen: Lekin Zoya...woh toh Asad se pyaar karti...

Dadi: ...thi! Maine use samjha diya hai! Aabhi Ayan uska sauhar hai, toh Asad ko ushe bhulna padega! Humein poora yakeen hai ki kuch din mein use bi Ayan se pyaar ho jaega!

Chalo hum bahaar chalet hain! Dono saath mein akele jitna pal bitayein, unke liye utna achha hoga!

Asad's face twisted in disgust, and he curled his fist to control his anger. Asad dashed out in opposite direction and punched hard on the wall. He tried to concentrate and urged his mind to think rationally.

In ten minutes, he was done! He was back to normal, and mentally slapped himself for not trusting his love. He knew Zoya viewed Ayan as nothing but a younger brother...and yesterday only she was urging him to take her away from there, right?

Asad made way back into the mazaar cursing himself for being so judgmental! Zoya was right! He was really way too short- tempered! Asad couldn't stifle a chuckle recalling the silly fights they used to have in past! But the happiness in his face soon transferred to shock, disbelief, hurt and anger at the sight before him.

There was his Zoya...in Ayan's arms, her face buried in his chest and his head buried in her neck...as both of them hugged each other tightly with smiles on their faces.

Asad's fist tightened further when he heard Zoya almost yelling...

You are the best Rabert!!! I love you!!!

How could she do this??? She was supposed to hug no one but him like that...she was supposed to say those words to no one but him! How could she do this???HOW???

Asad got flashbacks of all the short romantic memories they had together, of all the times she had told him that she couldn't live without him...of all the promises she had made to him!!! Didn't those things matter to her anymore??

She had never told those three magical words I love you' to him ever, although she claimed to be in love with him. She had never hugged him like that in public also...And yet there she was, hugging and saying those three magical words in public...to HIS BROTHER, not him!!!! Tears appeared in his eyes as he looked at the duo lost in their world of happiness. Asad was startled when Zoya shrieked

MR KHANNN!!!!!!!

And sprang out of Ayan's arms and ran towards him like a crazy woman! Asad's arms automatically moved upwards to take her in his arms...but as the flashbacks of Zoya signing the nikahnaama with Ayan , of Zoya being called MrsAyan Ahmed Khan, of Zoya taking care of a sick Ayan...and of Zoya hugging Ayan and yelling I LOVE YOU' kept coming, he curled his fists and stepped aside when she was about to collapse against him. Zoya eyed him scrutinizingly as he glared at her with eyes full of rage and hurt!

Zoya brought up her hand to touch his shoulder, but Asad moved away and turned to leave. Zoya held his wrist and said

MrKhan? Kya hua? Are you okay?Aap pareshan lag rahe hain!

Asad: Main jaisa bi lagoon aapko kya fark padta hai Ms...sorry MrsAyan Ahmed Khan?

Zoya:MrKhan!!! Aap jaante hain aap kya bol rahe hain?

Asad: Kyun...kuch galat kaha maine?

Zoya: Mr...

Asad: Dekhiye mujhe aapse rishta rakhne ka koi shauk nahin hai! Aap please mujhse door rahiye...aapne sauhar ke saath rukiye!

Ayan: Bhaijaan! Aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain?

Asad: Ayan kuch galat to nahin kaha na? Kyat um dono aabhi ek doosre ko hug nahin kar rahe the? Kya aabhi thodi der pahle Zoya ne saare duniya ke saamne eilaan nahin kiya ki who tumse pyaar karti hai?

Zoya, mujhe humesha humare pyaar be bharosa tha...but tumhe kabhi nahin! Aaj samjh mein aaya kyun! I hate you Zoya...And I was always right about you! Aap humesha se hi selfish thin!

Zoya: BUS MRKHANNN!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe ki mere MrKhan aise hain! Main bi aapke bare mein bilkul sahi thi MrKhan! Aap ek bahut hi narrow minded insaan the, hain aur humesha rahenge! And I hate you too...Mujhe aapki shakal aur kabhi nahin dekhni!!!

Saying this she strode away from him...from Bhopal...and from his life forever!

But she couldn't strode away from his heart...because her heart was locked away in his heart ...just as his heart was locked away in hers! That was the last time he saw her! HIS ZOYA!

Later on Asad came to know of why Zoya was hugging Ayan, about how happy she was about the fact that their marriage was never valid because the name in the community nikaah was wrong! It was Zoya Fareed, not Zoya Farooqui! About how happy she was about the fact that she was going back to her life...HER MRKHAN!!!!

Asad felt so ashamed of himself. He searched the whole town...and went to New York too! But he couldn't find her anywhere. Asad was a completely broken soul now...who did nothing but curse himself for what he did to Zoya!

Only if Allah would give him one more chance to see her...to set things all right...to get Asad and Zoya back as AsYa!!!!

But Asad knew this was never gonna happen because even God was angry with him for the injustice he had done to his angel...his most beautiful angel!!!!

Asad realized that he had come out of his hotel and walking in the beach now! As his feet touched the cold sand and as the cold wind blew across his face...Asad sank down on the sand and sobbed loudly...and controlled. One year of vented emotions, one year of loneliness and guilt, one year of living a dead man's life came out as loud uncontrolled sobs that boomed in the deserted beach...and went across in every direction!



okay guys that was the first chapter!

I wanted to write an OS, but it became so long!😒

Anyways, how was it?

Do leave your likes and comments!😳

Preeti!❤️🤗



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