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Posted: 11 years ago
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QH was one of the best shows, unqiune in it's own way until the accidental nikaah happened
And one would think why Cvs went ahead with a Zoyaan track despite the constant protest of the fans ..because the track has a purpose, a very big purpose indeed. Zoya is meant to be in the SM to find her father..the track is suppose to lead into the Abbu track..because only when the gaffiur truth is out, billo rani comes to an end and Razia's downfall begins..
But the Cvs chose the most stupid, most illogical way to plant Zoya into the SM..Zoyaan should have happened with ayaan and Zoe's consent, an contract of some sort but it should have had consent and a true purpose but alas ! the Cvs have managed to mangle characters and left the audience frustrated.

You are right..i don't think Nikhat should have been the catalyst for this ZOyaan track. And i think the Cvs never planned for it that way. The whole Namja-Nikhat-Imran triangle was sudden because looking back, Nikhat and Imran were developing a rather romantic relationship..and i just don't believe the bs of imran trying to love nikhat and forget namja...this was first step where the Cvs went wrong in my opinion.

And the ongoing deadlines...they actually fustrate me the most. The deadlines aren't meant to be met, zoya needs to stay in the SM longer then why dangle the carrot ? to get back your trp ? I don't understand the Cvs...if they started a track the audience didn't want in the first place..then ride out the whole track dammit...don't chicken out this way. Like i said, at the point, the cvs are confused, scared or just desperate. And the sudden reunion of asya (if it happens) will be the result of that

Zoyaan has happened ! and the accidental nikaah will have long lasting effects on all the characters, nothing will ever be the same. But i really hope the Cvs can find a way to salvage the show in way that sone the essence of it stays intact.

I realize there is a alot of repititon of my thoughts that we have already discussed but i was venting my frustration..lol😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant---you have voiced my thoughts so lucidly! It would have made so much sense to have Zoyaan team up to help Asad fight his demons but to make a mockery of marriage is a big nono!

as Maakigeet4ever says:
The whole Namja-Nikhat-Imran triangle was sudden because looking back, Nikhat and Imran were developing a rather romantic relationship..and i just don't believe the bs of imran trying to love nikhat and forget namja...this was first step where the Cvs went wrong in my opinion.

NIkhat from being the strongest person in the mad household where she stood upto Haseena and even
Ayaan /Asad ( in Haseena's house and then at SM) she is the one they chose to make a catylist! LOL

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Posted: 11 years ago
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could not agree more .
love ur post.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Right now more than Zoyaan, Asad sitting and doing nothing is more annoying to me. They r so adamant in keeping Tanveer that don't care if it's mocking Asad and even Razia, what respect we will have for these strong n crucial characters later to be played like a toy, not once but many, from dumb character like hers who has really nothing to carry her sham.

Hope they fix it first as it's mostly killing QH.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ek bahut simple explanation hai...with AsYa being accepted with open arms, they needed to change the original synopsis completely..because uske hisaab se Zoya and Ayaan were to get married first..Asad was to have no idea who Zoya was...basically they wanted to have their cake and eat it too...and they lost the cake only...so now they are trying to give this entire track some fitting ending because even in the actual original synopsis AsYa were endgame...and commercially...u don't have Massey as the lead when u have Grover in the same show...unless KSG decides to quit and Humz dies...there is no ZoYaan also...so all that the makers actually are, are dishonest storytellers..
Great post👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: euphoric

Yes... Zoyaan was to happen... It was there in the original synopsis and it was there in the symbolisms when the show began. So what went wrong??

Yes ZoYaan was always a part of the narrative.
It has been essential to the story that Zoya landed up in SM. One can solve mysteries and problems at its source and according to me that was why it was integral to the story to have Zoya in SM. But but but... even though it was so important, I was appalled the writers didn't create any solid grounds for the same. Instead of making Nikhat as a catalyst to Zoya and Ayaan track couldn't they revolve it around Asad? It would have been more sensible to see them teaming up for Asad after all he was the reason the rabert-mona chemistry began... The story would have made more sense and it would have been a whole different ball game. It would have been endearing to see them work together to help that one person who they both loved. The characters would have saved their dignity, they would have spared themselves from making mockery of marriage as an institution and we audiences wouldn't have had to face the insensitivity and irrationality of the whole track also in the process Zoya could unearth her own mysteries. The separation would have come, there would have been heartbreak but then we would have been more open to the whole concept.


Yes completely agree that Zoya needed to be in SM .What I feel is that since Asad and Zoya were so far ahead in their relationship that only separation could have been forced and circumstantial and accidental. Zoya chose Asad over finding out about her Abbu, also since Razia knows that Zoya is GS's daughter she would have kicked her out. Shireen and Badi B would not have supported Zoya had she not been Ayaan's wife . Humeira insecurities , jealousy will make her have a meaningful relationship with Zoya and hence ZoHu will start. ZoYaan will also lead to The end of Billi , because here at stake is Razia's daughter and that gives Razia enough will power to deliver.

But Alas they chose a wrong road. And in between lost their way... as it looks like the CVs were confused themselves with the whole fiasco and probably even nerved with the audience reaction.

I feel that it was the right road albeit a bumpy one because Zoya's entry in KV was random, her entry in SM was accidental, hence first hand experience without any preconceived notions and the Raaz being out

The next wrong move was the ever extending deadlines! It was like mocking in our faces and testing our patience levels even though we knew the deadlines here were not meant to be kept. Instead they could have moved on to what the track was meant for... In my opinion they were scared to hint permanency in Zoyaan even for the sake of drama. But then it makes me question what was the purpose of this whole sham? Why were we subjected to this heart-break and outcry if they didn't want to reveal anything vital? CVs, I seriously wish you answer these questions in the next week.

Zoyaan as per the original synopsis was not permanent , it was a just a catalyst . They are preserving AsYa by these dead lines. They want to show that AsYa left no stone unturned to unite but destiny had it's own way . ZoYaan is not yet over, I am very confident that it will serve its purpose. The whole is always greater than the sum of its parts.

The story of QH was complicated to begin with and they added more complications by adding more villains and with each new addition, the former gets more weird... Tanveer is a cheap character, yet she needs to tone down big time... I wonder why the directors are not pointing out that she's coming out irritating and OTT. Razia the ace - villain who always meant business is being silly. Let me not even begin with Haseena Bi and her psychopath son.

Razia has her hands tied, she was in for a rude shock, she is being silly because cvs cannot make her win as that would make Zoya return , which they don't want. Razia will use her trump card for Billi's demise. Tanu is OTT agreed because it sells for the masses. But I love to hate her, and her OTT thing will ultimately bring down Razia
I am not commenting on how Zoya will go back to KV, I'll rather wait to see how it unfolds. But there's another contention that says its only for a month. Ok... so similar to what had transpired during Tanveer - Asad SR fiasco when they took a month's leap, here they are bringing Zoya back. It seems its a temporary pain-reliever for us fans until they prove that the Nikah was never a valid one to begin with!

That I agree, it's for one year anniversary. But I am sure , it will lead to further movement of the story.

It's a fiction... the love story can't have a smooth sail to enhance the drama quotient and so AsYa had to cope up with the ups and downs... separation... pain and then bliss of being untied as one. Talking about the current track and not my wishful thinking... in any case... AsYa has to come together at last. Their relationship is at a stage that one has become the part of other and they need to overcome their short-comings and flaws and understand that nothing more is important than each other. Asad and Zoya are both scarred and cheated by their own people... their healing process automatically began when they came together. Her most important purpose of life fell on the back burner while he was changing for her. Without each other they can never be themselves. Their happiness lies in each other and they need each other to survive. So in my opinion we can't blame a single person for the mess and question whether one is worthy of another or not. Had it not been their fate... Zoya wouldn't have collided with the one man in whose house she was going to take shelter and then proceed to become the sole owner of his heart. And this relationship was and is too pristine and soul-rending to break them now.

Word !
But what I fear is at what cost are we going to get them back? While the characters have been damaged, I hope they don't fret with the sanctity of this association... because then it would hold no meaning. Ever since the Nikah fiasco they seem to be treading a very thin line on this ground. Though I am positive that neither Asad nor Zoya can ever fall for anyone else and would always come back to each other... I sure don't want the CVs inducing further harm to AsYa to prove this point coz that might prove to be the final blow.

That's what Gul is telling us everyday that this is not a valid Nikah, she did not complete even a single Rasm as a bahu. MaBurt is in fact maintains the scan tiny of AsYa. They are set , no one will touch them.

High Time Cvs! Put your thinking caps on and pull your act together to not only bring the story back on track but also to bring back the logic and rationality into the storyline that would justify your creative intelligence with which you began this show!


I personally think story is on track...

Luv,
Sonia 😳

I liked your post and more than that the tone of your post. You have some very valid arguments.
Edited by gossipgirlxoxo - 11 years ago

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